Working on next chapter of rage against the heavens. Its kinda gory so i wanted to ask if y’all wanted the descriptions to not be detailed, less intense
Added 2024-12-11 00:34:09 +0000 UTCWhat the title said
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Posted the chapter. What do y’all think of it?
allen 1996
2024-12-11 08:03:27 +0000 UTCSo long as the chapter is dynamic use as much or little gore as you want. The same with the paragraphs in which he is tinkering; if you write chapters that are like 80% tinkering, your story could turn like "Brockton's Celestial Forge".
Fran
2024-12-11 07:31:24 +0000 UTCWhat nisiris said
fuuton dee
2024-12-11 01:23:22 +0000 UTCWhat @Nisiris said in their comment.
Jonathan Shaw
2024-12-11 01:10:04 +0000 UTCNothing wrong with gore, though would rather see more of story than just entire paragraphs of dissecting bodies xD
Nisiris
2024-12-11 00:57:34 +0000 UTCGo crazy
Person
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