So did it improve? :D (updated)
Added 2023-02-15 05:04:00 +0000 UTCHey guys fixed somethings and end up coloring it lol
hope u like it and if u have any advise feel totally free to tell me :D
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thanks for your suggestions i updated the pic so it could be more understandable :D
Comments
Just the touch of adding the photo of the friend on the sac improves it a lot! Also the colours do make it way better as well, allowing to differenciate the characters as well! Really good job ^^
TheKipiDragon
2023-02-15 10:24:45 +0000 UTCThe finished photo on the cumbag alone is a huge improvement >:) It took a couple minutes to get that the second panel isn't a direct continuation of the first. His son (unsurprisingly) looks a lot like him. Maybe a small 'Meanwhile' text box on the second panel.
phantasm
2023-02-15 09:03:03 +0000 UTCVery good colors Lots of brighter tones used
rokie38
2023-02-15 07:18:35 +0000 UTCHuge improvement! It's hard to make this any more perfect, I just hope to see more of these two in the future!
Diesel Bull
2023-02-15 06:30:55 +0000 UTCThis is amazing! I hope to see you make some comics sometime! Also good fix on the texts to make the story more clear
Yeetus86
2023-02-15 05:32:32 +0000 UTCAwesome work!! Now the son needs to eat one of Ozono's work buds! It's only fair
GreyGaymer - Eli
2023-02-15 05:27:34 +0000 UTCI love it x3
AwakenStar
2023-02-15 05:05:42 +0000 UTCThen I say like father like son
Beta
2023-02-15 05:05:39 +0000 UTC...that's his son xD
kunn
2023-02-15 05:05:08 +0000 UTCSeeing him with dad glasses is so cute
Beta
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