Meeting the expectations

In a few hours, I've found several dozens of people who want to support my work. :) Of course, I hoped that but it's a nice surprise. Thanks for the time you spent with The Parity.

As I don't write for a living (thank God), I enjoy the freedom of the independent creator. So far, I've received mostly positive and/or constructive feedback, so most readers who wanted to share with me their reflections appreciate my ideas.   But well, it's a long way ahead of us. The Parity is planned for 20 chapters+endings. As the current version is already as long as the typic novel, it's a lot of text to write. :) So I've just set the characters and scene for the main plot (well, two chapters left to end these preparations).  So I think it's a good moment to ask you which parts you want to be developed more. 

There is a darker part of this story, as corruption and bimbofication is to me pure horror genre, especially in a more realistic setting. If anybody after reading the first three chapters thinks that Carl or Robert is defeated, he/she will be disappointed or surprised.  They are smart enough to play with Auntie and they are the constant threat to Paul(ine). 

There is a Lovecraftian part about the Auntie herself. Martha and Dorothy are already Investigators, Paul(ine) can join them.  There is a story about the dangerous knowledge and great forces in the Universe that influences people's life. 

There is a part of everyday life.  As you probably noticed, my game is a story about changes. We live in interesting times, and I think that TF fantasy is a good space to reflect on them. I plan one or two chapters about the vacations when players would have much more freedom to shape Paul(ine)'s everyday choices.

And there would a romance part, probably it would be in YA cliches. But well, teenage romance and self-discovery at the threshold of adulthood are fine topics.

I can't promise I meet all your expectations. There is a lot of content I won't write because I don't feel it or I think it wouldn't fit my story. But as every writer, I want to be read. :) So feel free to comment here on what do you want to read in this story. :)