Chapter 11: Elven Wiles
Added 2021-04-29 21:27:01 +0000 UTCNew chapter is UP! 19 pages! Not a ton of exposition either IF YA KNOW WHAT I MEAN
This one was a beast! Prime example of how one sentence in my script can end up adding 10 pages to the final thing... it was originally a very short one-on-one scene but Cinder completely derailed it.
Thanks for your support everybody, enjoy!
Comments
So deliciously very lewd, yet romantic moments between Cinder and the Captain
Les Green
2021-05-01 01:19:23 +0000 UTCAny reason Emily’s speech bubble is white instead of green in the bar?
Griffin Deary
2021-04-30 08:41:35 +0000 UTCthanks! I like the rundown
Alexis Flower
2021-04-30 05:06:11 +0000 UTCOof this is amazing. Favorite things in this chapter (apart from the obvious): -Cinder's 'Beckys' branded top. -She's got her hair done like Becky too. -'The Two Figs' Tavern sign -Emily's hat. -Emily's pipe. -Emily's ornate little knife (he's just got great accessories all around) -Lord Horbrine and his slippers. Everything is just amazing. I want to stare at each panel for hours.
Lt Kebron
2021-04-30 02:44:31 +0000 UTCNot a TON of exposition, but just enough lore to drive me up the wall until the next chapter
Caelin
2021-04-29 22:14:18 +0000 UTCIt balances out. After Cinder completely derailed it, she got completely railed. There is no other smut as joyful as this.
akrasia
2021-04-29 22:07:46 +0000 UTC
