Street Cultivation 2: Chapters 23-25
Added 2019-11-23 23:57:57 +0000 UTCWrapping up the combat section, it's time for a longer set of chapters.
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Comments
Oh yess, who doesn't love a bonded animal companion.
tehlu
2019-11-29 15:00:28 +0000 UTCThey exist, but they're uncommon (and mostly for the wealthy). I underestimated how much interest there would be in this and now kind of wish I'd included more in the second book, but that stuff is planned for the third.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-25 18:05:04 +0000 UTCSoo, are there any bonded animal companions and such or is that no longer such a thing in the world?
tehlu
2019-11-25 13:23:33 +0000 UTCIt seems like all the women Rick meets are soon infatuated with him. Lisa, Emily, even that librarian. Maybe he has a Don Juan core that he does not know about.
2019-11-24 03:44:41 +0000 UTCHis defensive core prevented it from exerting any direct control, but they're tricky animals, so recognizing that he wasn't thinking clearly was more important.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-24 01:45:20 +0000 UTCYou know, I do a thing about garbage bags being different... but this is really just an oversight. I'll tweak it a bit.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-24 01:44:31 +0000 UTCHaha, I didn't say Rick's love life was going to be constant misery.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-24 01:41:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Alexander Dupree
2019-11-24 01:32:54 +0000 UTCI liked the hypnotic Kitsune. "Let me ouuuuut!" What was it that let him resist? His defensive core? Just a naturally strong mind?
2019-11-24 01:21:31 +0000 UTCAhhh, how sweet. They went on a killing wild animals date. Plenty of jackalope appetizers, and a rabid dragon for the main course! It was really bothering me that he put the jackalope corpses in a plastic bag (I assume 'garbage bag' meant a plastic bag). Surely he would realize their horns would poke all sorts of holes in the bag. But maybe that world has really tough bags, because it seemed like there was only one hole.
2019-11-24 01:19:59 +0000 UTCHard to believe anyone could be that thick, though. And Melissa is still my favourite. Want to see more of her. Always smile when she's on the page being silly or genuine.
Michael son of Jacob
2019-11-24 00:48:05 +0000 UTCYay! And you said romance wouldn't go well! This is great! And nothing can go wrong since they both communicate openly!
Michael son of Jacob
2019-11-24 00:47:11 +0000 UTCAnd here I was sure that Lisa... welp.
Zeal Iskander
2019-11-24 00:40:39 +0000 UTC