AltF4 Chapter 10: Two Lines of Code
Added 2025-12-29 04:46:26 +0000 UTC...
By the time the virtual sun had settl
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Yup you're right, thanks for the catch. Found a error two lines down in the state of the art medicine bit aswell (there was an 'a' before state of the art) Think this should fix it (Posting here in case you wanted to see the update): He listened to the intrusive thought in his head for that one. “...Sorry, physically can’t help you with your headache right now but-”
N.A.H (Ice Archer)
2025-12-29 17:17:35 +0000 UTC“Nevermind.” She sighed, not willing to give him a button to push. “You are a headache sometimes, Alt.” He listened to the voice in his head. “...Sorry, physically can’t help you with that right now but-” [...] “..I have a headache.” Mina deadpanned beside him, her expression not remotely amused. --- Mina shouldn't be able to know that a headache from Tablet Lady prompted Alt to flirt here, right? She couldn't have heard her say it after all. Or are you implying that Mina is extrapolating that the earlier comment from Alt: “And we both know that means you get a much bigger headache from Shueisha threatening a lawsuit" is somehow still connected to him flirting after he has gone through a 5 minute long real estate tangent? Anyway, thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work mate.
Saltberg
2025-12-29 17:11:18 +0000 UTCI want to point out a single part that was my favourite, but it was all great. Loved the Kirito finish. Still hoping for that Asuna marriage slot just to get jealous Mina, plus drama. Dont care if MC gets shipped with Asuna or not, just want the drama (specially if you actually make her act like someone from old money, so she has the education that comes with it (rather than her generic girl in canon). I want drama. Also I shit Kirito and Sachi. Not the biggest fan of Kirito and Asuna, well I am in the abridged, but in canon liked Sachi or any of the other girls more with Kirito. There wasn’t really much build up there compared to the others (at least on screen).
Zerak
2025-12-29 16:24:39 +0000 UTC
