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Rider King part 35

VENUS

The light eats my very existence, and it pulls me to its belly where acid burns my skin. I’m so hot that I’m screaming, but I don’t know if my voice can be heard on Xelor anymore.

I’ve been robbed by the unknown.

I throw my arms and legs out, but I hit nothing. I’m blind and falling. Seconds ago, I fell from the peak of my orgasm and into bliss. This is nothing like that.

I land in water with a violent splash. No, this isn't water. It’s a thick, suffocating, burning slush. It’s melting me alive. I struggle to swim to the top, and grab a vine to pull myself up.

I gasp when I break the surface and blink hard to clear my vision. I look to my left, and then I realize that what I had taken wasn’t a vine, but an arm. A dead woman floats next to me. No, dozens do. Adults, children, elderly in various stages of decomposition. I’m swimming in their coffin.

I scream, and then I realize other women are screaming with me. It’s the slush. It’s melting us.

I scramble over the bodies, grabbing bones and flesh. Few women squirm as well, but their upper body strength is not as good as mine.

Above me, there are floating plates connected to white portals. They are pools containing more women. I seemed to have landed in the bottom pool. This place is not natural. There’s metal everywhere, and the only organic substances are the slush and bodies.

I climb out of the pool and slip onto the floor. It’s a pitch-black metal that I’ve never seen on Xelor.

As I get back on my feet, I realize a figure is approaching me. It’s enormous, thin, faceless, bright, and its only features are two humanistic arms and legs.

“You son of a bitch!” I swing and hit what feels like glass.

The figure extends an arm and generates a long, sharp stick that crackles with electricity at the end. Already seeing that he wants to prod me back into the pool, I kick the base of the stick and drill it to his chin. He shudders noiselessly, and I use that chance to grab the stick and kick him into the pool.

Two more figures appear, and I make a run for it. I use the stick as a cane to support myself. I can’t think straight. The screaming is so loud that I don’t understand how these things don’t shatter.

Why are they doing this?

What are they?

There’s no ladder here, but I need to reach the portal on the plate above us. The one behind me is too far away. I must climb.

I turn, and I toss the shock stick with all my upper body strength. The precision is spot-on and rams into one of them. Instead of impaling them, it pushes them down. These things are hard to kill. That throw should have sent the shock stick right through them.

I reach the wall, but it’s so smooth that there’s nothing to cling to. Desperate, I look at the pool and gag when I see all the bones. I force myself to pick up a femur and throw it up at the wires connected to the pool above me. My heart shrinks as I throw a skull, and one wire gives out.

I begin to climb. My legs are useless, but my adrenaline and upper body strength keep me going. I don’t look down as I climb twenty feet and swing onto the platform.

There’s more squirming and screaming in this level. Knowing that time is running out, I blindly kneel and reach my hands to capture two hands. I drag the women out with a groan. There are dozens of more women here, but I don’t have the time to save them all.

A ship dispatches from the wall. It’s a small pod containing one of those evil figures. They’re coming for me.

“Run!”

I lap around the slimy edge of the pool, nearly falling off the platform.

“Help me, please!” someone screams.

I look back and burst into tears because I know I can’t save her. There’s too many of them.

We reach the white portal, and I do what seems natural. I dive into it without knowing if the two women I pulled out made it.

The burning has not stopped. It’s still killing me, but I’d rather draw my last breath on Xelor than on that slaughterhouse.

I thud on moist grass. It’s daytime here, but I can tell this isn’t Xelor. I sit up, and I don’t spot the women. What I do see, however, are two shocked males with scales on different parts of their bodies, and one female. They’re a race I’ve never seen before.

I scramble up and look for the portal. It’s shrinking a few feet from me. With my bad leg, I struggle to sprint and jump in before it closes.

This time, I land on sand. Above me is a Cloud of Rehyr that snows. I smile my relief, because I know I made it home.

“Hey, hey! It’s you!” a woman calls for me.

I sit up and recognize her as one women I pulled from the pools. She’s still caked in the slush. I am too, but it no longer burns.

The other woman is nowhere to be found.

“I’ve been waiting all day for you,” she cries. “I can’t stop hearing their screams and begs.”

I shudder and force myself to focus on something other than my trauma. I need to get this situation under control, and I need to find Dramon.

“What do you mean all day? I’ve only been away for seconds.”

“No! This is all messed up. This has to be a dream. We have to go back for the other women.”

