Rider King part 35
Added 2021-05-12 19:21:29 +0000 UTCVENUS
The light eats my very existence, and it pulls me to its belly where acid burns my skin. I’m so hot that I’m screaming, but I don’t know if my voice can be heard on Xelor anymore.
I’ve been robbed by the unknown.
I throw my arms and legs out, but I hit nothing. I’m blind and falling. Seconds ago, I fell from the peak of my orgasm and into bliss. This is nothing like that.
I land in water with a violent splash. No, this isn't water. It’s a thick, suffocating, burning slush. It’s melting me alive. I struggle to swim to the top, and grab a vine to pull myself up.
I gasp when I break the surface and blink hard to clear my vision. I look to my left, and then I realize that what I had taken wasn’t a vine, but an arm. A dead woman floats next to me. No, dozens do. Adults, children, elderly in various stages of decomposition. I’m swimming in their coffin.
I scream, and then I realize other women are screaming with me. It’s the slush. It’s melting us.
I scramble over the bodies, grabbing bones and flesh. Few women squirm as well, but their upper body strength is not as good as mine.
Above me, there are floating plates connected to white portals. They are pools containing more women. I seemed to have landed in the bottom pool. This place is not natural. There’s metal everywhere, and the only organic substances are the slush and bodies.
I climb out of the pool and slip onto the floor. It’s a pitch-black metal that I’ve never seen on Xelor.
As I get back on my feet, I realize a figure is approaching me. It’s enormous, thin, faceless, bright, and its only features are two humanistic arms and legs.
“You son of a bitch!” I swing and hit what feels like glass.
The figure extends an arm and generates a long, sharp stick that crackles with electricity at the end. Already seeing that he wants to prod me back into the pool, I kick the base of the stick and drill it to his chin. He shudders noiselessly, and I use that chance to grab the stick and kick him into the pool.
Two more figures appear, and I make a run for it. I use the stick as a cane to support myself. I can’t think straight. The screaming is so loud that I don’t understand how these things don’t shatter.
Why are they doing this?
What are they?
There’s no ladder here, but I need to reach the portal on the plate above us. The one behind me is too far away. I must climb.
I turn, and I toss the shock stick with all my upper body strength. The precision is spot-on and rams into one of them. Instead of impaling them, it pushes them down. These things are hard to kill. That throw should have sent the shock stick right through them.
I reach the wall, but it’s so smooth that there’s nothing to cling to. Desperate, I look at the pool and gag when I see all the bones. I force myself to pick up a femur and throw it up at the wires connected to the pool above me. My heart shrinks as I throw a skull, and one wire gives out.
I begin to climb. My legs are useless, but my adrenaline and upper body strength keep me going. I don’t look down as I climb twenty feet and swing onto the platform.
There’s more squirming and screaming in this level. Knowing that time is running out, I blindly kneel and reach my hands to capture two hands. I drag the women out with a groan. There are dozens of more women here, but I don’t have the time to save them all.
A ship dispatches from the wall. It’s a small pod containing one of those evil figures. They’re coming for me.
“Run!”
I lap around the slimy edge of the pool, nearly falling off the platform.
“Help me, please!” someone screams.
I look back and burst into tears because I know I can’t save her. There’s too many of them.
We reach the white portal, and I do what seems natural. I dive into it without knowing if the two women I pulled out made it.
The burning has not stopped. It’s still killing me, but I’d rather draw my last breath on Xelor than on that slaughterhouse.
I thud on moist grass. It’s daytime here, but I can tell this isn’t Xelor. I sit up, and I don’t spot the women. What I do see, however, are two shocked males with scales on different parts of their bodies, and one female. They’re a race I’ve never seen before.
I scramble up and look for the portal. It’s shrinking a few feet from me. With my bad leg, I struggle to sprint and jump in before it closes.
This time, I land on sand. Above me is a Cloud of Rehyr that snows. I smile my relief, because I know I made it home.
“Hey, hey! It’s you!” a woman calls for me.
I sit up and recognize her as one women I pulled from the pools. She’s still caked in the slush. I am too, but it no longer burns.
