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Rylan stepped closer to the others, motioning at them to try. He then looked at the soldiers.
“As for those of you...
2025-08-28 00:52:25 +0000 UTC View PostRylan watched his Status Window unfold in front of him.
Status Window
Name: Rylan Flameheart
Level: 75
Race: Human (E)
Class: The Dreamer
Profession: none.
Trait: Determined
Stats
Strength: 445
Agility: ...
2025-08-26 00:58:40 +0000 UTC View PostGael looked through the window, his fingers drumming on the armrest. The day was bright and the sky was clear, unlike his turbid mind. Countless thoughts ran through it, all centered around a single person.
“His birthday was yesterday,” Gael said clearly.
“…I didn’t know,”...
2025-08-23 00:23:16 +0000 UTC View PostRylan opened the door to his room, then entered it. The moonlight shone through the window, proudly displaying the starry night sky. The room was as tidy as he’d left it. Taking a breath, Rylan walked to the middle of the room and turned around.
Facing him were his parents, siblings, and ...
2025-08-21 00:27:03 +0000 UTC View PostRylan tilted his head at Damian. At the edge of his vision, he could see that both Gerard and Elizabeth had frowned almost at the same time. Henry, on the other hand, didn’t seem to be surprised at all. He only maintained his composure, looking straight at Rylan.
“You don’t seem too p...
2025-08-19 00:59:31 +0000 UTC View PostFfs I forgot to post the chapter yesterday. My bad, fams. Here it is. Next chapter on Monday, as usual.
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Rylan looked at himself in the mirror as he fixed his black tie. A tall, black-haired, blue-eyed young man wearing a black-and-gold robe that covered formal clothing. The reflec...
2025-08-16 20:51:42 +0000 UTC View PostHello! I'm going to paste below the message I wrote for Royalroad readers about the small break I'll take since this book has ended. Thank you for your patience! Remember, I'll be back on August 15th!
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Hello, everyone!
I'm here to announce that Book 2 has ended over on Patreo...
2025-08-08 23:20:21 +0000 UTC View PostRylan reached Damian’s barrier, trying to ignore the burning stares, and looked around. Over half of the imperial Mages had already been killed, but it was obvious that Ceotha’s Mages were trying to capture the rest of them. The veritable storm of mana that had been created by their arrival h...
2025-08-08 23:12:44 +0000 UTC View PostMana flowed throughout the floor, feeding the magic fire. Keeping his eyes on her and trying to anticipate what spell she would use next, Rylan suddenly felt like his head had been hit by a sledgehammer. His eyes lost focus, and he almost stumbled in place as his view trembled. It was difficult t...
2025-08-06 23:32:23 +0000 UTC View PostRylan felt like the air had become heavier. No, as if space itself were pressing him down, attempting to crush him. Navy-blue mana dyed the inferno, tinging the flames in its hue. The woman, Antonia, smiled widely, but her eyes remained chilling. The blue-haired man was completely serious. ...
2025-08-05 01:05:26 +0000 UTC View PostRylan jumped straight upward, his eyes fixed on the enemy. The man raised his staff.
The things limiting him have disappeared.
It was obvious that the Empire’s plan had been to assassinate him quietly. However, from the moment the Tower withstood so much damage and mana lea...
2025-08-02 00:04:11 +0000 UTC View PostAs I've asked before, please keep giving me feedback! I'm glad you guys enjoyed the last chapter.
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Rylan could feel it – his Aura growing in real time, faster even than the green-haired man could cast.
A power he recognized. One that he had become intimately familiar with o...
2025-07-31 00:03:00 +0000 UTC View PostRylan sped through the forest with Snowstorm, faster than ever before in this life. His Mana Core throbbed within him like a beating heart, making his four Circles resonate with it. He snapped his fingers and burned away what remained of the impurities he’d released, then continued to run.
<... 2025-07-28 23:15:44 +0000 UTC View PostI REALLY want to nail these final chapters, so please, hit me with any and all feedback. I'm very open to criticism. Are the chapters hype enough? How do they make you feel? Am I managing to convey what I'm trying to? Thank you ahead of time!
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Rylan ran through the forest, feeling ...
2025-07-25 22:51:51 +0000 UTC View PostRylan looked at his Status Window with a complex gaze.
Status Window
Name: Rylan Flameheart
Level: 72
Race: Human (E)
Class: The Dreamer
Profession: none.
Trait: Determined
Stats
Strength: 391
Agi...
