I really liked how fast this chapter feels. To me it's like a continuous beat. Which is par for course for action genres.
In this one you have three different endings. One with a character death which of course will affect how chapter 2 goes and also the rest of the game.
Dearly, Ju...
2025-02-23 19:06:11 +0000 UTC
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So I knew this chapter would go fast because it’s the first chapter that’s always the least work because it’s an introduction
When I finish I think I’ll wait until march to release it publicly, by then you’ll likely have OYHS
In this you’ll meet the ROs but you...
2025-02-19 12:24:35 +0000 UTC
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Imre leans casually against the doorframe, a playful grin tugging at his lips. “This reminded me of you,” he says, holding up an old weathered book with a cover that screamed vintage-classic-that-will-likely-horrify-slash-excite-you.
You raise an eyebrow, eyeing the book with suspicion....
2025-02-18 23:31:35 +0000 UTC
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I was wondering what you guys think so far of excellent cadavers. Most people say that no comments means people like it. But I would like some confirmation of that if you could or at least like this post if you like the story so far and don’t feel comfortable commenting :)
2025-02-18 19:22:56 +0000 UTC
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So yeah I decided it would be better to cut it up to 4 parts instead of 3. This one has an added 2500-3000 words.
It’s pretty sad tbf 😭😭
But you get to meet Luce’s family
Condolences, Jude
2025-02-17 18:27:00 +0000 UTC
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This is the first part of chapter 1. I hope you like what you see. It’s short but it gives tidbits of Luce’s life.
The password is 5429 and like always you find it on itch.
Bye, Jude.
2025-02-16 15:08:59 +0000 UTC
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Lorcan picks out another yellow jelly bean and hands it to you. He makes that face again. You add it to the pile you have on your lap atop a napkin.
He shoves handfuls of candy into his mouth. You don’t even know if he chews them. Still, in your eyes he looks adorable.
A couple walk...
2025-02-15 16:21:43 +0000 UTC
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You pop a popcorn kernel in your mouth. It’s coated with butter. Nia is not usually the one for unhealthy fats but she would need to be force fed plain popcorn.
You run your fingers through her thick curls. You’re fascinated by how they fit around your finger. The screen distracts you f...
2025-02-13 16:04:01 +0000 UTC
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Author's note: yeah it's early. Nia's will be on Thursday and Lorcan on Saturday.
You watch him expertly pour the crystalline champagne.
Your hands are clasped in your lap. Imre had his staff pepper the table with roses, glasses and plates of steaming food. It made your mouth...
2025-02-11 16:17:13 +0000 UTC
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The mother in front of you was covering her teenage daughter’s eyes. The girl was complaining and trying to push her away.
“I can’t believe you wanted to come here alone!” her mother chastises. An older man near them glares at her.
Imre fingers squeeze your knee. You look at h...
2025-02-08 15:00:07 +0000 UTC
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You didn't know the picture was there. You thought most of Orla's things were still in her room, as intact as when she last left it.
But here it was, as clear as day. Whenever you cajoled Lorcan to come over he always insisted to come to the attic, he says that the walls are too thin and ei...
2025-02-05 14:45:26 +0000 UTC
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So everyone knows going to start working on EC and OYHS. Chapter 1s are usually the easiest to write because they’re introductions to the MCs and world. With good time they could be done by Mar/April.
I’ll start writing WWC sometime in May/June I think.
Anyway I did say the mature...
2025-02-02 17:37:17 +0000 UTC
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Content warning: body-image issues, eating disorders
“Fat bitch,” Connie giggles.
Nia moves her fries around her plate. Connie’s eyes follow a random girl sitting two tables down from them.
“Lower your voice,” Nia chastises. She doesn’t do it with her usual ...
2025-02-01 15:17:20 +0000 UTC
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Here it is!!
Totally thought I’d finish this next week. I locked in.
Congrats, Jude.
2025-01-26 00:27:33 +0000 UTC
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Even though you know it's futile. You called so many times already. You can clearly see when you're not wanted. But it's Nia. Your dignity goes out the window with her and you can't leave without saying goodbye.
