Announcement
Added 2024-05-12 08:53:30 +0000 UTCNo, I'm not announcing that I'm going on another break. I've completed the task for my break which is editing the entire 59 chapters. Some things I left as I preferred the wording in a certain way, other things I changed or the phrases and statements themselves. Made some modifications like the descriptions of Zeus, The Terrain Pegasi.
Now the main question in this post is simple.
BS Deity lucky for me already said he's okay with the slow mode this book is taking. Other readers have not made any reviews yet. I'm kinda glad since a lot of things will happen and be set before the Alpha testers come.
I'm not going to write some part where Hildelith is shown working on something for the players and there is no description. Most things, important things of course will be shown when she makes them for the players to use. Most things will be the result of things and so when the alpha testers are using or benefiting you all will have an idea of how it came to be.
The question is. Should I focus on completing The Primordial or add chapters of Hildelith and then back again to The Kids?
The answer will tell me what chapter to post as 61.
Why?. The next chapters can be posted in two arcs. Primordials and Hildelith. One after the other, so it won't matter.
If no one replies I'll just pick Primordials or Hildelith myself.
Oh and also should I post the rough draft for the first Alpha testers here? Not their story but more like their status and what their powers will be like. It won't be arranged but I'd love for my readers to check it out and give me ideas of how it could be improved in comments.
Or should I leave that for Discord? (Note. I do not know how discord works. Never been able to figure it out π)
Comments
As for the patreon thing is just a bullet point on the benefits you can write in. Then the creator messages the patron and the two talk about the thing.
Some BS Deity
2024-05-12 15:32:40 +0000 UTCMore engaging as she and Akasha did with Ozai. It's fun imo to see the shenanigans the kids are getting into and what advice, lecture, praise, etc hildeth gives. Or just her opinion on what they did.
Some BS Deity
2024-05-12 15:30:46 +0000 UTCDiscord Link https://discord.com/invite/X3bXdyTU
Michael Ochuma.
2024-05-12 15:29:24 +0000 UTCIf she's holding bΓ kc. It could work. Yep. Holding back. Just got an idea.
Michael Ochuma.
2024-05-12 15:22:39 +0000 UTCAs for engaging with the kids. I see how that's exciting but also don't know how to write it without getting them killed in seconds. Maybe Tora holds out for long in this current time. Future. Impossible.
Michael Ochuma.
2024-05-12 15:16:29 +0000 UTCThanks. Discord is like programming to me. I just never understood it. The Patreon thing. How?. I've been a reader for half my life. First time writing and publishing books on this sites. Forgive the ignorance.
Michael Ochuma.
2024-05-12 15:15:04 +0000 UTCWould be glad to help you setup a discord if you want. As to the arcs personally I like seeing one of the kids get into something and then hildeth engaging with them. If she is off on her own I don't have a preference though. As for the alpha testers id love to check them out and help create them (could even be a listed boon of patreon until we get to them. Kinda like how some stories let patrons add items, monsters or one of characters)
Some BS Deity
2024-05-12 15:02:21 +0000 UTC