The other woman is nowhere to be found.
“I’ve been waiting all day for you,” she cries. “I can’t stop hearing their screams and begs.”
I shudder and force myself to focus on something other than my trauma. I need to get this situation under control, and I need to find Dramon.
“What do you mean all day? I’ve only been away for seconds.”
“No! This is all messed up. This has to be a dream. We have to go back for the other women.”
I look around but find no other portal. It’s gone. There is no way to reach the other women. Based on what I’m seeing in the distance, the old Xelor is gone, too.
The Palace is painted in gold and surrounded by flying beasts.
“How much time has passed?” I ask.
“Those women. Those poor women...” she rants.
The only thing I know is that we’re the only women on Xelor. War is coming, and the prize is us.
“We need shelter,” I blurt. "Clothes to hide. We can’t be discovered.”
I need Dramon. He’ll help me.
Where could he be? I doubt he is in The Capital. It’s not in his nature to stay on one spot for too long, specially one that’s surrounded by walls.
Is he in the mountains?
“I know you’re scared, but we need to get going. I’ll talk to King Centres, and then my… my husband will help us.”
“They’ll assault you,” she trembles. “Both of us.”
“I’ll hide under rags.”
“Don’t be stupid. You’re a human. Your skin makes you stand out.”
It’s true, but I can’t let her do the sneaking around for me. She can barely stand straight.
“We have no option. Let’s go and stay close.”
“Who are you?”
“Venus, and you?”
“Beysha.”
“We will be alright,” I promise her.
I survive for a living.
We were lucky in landing close to The Palace, although this terrain is bad for my leg. Beysha has to support my weight as we make it through the sand. When we get close, I leave her in an abandoned shack and promise to return by night.
I shake off the dust of sacks, and I rip them to create a covering. Bending over, I grab a board and hope to create the illusion of an old man.
I make it into The Capital and weave through men. I’m struggling to breathe under the curtains of cloth I have on.
Something is happening in The Capital. There are streamers, crowds, flowers, and a buzz in the air.
“She’s beautiful.”
I freeze when I hear that pronoun.
“King Dramon is lucky.”
“He is. Imagine getting to marry the only woman left.”
I strain my hearing. Marrying? Dramon is marrying a woman?
“When do you think they’ll start having children?”
“Soon, I hope.”
I scramble away and nearly knock into a merchant.
“Watch it, old man,” he warns me.
I bow my head and scatter off.
a/n: only Xelor had a vanishing, and time processed differently while Venus was gone
Comments
What the effff
Patricia Hughes
2022-05-06 02:22:47 +0000 UTCReading this chapter at 3am was a bad idea lol. Now, I forever have nightmares about the “Vanishing.”
Hasseur Stillwater
2021-11-20 20:47:46 +0000 UTCGotta keep an eye out for selenar
Cremebrumay
2021-06-25 16:47:20 +0000 UTCSo the vanishing transports women into vats of slush acid so they can all die slow horrible deaths? What is the point of that? Is this some weird way to rid planets of their population slowly and with chaos? An experiment to see what happens when women are gone? Is this acid stuff the most efficient way to kill them? The questions are killing me...and that little girls and baby girls are suffering this too 😭
Sarah Rowan
2021-06-18 20:08:30 +0000 UTCBtw we love you Elaine! ❤️❤️❤️
Lia
2021-05-14 21:21:24 +0000 UTCYay! ❤️
RainbowRenee
2021-05-14 19:47:27 +0000 UTCYay!!! ☺️
Lia
2021-05-14 19:13:27 +0000 UTC😂😂 you guys are dragging me. A post is coming today! 3 updates weekly!❤️
Ancientt
2021-05-14 19:11:12 +0000 UTCBrilliance takes time I suppose
Lia
2021-05-14 19:10:26 +0000 UTCMy brain could not process all this😭
Movee
2021-05-14 18:10:47 +0000 UTC🙌🏻 I feel like when she says “update in a few hours!” She steps into a time altering portal of her own 😂😂🤣 Im not even mad.
RainbowRenee
2021-05-14 18:10:15 +0000 UTCAnyone else frantically refreshing their app in case of an update?
