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Added 2016-11-11 18:01:40 +0000 UTCI mentioned on the sketch-post, that this page was split in half and this is the first half of it. Well, the other half will not be in the comic at all! It had Zarhe laugh at Zewiac for being so determined and sad. It absolutely didn't fit the scene and would throw away all of Zarhe's recent development and be too mean-spirited. I found this scene to work way better and be more dramatic this way and I hope that you feel the same. Also, the original sketch had a zoom-in on Zewiac's healthy eye. This was changed to imply something else, something that would be way too vague otherwise.
COMIC TIP! Decide what audience you're aiming for. That way, you can send your content the right way and more people will discover you!
Question!> Which starter will you pick for Sun and Moon?Litten. I'm not a huge fan of it's final evolution but hey, what can you do. I love cats.