I look around but find no other portal. It’s gone. There is no way to reach the other women. Based on what I’m seeing in the distance, the old Xelor is gone, too.

The Palace is painted in gold and surrounded by flying beasts.

“How much time has passed?” I ask.

“Those women. Those poor women...” she rants.

The only thing I know is that we’re the only women on Xelor. War is coming, and the prize is us.

“We need shelter,” I blurt. "Clothes to hide. We can’t be discovered.”

I need Dramon. He’ll help me.

Where could he be? I doubt he is in The Capital. It’s not in his nature to stay on one spot for too long, specially one that’s surrounded by walls.

Is he in the mountains?

“I know you’re scared, but we need to get going. I’ll talk to King Centres, and then my… my husband will help us.”

“They’ll assault you,” she trembles. “Both of us.”

“I’ll hide under rags.”

“Don’t be stupid. You’re a human. Your skin makes you stand out.”

It’s true, but I can’t let her do the sneaking around for me. She can barely stand straight.

“We have no option. Let’s go and stay close.”

“Who are you?”

“Venus, and you?”

“Beysha.”

“We will be alright,” I promise her.

I survive for a living. 

We were lucky in landing close to The Palace, although this terrain is bad for my leg. Beysha has to support my weight as we make it through the sand. When we get close, I leave her in an abandoned shack and promise to return by night.

I shake off the dust of sacks, and I rip them to create a covering. Bending over, I grab a board and hope to create the illusion of an old man.

I make it into The Capital and weave through men. I’m struggling to breathe under the curtains of cloth I have on.

Something is happening in The Capital. There are streamers, crowds, flowers, and a buzz in the air.

“She’s beautiful.”

I freeze when I hear that pronoun.

“King Dramon is lucky.”

“He is. Imagine getting to marry the only woman left.”

I strain my hearing. Marrying? Dramon is marrying a woman?

“When do you think they’ll start having children?”

“Soon, I hope.”

I scramble away and nearly knock into a merchant.

“Watch it, old man,” he warns me.

I bow my head and scatter off.


a/n: only Xelor had a vanishing, and time processed differently while Venus was gone

Comments

What the effff

Patricia Hughes

Reading this chapter at 3am was a bad idea lol. Now, I forever have nightmares about the “Vanishing.”

Hasseur Stillwater

Gotta keep an eye out for selenar

Cremebrumay

So the vanishing transports women into vats of slush acid so they can all die slow horrible deaths? What is the point of that? Is this some weird way to rid planets of their population slowly and with chaos? An experiment to see what happens when women are gone? Is this acid stuff the most efficient way to kill them? The questions are killing me...and that little girls and baby girls are suffering this too 😭

Sarah Rowan

Btw we love you Elaine! ❤️❤️❤️

Lia

Yay! ❤️

RainbowRenee

Yay!!! ☺️

Lia

😂😂 you guys are dragging me. A post is coming today! 3 updates weekly!❤️

Ancientt

Brilliance takes time I suppose

Lia

My brain could not process all this😭

Movee

🙌🏻 I feel like when she says “update in a few hours!” She steps into a time altering portal of her own 😂😂🤣 Im not even mad.

RainbowRenee

Anyone else frantically refreshing their app in case of an update?

Lia

They are ezronians arghhhhh

Ritupon Hira

Two males with scales on different parts of the body. Guys they are Ezronians 😭

Ritupon Hira

I hope that Dramon sees Venus on his wedding day, recognizes her and stop that masquerade. If Dramon gets married and does the deed I do not think that a couple that suffered so much can survive. They barely started getting to know each other’s to be slapped in the face with something like that. For me it will be the sign that I need to stop reading that story. I love you Elaine and the romance, passion of your stories give me happiness in this COVID time but a turn of event like that will be too much for me......

Sonia Musunu

It seems that time passes differently in the place that venus was taken what seems like a second to her is a day o her planet

jeniene

Ok my brain is REELING

Clarissa Oquendo

😱😱😱😱

Clarissa Oquendo

So no one is going to comment on how the vanishing is literally teleporting the women into an alien cauldron with slushy acid?!!!

Riquca Reynolds

Noooo

Liz Price

SHIT IS ABOUT TO HIT THE FAN

Danie L.

Well if it is not Venus for me it just does not cut it.....😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Sonia Musunu

it better not be selena

L.M .S

This is just the cherry on top of the cake.🤬. He is marrying someone else and she is somewhere lost in the universe 😭😭😭.

