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ONWARD_Page-134_Ch-5 (Sketch)

It was hard to nail the perspective in the first panel, but I'm satisfied with how it came out. :'>

ONWARD_Page-134_Ch-5

A sleepy Tacoro remembers that he promised Meya that he'd get her food as he's wearing a nice new hat.

COMIC TIP!
Make your characters develop realistically. A really grumpy character can't turn on a dime. They could become friendlier over time, which makes it more believable.<...

ONWARD_Page-134_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Nothing was changed on this compared to the original! Tho, the leaf stayed on his head instead of falling off.

ONWARD_Page-133_Ch-5

Another transition page, nothing much to say here to be honest. I DID struggle with how the leaf was supposed to float down, I guess it counts.

Also, Tacoro is sleeping with his tongue out since he saw Meya doing it (although she's doing it involuterily, but he doesn't know of that).

2017-05-28 00:07:01 +0000 UTC View Post

ONWARD_Page-133_Ch-5 (Sketch)

On this page, we see a leaf falling down onto Tacoro's head.
Nothing was changed!

ONWARD_Page-132_Ch-5

Since I had no real sketch for this page, it'll be a treat for anyone pledging 1 USD! <3

There isn't that much to say about this one. :') It's meant to be a time-skip page where you see time passing. I had a few ideas for what to draw here. At first, I wanted to bring back the dove from the las...

ONWARD_Page-131_Ch-5

I've noticed that many people have started thinking that Meya and Tacoro is going to be a couple. I'll just be frank about it, it's not going to happen. Meya is about middle aged and Tacoro is just a kid. Their relation is that of a child and it's bis sister/mother, nothing more. On this page, we se...

ONWARD_Page-131_Ch-5 (Sketch)

This one is a little messy, but I'll explain what's happening. ^^ First, we have Tacoro who looks at Meya with a saddened expression. Then we see him lying down next to her in the last two panels. The great struggle of this page was to make them both look alike in size.

This oage wasn't changed fr...

ONWARD_Page-130_Ch-5

 Tacoro may be a happy-go-lucky character, but he has a caring side as well. He sees Meya as his older sibling/mother/friend so he's really concerned about her wellbeing. They may not have known each other for that long, but Tacoro's the type that bonds quickly.

COMIC TIP! 2017-04-17 00:46:59 +0000 UTC View Post

ONWARD_Page-130_Ch-5 (Sketch)

(I had some Photoshop issues and then i forgot about uploading, I'm visiting my family right now and I've been busy, sorry about the lateness! :'( )

This page wasn't changed from the initial sketch. ^^

ONWARD_Page-129_Ch-5

 Here we see how scatterbrained yet caring Tacoro really is. This page wasn't really planned, but I found it necessary since he needed to notice her somehow.

COMIC TIP!
The lines separating the panels are important! You don't have to make them straight, be experimental wit...

ONWARD_Page-129_Ch-5 (Sketch)

This one is the canon one, although I did some changes until I decided to go with this one! (The optional ones are shown to 10 USD pledgers!)

ONWARD_Page-128_Ch-5

And here we get to see Zewiac's reaction to Tacoro remembering him. Zewiac haven't been exposed to strangers that much growing up, so this made him far too anxious to be willing to stay.

COMIC TIP!
Study colors, a lot. Complimentary colors are important, making everything fit t...

ONWARD_Page-128_Ch-5 (Sketch)

The only thing I changed about this page was the angles of the shots, the scene plays out just the same otherwise!

ONWARD_Page-127_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Tacoro surely doesn't care about Zewiac's personal bubble.

This page wasn't changed from the initial sketch. Only, I made a close-up on Tacoro on the last panel instead of just a headshot.

ONWARD_Page-126_Ch-5 (Sketch)

(I finally got Photoshop to work... I'm so sorry, I've been feeling so anxious about this. :'( )

Nothing in particular was changed from the initial sketch!

ONWARD_Page-125_Ch-5

This relationship is one of my personal favorites actually. From enemies to friends in a matter of minutes because of childish innocense.
I didn't intend to make them this fleshed out, but I realized that they had potential and went with it. ^v^
Zarhe doesn't seem to like how friendly Lankie'...

ONWARD_Page-125_Ch-5 (Sketch)

The only thing that is different on this page in comparison to the old one, is that Zarhe was added.

ONWARD_Page-124_Ch-5

(There's a weird line on the page across the last two panels, I don't know how it got there or why it's there, but it disappears when you zoom in... haha?)

In the very first sketches, it was Zarhe who adressed them all, mocked Zewiac and then started running home on this page, but now, it's Rubigo...

ONWARD_Page-124_Ch-5 (Sketch)

The only things I changed on this page were the dialogue (originally, Rubigo addressed Zarhe and Lankie individually at the end) and the fact that I made Lankie and Tacoro visible in the first frame in the background.

ONWARD_Page-123_Ch-5

Just like the previous page, this one wasn't planned to be here at first.
BUT. Realistically this needed to happen. I know it doesn't really move the plot forward, but this scene is important for the characters's sake. In this comic, I don't just want to tell a story with plots and twists, I want...

ONWARD_Page-123_Ch-5 (Sketch)

On the finished veriosn of this page, only one thing was changed from this sketch. And that is Umbra's head in the last panel. I drew the final picture without a proper sketch and only used this as a size-reference. I rarely do that, but I felt I could do that here.

ONWARD_Page-122_Ch-5

As I mentioned on the previous post, this page wasn't supposed to exist. Although, it was ment to be a thing in one way or another. I rarely/never add scenes the last minute, but from a realistic standpoint, this needed to happen now. Because when you think about it, if you'd see one of your sibling...

ONWARD_Page-122_Ch-5 (Sketch)

This page wasn't changed at all, the only "change" done for this page, was that it wasn't originally supposed to exist!

ONWARD_Page-121_Ch-5

I mentioned on the sketch-post, that this page was split in half and this is the first half of it. Well, the other half will not be in the comic at all! It had Zarhe laugh at Zewiac for being so determined and sad. It absolutely didn't fit the scene and would throw away all of Zarhe's recent develop...

ONWARD_Page-121_Ch-5 (Sketch)

Okay, so this page wasn't changed, but cropped. Originally, these were the 3 first frames on another page, but I made it it's own, since I found the scene to be more powerful this way.

ONWARD_Page-120_Ch-5

Just like the last page, this is a half of an originally whole page. And like on the last one, this was added to develop the characters a bit further. We see Zarhe looking at Lankie for support and "safety", but just like his siblings, he isn't that happy with Zarhe threatening their brother. And wi...

ONWARD_Page-120_Ch-5 (Sketch)

As shown last time, this page was extended and split into 2 pages. All panels except for the last one were added as a remake. 'v'

Canon dialogue:

Rubigo: Are you okay, Zewiac?

Zewiac: Y...yeah.

Rubigo: You seem to have made up your mind. Is there anything you wish us t...