Update
Added 2025-07-18 18:42:53 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Just a quick update. Things are about to heat up in the next chapters, and I’ve finally sorted out the pacing moving forward. From here on, the story will focus more on the wife's perspective, with the husband’s POV appearing only during important moments to streamline the narrative and cut unnecessary detail. It took me some time to restructure things, but I think this approach will hit harder emotionally and erotically.
Also, for the next bonus short story. If you have any ideas, whether it's an alternate ending to a past chapter, a different character's POV, or a brand new setup with entirely different characters, drop them in the comments. It will be more fun this way.
The idea with the most likes will be chosen. If there are no ideas shared then I’ll just decide like usual. Looking forward to what you come up with!
Comments
Good question. Even if the focus shifts more toward the wife's POV, I’ll still keep the same format. The husband's POV chapters get full titles because they mark major turning points or events in the story. The wife's POV is meant to fill in the gaps, show what really led to those moments, and dig into her thoughts and actions. So even if there are more chapters from her side, they’re all tied to a single titled event already shown through the husband's eyes. That’s why I don’t think it would be necessary. But thanks for your question. Hope this explains.
beusnjw
2025-07-27 09:56:35 +0000 UTCif the focus is wife PoV, would you give them a title like the husband’s PoV?
megane
2025-07-27 09:41:06 +0000 UTCI have few endings planned but will do a poll to pick one of them
beusnjw
2025-07-19 04:59:41 +0000 UTCim wondering if you planned some sort of ending for it already?
kaz
2025-07-18 21:53:19 +0000 UTC