Lia
2021-05-14 05:32:56 +0000 UTCThey are ezronians arghhhhh
Ritupon Hira
2021-05-14 04:43:40 +0000 UTCTwo males with scales on different parts of the body. Guys they are Ezronians 😭
Ritupon Hira
2021-05-14 04:43:19 +0000 UTCI hope that Dramon sees Venus on his wedding day, recognizes her and stop that masquerade. If Dramon gets married and does the deed I do not think that a couple that suffered so much can survive. They barely started getting to know each other’s to be slapped in the face with something like that. For me it will be the sign that I need to stop reading that story. I love you Elaine and the romance, passion of your stories give me happiness in this COVID time but a turn of event like that will be too much for me......
Sonia Musunu
2021-05-13 23:55:29 +0000 UTCIt seems that time passes differently in the place that venus was taken what seems like a second to her is a day o her planet
jeniene
2021-05-13 22:11:07 +0000 UTCOk my brain is REELING
Clarissa Oquendo
2021-05-13 12:32:00 +0000 UTC😱😱😱😱
Clarissa Oquendo
2021-05-13 12:31:42 +0000 UTCSo no one is going to comment on how the vanishing is literally teleporting the women into an alien cauldron with slushy acid?!!!
Riquca Reynolds
2021-05-13 10:18:16 +0000 UTCNoooo
Liz Price
2021-05-13 09:21:20 +0000 UTCSHIT IS ABOUT TO HIT THE FAN
Danie L.
2021-05-13 06:40:35 +0000 UTCWell if it is not Venus for me it just does not cut it.....😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Sonia Musunu
2021-05-13 05:09:51 +0000 UTCit better not be selena
L.M .S
2021-05-13 05:07:46 +0000 UTCThis is just the cherry on top of the cake.🤬. He is marrying someone else and she is somewhere lost in the universe 😭😭😭.
Sonia Musunu
2021-05-13 03:27:50 +0000 UTCRight?! I am KO’d after reading this. 💀 It had BETTER not be Salami or I’ll come back from the dead and eat them all! 🧟♀️ 😂 I have a feeling its that third chick she pulled out of the sludge .....who better not be Salami.
RainbowRenee
2021-05-13 02:41:48 +0000 UTCOk so I came back to reread this for the hundredth time and if you don’t let her make a grand entrance and say “I object” and have Dramon literally melt at seeing her again then I’m gonna die
Ariel
2021-05-13 02:35:30 +0000 UTCThat's exactly my guess...
Tatiana Souza Alves
2021-05-13 02:32:34 +0000 UTCNooooo
Charlene
2021-05-13 02:06:25 +0000 UTCNo I’m crying don’t do this to me
Ariel
2021-05-13 01:00:58 +0000 UTCAdmittedly I’m very hormonal rn, but ya know, the point still stands 😂 my heart can’t take this mess
nyniuks
2021-05-13 00:21:49 +0000 UTCGoddamn it, I literally cried the entire chapter
nyniuks
2021-05-13 00:19:21 +0000 UTCPlease update I can’t take this anymore 😩 I get that time moved differently so it could possibly be years since the vanishing, Dramon remarrying.... this is going to be good. Look out Queen Venus is back baby 🤣
Janice
2021-05-13 00:16:06 +0000 UTCNO! Don't say that! Ugh!
