"Bulls, it had to be bulls. Why not Elks or Reindeers?" Eldrin murmured to himself. Alarion didn't bother with a reply as he took in the sight. A family of Thunderhoof bulls, the latest of the Thunderhoof family kept smashing their twin horns into the wooden wall.
"If not for the stones M...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Lumina
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FREYR'S POV
I sat in Mother's sitting form. Something she called the Lotus position. My eyes were closed, my breathing normal, and my fists connected in front of me. My lips parted at intervals to utter a single word.
"Death".
Unlike Ozai who m...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Argonne Islands
2024-05-22 16:03:00 +0000 UTC
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Freyr looked disappointed at the truth spilling from Ozai's mouth. It was clear to him that their mother had indeed gifted the flames to Ozai. Yet he'd expected some sort of positive answer from his brother. The young demon couldn't help but sigh.
'Mother wouldn't grant me the flames sinc...
THIRD PERSON POV
'Weak'. I ducked below a fist and met a knee to my palms staggering me backward. 'I was weak'. I caught my stumble and swept my feet the way I'd seen him do. He leaped over it and brought his foot down with a powerful stomp. Bone crunched and it t...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - The Verdant Vale
2024-05-21 16:51:24 +0000 UTC
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Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Glimmering Abyss of the Northern Seas - T...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Glimmering Abyss of the Northern Seas
2024-05-20 16:00:21 +0000 UTC
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Nothing changed about the great hall. It was the same stone floor, the same pillars, the same throne on a dais, and the same sword in a stone.
Well except for one little thing. Behind the throne stood a new construct, one that she remembered very well. Carved of the same white stone and wi...
The destroyer had been stronger which called for her to think and plan before trapping and killing it. Molliwag had been weaker but she also had to think outside the box. First was skilled, dominating their battle even if she held her own. Yet his skill failed to her plans.
Cole had mentio...
THIRD PERSON POV
The elf stood up as listlessly as he had earlier. Its hollow eyes met the new form of the one who had dared to challenge him.
A green glowing stone golem stood over six feet tall, crouching in a combat stance with its left hand on the groun...
It was bright. Very. You would think that the highest level amongst the Gursers, a group of bone, death, flame, and sword-wielding menaces would live in the dark.
Wrong. The boss's great hall was well-lit. Chandeliers dotted the ceiling. Fire bowls sat at different locations. The ground wa...
I called them Joundk - Guardian wolves. I found their names. Anos, Deus, and Treus as cool and fitting for each of them.
Treus was white-furred and huge, since they were all currently lying I wasn't certain of his size. But it was a certainty that he outgrew the rest in fur. Even his claws...
HELEN'S POV
First was thrown to the side, his body smashing into the wall of the hallway. Following him closely were Thirteen and Twenty-four both crashing and rolling to a stop on the ground.
The Cerberus was besieged from all sides. Its feet stomped and i...
The Insight was elusive, hard, and stubborn. Like a hard pillar rooted into the ground, pulled but unyielding, clinging tightly to its spot like a petulant child.
What was the earth? The question fleeted in, and about in her head. The insight gave various answers that weren't at the moment...
It took longer than expected to move further than the first topmost hallway.
Returning to the Center of Worlds or the Star Ring was inappropriate unless her children were still being nuisances in the mortal realm. Akasha had some of the things to be done under control as such there was no...
The Unborn marched ahead of its creator after both exited the room and found an untold number of Gursers swarming for them.
With his black sword in hand which the Creator had returned, he was poised to take on the little crowd. Finally, a partner to use against the wave of mobs.
Unf...
So. This is not a chapter. A chapter will come later in the day. So was thinking and thinking.
We got our angels.
What comes next is obviously how we get their counterparts or evil sides. The black to their white. The bad to their good. The chaos to their order. And I realized tha...
HELEN'S POV
The words of the quest echoed in my head repeatedly my eyes never leaving the Gurser. Its hollow husks were now empty, devoid of the flame even as its skull burned. Like it had given up the fight.
The words made no sense no matter how I loo...
The sound of liquid splashing into a puddle was audible in the silence that choked the room. The sight of golden ichor on the stone floor even as more drops joined the growing puddle disturbing.
The Gurser tilted its head as its eyes appraised the sight before it.
The female stood a...
The Gursers: Flame bearers, unfortunately, didn't flee with the fall of the axe-wielding Gurser. Hilde snapped both pairs of tbe chakram back into one whilst evading hits continuously.
This battle was easy, too easy.
'Could be easier'. She frowned.
It was almost like she had...
THIRD PERSON POV
Back in the lunar palace, Hildelith looked at her palm. The eye of worlds called to her with excitement. The White world had sure been annoying and scary but it brought a sense of adventure she still wanted. She could get this from her world o...
No, I'm not announcing that I'm going on another break. I've completed the task for my break which is editing the entire 59 chapters. Some things I left as I preferred the wording in a certain way, other things I changed or the phrases and statements themselves. Made some modifications like the d...
2024-05-12 08:53:30 +0000 UTC View PostUniverse -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
2024-05-07 21:51:58 +0000 UTC
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[Author's Note - Should I make a Discord? I don't like the silence here after a chapter.
Please give me a review. I want to know how good or bad my story is. And I don't mean just the story itself. I mean the narrative and more. Just a general review and also tell...
Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
2024-05-05 22:53:26 +0000 UTC
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Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin
World - Vaustaris
Continent - Subcontinent (Zephyr Isles)
2024-05-05 22:27:22 +0000 UTC
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Universe -The Star Rings
Ring - 4th
Reality - Mortal Plane
Solar system - Origin...
So I had no idea I could create collections with Patreon. Still not sure if it works well with different stories. Anyway. Here's the link to my new Story. On a different Patreon.
MC is Male.
2024-05-05 07:44:31 +0000 UTC
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