Sonia Musunu

Right?! I am KO’d after reading this. 💀 It had BETTER not be Salami or I’ll come back from the dead and eat them all! 🧟‍♀️ 😂 I have a feeling its that third chick she pulled out of the sludge .....who better not be Salami.

RainbowRenee

Ok so I came back to reread this for the hundredth time and if you don’t let her make a grand entrance and say “I object” and have Dramon literally melt at seeing her again then I’m gonna die

Ariel

That's exactly my guess...

Tatiana Souza Alves

Nooooo

Charlene

No I’m crying don’t do this to me

Ariel

Admittedly I’m very hormonal rn, but ya know, the point still stands 😂 my heart can’t take this mess

nyniuks

Goddamn it, I literally cried the entire chapter

nyniuks

Please update I can’t take this anymore 😩 I get that time moved differently so it could possibly be years since the vanishing, Dramon remarrying.... this is going to be good. Look out Queen Venus is back baby 🤣

Janice

NO! Don't say that! Ugh!

Ins0mniaxXx

You out of control atp

Donna

Ancient please ok stop playing with us frfr

Donna

Waitttttt😭😭😭😭

Donna

DRAMON WHAT THE HELL

Sarah

All I know is that it better not be Selena

Asia

These two are always drenched in misunderstandings. This might be some deal Dramon had with Centres. Also, if I remember correctly, Xelor wedding traditions insist on doing the nasty in front of everyone 😬😬

Lia

So I wake up only to get my heart broken? 😭 😭 😭

rae louise

Pfffttt. She better go in there and drag her husband back. How dare he remarry after being so set of searching for her until he could no longer ride! Venus better go in there and set things straight. I’m having major anxiety and hope the next update comes sooner. 😰

Autumn

I think so could be Ak and Vox

jeniene

I agree this is some terminator shit😒and if its saline I will be pissed however what got me is the time that as passed since venus and the other women has been taken I just dont see this relationship working out anymore between venus and dramon it's just like Ak and Nebula😔however I hope that venus will allow him to explain himself before she leaves him for good

jeniene

My poor venus has to suffer the lost if her husband 😭😭but she is a fighter that I'm sure of and that's how I think rexon will come in play

jeniene

Elaine you need to stop sniffing that crake girl 🤪🤪

jeniene

How many years have passed? Time does things to a person hopefully it’s not been too long

Ree

My girl fights through HELL and this is what she comes back to?

Sofs Mi

🥺🥺😭🥺🥺 I mean based on the information you have given us it makes sense why dramon is getting married but man. Dammit Elaine. 😭😭

Sofs Mi

Never an easy day in the life of my girl Venus. Like, can she for once have something nice? like life is really intent on messing with her. This chapter had me horrified, reading about the pools of melting women. Now, I'm really curious about what is going on and WHO is behind it!!! Ancient, your mind!!!

Stepho

Nooooooooooo

Angie

King Dramon???? He is the King now?? Holy cow. How long it's been? 😲. Also two males with scales?? They must be Ezronians right?

Argyro Eleftheriou

I hope not😲

Argyro Eleftheriou

It has to be forced. There is no way he would willingly agree after the previous chapter 🥺

Mita

Dramon is marrying😳😳 How the heck did King Centres made him agree to this?? How long has Venus been gone??

Supreet

You'd think the creepy hellhole of decaying bodies and what sounds like dementors combined with killing robots is what will get to us. Yeah, no. It's this wedding that hit even harder

Lia

So all the other women died 🥲

Danielle

...And my tombstone will read “Died from shock reading Rider King” 😱😱💀 I don’t even know what’s got me more shook... the pools or this upcoming “marriage!” 😳

RainbowRenee

Im not lmao’ing anymore 😐

Danielle

My blood is actually boiling lmao. Like I understand why he would need to marry a woman. But still

Mita

What. The .hell. Elaine!!!

Lia

Ms Elaine you have me on the edge of my motherfucking seat. DRAMON IS MARRYING A WHAT? over Venus’ dead body MAAM

Mita

ARE YOU KIDDINH ME???

Mita

Elaine, please tell me you're working on the next update, I am tore up girl!

ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW

Oh. My. God. No, I can't handle this.

ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW

Please tell me it's not Salina

Dorota P.

the the hell is happening?

sukanya saha

I’m so glad she made it back, but I can only imagine what’s going to go down now 🤦🏻‍♀️

Cassandra

Well shit

Kiarah Johansen

wth I'm nervous

shaniqua johnson


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