The ringing stops as it's done countless times in the past week. The robotic v...
2025-01-21 20:50:11 +0000 UTC
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“Where are going to put the body?” you ask.
“Where all the dead go.”
°°°°°°
By the time the lights of the house were swallowed up by the darkness it was down-pouring. Your fingers threatened to slip from the handles multiple times. All your costumes hung heav...
2025-01-20 23:25:09 +0000 UTC
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As the title say it is what it is.
This one is for all the James lovers.
Yours, Jude.
2025-01-15 02:17:53 +0000 UTC
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He expected the outcome of this night to be much different than how it’s going.
He doesn’t like surprises of this kind. The familial kind. It was already bad enough to have to sit through the victim’s family interviews with all the crying and emotions. Now he has to sit here...
2025-01-13 04:43:35 +0000 UTC
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This one is more drama and might be controversial…
We’ll see, Jude
2025-01-12 01:17:24 +0000 UTC
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I don’t know why I never wanted to write the story on an actual writing program. Insane. I actually have been writing the story right on the twine app.
Hence the grammatical errors.
Decided to not do that and it is much cleaner now.
Also I changed it up. You see I used to f...
2025-01-08 18:00:20 +0000 UTC
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The insects lie forever suspended in formaldehyde, their bodies unable to return to the Earth from which they came. Imre finishes adding the label for his newest acquisition: a wolf spider. Of course he always uses the Latin name.
"Do you like it?" he asks.
You slide up next to him an...
2025-01-07 19:36:59 +0000 UTC
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So this one was originally two different scenes but I felt like I wanted to make the scenes in the episode shorter in amount and longer in content.
And I did really just want to get to the party already.
Yeah, so I would be ready for Crowny to suffer (like always) and it's just the b...
2025-01-07 05:41:48 +0000 UTC
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Ya'll know what time it is....
Given that Nia doesn't show up in this episode, you'll read about her suffering through hanging out with other people she hates :)
For Imre it will be the Prudence bedroom scene from his POV
For Lorcan be Daryl scene POV (for those of you who don't...
2025-01-03 22:41:38 +0000 UTC
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GAME UPDATE
Two days off from what I said but in my defence it was new years and I have a lot of family 😭
This part is a little lighthearted I would say. Kind of nice.
HOUSEKEEPING
Some changes this year. For instance, I said this ...
2025-01-02 19:53:28 +0000 UTC
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His fingers wiped your cold sweaty cheeks gently. He had first tried to shake you. Then he thought of slapping you. But nothing, nothing he did worked.
He didn't know what had happened. You two were having fun, shooting the shit, as he liked to say and then you just collapsed....
2025-01-01 03:32:53 +0000 UTC
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3...2...1
He slowly moves the door an inch closer to the threshold. He winces when it creaks. He forgot he was going to crease the damn thing with oil.
He counts down in his head again.
3...2...1
He doesn't let the knob slip from his fingers. He manually turns the knob to...
2024-12-29 22:53:50 +0000 UTC
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The side story is coming later today. I sadly haven’t worked on the story cause for some reason I had the idiotic notion that I could get to writing this week while I had to pack for a family trip, get on planes, unpack and get situated.
I feel if I lock in I could get out scene 2 eithe...
2024-12-29 21:36:23 +0000 UTC
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So, I had originally planned to write a Christmas thing but I didn't have much time and I thought "well I'll try to write Episode 7 quickly during this time as a gift" but I also want to give something more...
For those of you who want to know the remaining titles of the episodes for the se...
2024-12-25 18:35:20 +0000 UTC
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You feel violent. You feel as if you want to hit her. You hate how you can be imploding but she's just standing there, having opened the door for you after you banged it frantically moments ago.
What's even more infuriating is that she looks pretty. Put-together even though she told you th...
2024-12-24 17:40:38 +0000 UTC
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Here it is!!
Password is 3912
Ta, ta
2024-12-23 15:47:04 +0000 UTC
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