Excellent cadavers update 3/4
Added 2025-02-19 12:24:35 +0000 UTCSo I knew this chapter would go fast because it’s the first chapter that’s always the least work because it’s an introduction
When I finish I think I’ll wait until march to release it publicly, by then you’ll likely have OYHS
In this you’ll meet the ROs but you’ll only get to really talk to one of them because he’s annoying. You’ll see more of Antonio and Sam
Ta-ta, Jude.
Comments
Fixed!
Jude G
2025-02-20 02:54:56 +0000 UTCOn Page 39 The "You glared at him. He started walking towards you, and you started backing up but a metal table was right behind you. You looked around to see what you could throw at him but he stopped inches away." Appears twice And page 41 ends very weirdly with just "Your response"
Moonrise
2025-02-19 23:19:52 +0000 UTCDante is two years older than Luce
Jude G
2025-02-19 20:11:03 +0000 UTCHi! Thank you! I am a little bit confused. On the page 38, there is a sentence: 'Carmen was three years older and never let anyone forget it, she would call hanging out with you and Dante ‘babysitting.’' And then there is: 'Dante was two years older and the polar opposite of his sister.' I think this one is confusing: like is Dante 2 years older than who? From this sentence, I think that he is older than his sister but it's not right because of the sentence I mentioned before.
Alex
2025-02-19 19:38:54 +0000 UTC