2025-07-24 00:39:02 +0000 UTC View PostRylan channeled Snowstorm and dashed forward as quickly as he could. The priority was getting out of the hallway and into the room where the Boss was before it could use the terrain to its advantage. As if it could read his mind, the humanoid Elemental raised its right arm and pointed at him. Ryl...
2025-07-22 00:05:23 +0000 UTC View PostRylan sank his feet into the snow-covered, icy ground. He climbed the shattered remains of what used to be an Ice Elemental and took a deep breath. Standing on top of the pieces of ice, he looked around.
He was in the middle of a land of ice and snow that stretched as far as the eye could s...
2025-07-19 00:48:01 +0000 UTC View PostDon't worry, there won't be a bunch of other chapters of Rylan going inside another Dungeon like this one.
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For a few seconds, Rylan only focused on breathing in and out. His entire body ached. He looked down at it.
More than a dozen wounds, from small to large, crisscrossed ...
2025-07-17 00:52:33 +0000 UTC View PostThe clash sent a shockwave through Rylan’s body, but he didn’t even blink. He pressed forward with his full strength before a realization reached him.
Tempest Break isn’t enough to completely crush its defenses.
The wings creaked and groaned as the mana wreaked havoc ac...
2025-07-15 00:55:12 +0000 UTC View PostRylan pulled his blade out of the back of a ten-winged Golem and wiped his brow, his breathing a bit hurried.
“Now we’re talking,” he mumbled to himself.
He looked around. The broken bodies of several Golems lay all around him, in the center of the immense room. There were five ...
2025-07-11 23:33:17 +0000 UTC View PostRylan took deep breaths as he looked at the four Golems far ahead in front of him.
They were all perfectly shaped like humans, two males and two females. Each of them had ten wings on their backs, made of metal feathers intricately woven together. At the same time, he expanded his senses to...
2025-07-10 00:59:45 +0000 UTC View PostAbelus nodded.
“Then, this is all I know,” he said slowly. “But it should be enough.”
Harpas nodded back. Abelus took a deep breath and started the story from the beginning once more.
“Rylan Flameheart started doing drugs at the age of thirteen and became a hopeless ad...
2025-07-07 23:05:30 +0000 UTC View PostVallius took a deep breath to steady himself, then looked at the double doors in front of him. Intricate carvings of hawks and eagles covered their surface, but he was in no mood to admire them. He clenched his jaw. After taking another deep breath, he slowly pushed them open. Beyond, a wide room...
2025-07-05 00:15:42 +0000 UTC View PostAt the end of the seventh day.
Rylan used Snowfall to leap over the Golem’s claws, which cut the air below him, then looked at his enemy. The construct was shaped like a feline, only tens of times larger. The beast-like Golem was the color of bronze, with only its eyes shining a piercing ...
2025-07-01 00:35:18 +0000 UTC View PostFell asleep without posting the chapter and just realized it. My bad, boys.
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Rylan’s mana roiled and revolved, coating his sword while crackling like lightning, fluid as the wind and as fierce as a storm. An ethereal blade took shape above the sword, one made of his mana and will...
2025-06-28 15:59:59 +0000 UTC View PostRylan looked around as he ran in the enormous structure within the mountain itself.
The System changed the design.
Unlike in the Basilisk Wilds, where the forest that composed the Dungeon’s environment wasn’t much different from the Veria Woodlands, Golem Haven seemed to ...
2025-06-26 00:47:14 +0000 UTC View PostSorry for no chapter last Friday, boys. Got busy with something and couldn't write. Enjoy!
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As Rylan approached the wall, the raven-haired man made his way down the stairs on the other side. Just after Rylan crossed the gates into the town, the man arrived in front of him and scann...
2025-06-23 23:43:33 +0000 UTC View PostIn Damian’s study.
Rylan tightened the last strap of his leather armor, letting the armor embrace his body. It was a familiar feeling. The fingers of his left hand brushed against the hilt of Silver Twilight on his waist, while the ones of his right hand touched the wand on the opposite s...
2025-06-19 01:18:35 +0000 UTC View PostRylan carefully controlled his mana as he flew on the magical broom. Cutting through the air like an arrow at a speed that surpassed even his own when using Drifting, he looked down at the broom.
What an interesting artifact.
The fact that it was shaped like a broom was the m...
2025-06-17 00:32:46 +0000 UTC View PostFor a moment, Rylan only stared at his grandfather, his mind racing.
…Surrender.
He didn’t immediately deny Gael’s words, as he understood their weight. Truthfully, it had been on his mind as well. How was Ceotha supposed to win against a much larger force that also hou...
2025-06-14 00:04:37 +0000 UTC View Post