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pretty much the end of the comic after this part, but i'm guessing it's going to be like, 2 more pages. i don't think it'll end in just 1 page.
i'm happier with the juxtaposition on this page than the previous ones, the compare and contrast nature of the two sides is easy and obvious. i imagine the landing back to reality is going to be kind of rough, pacing wise.
flawless blank screen technique from quinn here. izzi is really receptive to it, because of all of the therapy i'd imagine.
EDIT: i noticed a lot of continuity errors on previous pages while working on this page. felix's foot needed a star pattern, izzi's mouth i wanted bright green like an edgy radioactive-themed gloomdog, quinn's chin lacked the white marking it has on their reference, izzi's legs should have had some dark strip visible, because they're supposed to be the same as her arms, and also, i noticed that i colored quinn's eyes in reverse on the first page of the inner world scene, but i decided not to edit that. will be uploading tweaked versions of the previous pages tomorrow -- it would hurt a lot more if i still had the rule that i wasn't allowed to edit pages post-publication. comic continuity is just hard to juggle. all of those were what i consider minor transgressions except for the one about quinn's chin marking, but they really bothered me.
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