Feedback Form S3 A8 Segment 4 – Claire
Added 2022-06-28 20:58:47 +0000 UTC
Strong agreement, it’s what I want to say. I aimed for Claire to have that “casual girl” charisma.
Some mild polarization here, which is understandable. It’s a pretty fucked up place. As far as I am concerned, her developing such casual niceness was a coping mechanism for having to deal with people she hated all the time, but it still must be a bit odd to some people.
This is tilted so softly towards “Disagreement” that I would say that she is too rushed. Which makes sense, but I also don’t know what I could have done bar slowing the arc further. I will just have to compensate for this over the next few dozen chapters.
Just what I want to see, nothing to comment on.
Expected and nice.
Comments
Question: Any further thoughts about Claire?
Comment 1: time to fill her with cream (cum) and make her an Eclair :P
Response 1: I am stealing that pun.
