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Shattered Illusion, Chapter 1 โ€” 403 Forbidden

This is the first chapter of a rewrite of Sword Art Online, an anime I have a lot of nostalgia about and also completely despise. The plan is to fix everything I hate and keep everything I like ๐Ÿ˜‰ Also itโ€™s totally standalone so donโ€™t worry about it if you havenโ€™t seen Sword Art! (And in fact, please donโ€™t see Sword Art, itโ€™s really not good and you will be disappointed)

This chapter has been done for ages but I wanted to have a bit more content to understand if it was okay like it was or if I needed to add more or something. Now I have chapter 2 done as well ๐Ÿ˜Š


Also, figured Iโ€™d let yโ€™all know that Iโ€™m gonna be pausing billing again this upcoming month as well, I need to be focusing on work right now. Afterwards Iโ€™ll probably be doing more writing again though ๐Ÿค not sure if I can promise my old speeds again though, I think I want to spend this year doing writing as a hobby instead of a job. So on months where I accept money from yโ€™all Iโ€™ll make sure you get a couple chapters, including whatever you voted for, and otherwise Iโ€™ll just only write when Iโ€™m inclined to. Hopefully that sounds okay? Lemme know what you think! Iโ€™m always open to chat on Discord as well if you wanna talk there :3

Shattered Illusion, Chapter 1 โ€” 403 Forbidden

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Ok, i haven't actually seen soa, just the spinoff hungrily, wich was great. What i have heard from reviewer i follow, is that the proud is kinda flawed and the execution is even worse. Mc being lame af. So I'm intrigued on your spin of it! I will comment some nonsense on chapter two wheel i had time to a tually read this :D Btw, No hard feelings for not being billed on patreon from me ;) tho, if you held one or two chapters back for an unproductive month, i would gladly pay you the little tip from my "for good authors" found. Ehm, rambling again, I'll just slide out of frame ...

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