Ins0mniaxXx
2021-05-13 00:13:44 +0000 UTCYou out of control atp
Donna
2021-05-12 23:30:00 +0000 UTCAncient please ok stop playing with us frfr
Donna
2021-05-12 23:29:32 +0000 UTCWaitttttt😭😭😭😭
Donna
2021-05-12 23:29:13 +0000 UTCDRAMON WHAT THE HELL
Sarah
2021-05-12 22:16:56 +0000 UTCAll I know is that it better not be Selena
Asia
2021-05-12 22:07:37 +0000 UTCThese two are always drenched in misunderstandings. This might be some deal Dramon had with Centres. Also, if I remember correctly, Xelor wedding traditions insist on doing the nasty in front of everyone 😬😬
Lia
2021-05-12 21:57:17 +0000 UTCSo I wake up only to get my heart broken? 😭 😭 😭
rae louise
2021-05-12 21:56:01 +0000 UTCPfffttt. She better go in there and drag her husband back. How dare he remarry after being so set of searching for her until he could no longer ride! Venus better go in there and set things straight. I’m having major anxiety and hope the next update comes sooner. 😰
Autumn
2021-05-12 21:23:31 +0000 UTCI think so could be Ak and Vox
jeniene
2021-05-12 21:21:19 +0000 UTCI agree this is some terminator shit😒and if its saline I will be pissed however what got me is the time that as passed since venus and the other women has been taken I just dont see this relationship working out anymore between venus and dramon it's just like Ak and Nebula😔however I hope that venus will allow him to explain himself before she leaves him for good
jeniene
2021-05-12 21:20:09 +0000 UTCMy poor venus has to suffer the lost if her husband 😭😭but she is a fighter that I'm sure of and that's how I think rexon will come in play
jeniene
2021-05-12 21:14:50 +0000 UTCElaine you need to stop sniffing that crake girl 🤪🤪
jeniene
2021-05-12 21:13:37 +0000 UTCHow many years have passed? Time does things to a person hopefully it’s not been too long
Ree
2021-05-12 20:58:58 +0000 UTCMy girl fights through HELL and this is what she comes back to?
Sofs Mi
2021-05-12 20:16:54 +0000 UTC🥺🥺😭🥺🥺 I mean based on the information you have given us it makes sense why dramon is getting married but man. Dammit Elaine. 😭😭
Sofs Mi
2021-05-12 20:14:54 +0000 UTCNever an easy day in the life of my girl Venus. Like, can she for once have something nice? like life is really intent on messing with her. This chapter had me horrified, reading about the pools of melting women. Now, I'm really curious about what is going on and WHO is behind it!!! Ancient, your mind!!!
Stepho
2021-05-12 20:13:57 +0000 UTCNooooooooooo
Angie
2021-05-12 20:06:30 +0000 UTCKing Dramon???? He is the King now?? Holy cow. How long it's been? 😲. Also two males with scales?? They must be Ezronians right?
Argyro Eleftheriou
2021-05-12 19:57:13 +0000 UTCI hope not😲
Argyro Eleftheriou
2021-05-12 19:55:19 +0000 UTCIt has to be forced. There is no way he would willingly agree after the previous chapter 🥺
Mita
2021-05-12 19:54:35 +0000 UTCDramon is marrying😳😳 How the heck did King Centres made him agree to this?? How long has Venus been gone??
Supreet
2021-05-12 19:53:13 +0000 UTCYou'd think the creepy hellhole of decaying bodies and what sounds like dementors combined with killing robots is what will get to us. Yeah, no. It's this wedding that hit even harder
Lia
2021-05-12 19:51:09 +0000 UTCSo all the other women died 🥲
Danielle
2021-05-12 19:49:07 +0000 UTC...And my tombstone will read “Died from shock reading Rider King” 😱😱💀 I don’t even know what’s got me more shook... the pools or this upcoming “marriage!” 😳
RainbowRenee
2021-05-12 19:48:55 +0000 UTCIm not lmao’ing anymore 😐
Danielle
2021-05-12 19:47:08 +0000 UTCMy blood is actually boiling lmao. Like I understand why he would need to marry a woman. But still
Mita
2021-05-12 19:45:36 +0000 UTCWhat. The .hell. Elaine!!!
Lia
2021-05-12 19:44:07 +0000 UTCMs Elaine you have me on the edge of my motherfucking seat. DRAMON IS MARRYING A WHAT? over Venus’ dead body MAAM
Mita
2021-05-12 19:42:56 +0000 UTCARE YOU KIDDINH ME???
Mita
2021-05-12 19:42:20 +0000 UTCElaine, please tell me you're working on the next update, I am tore up girl!
ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW
2021-05-12 19:39:38 +0000 UTCOh. My. God. No, I can't handle this.
ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW
2021-05-12 19:36:32 +0000 UTCPlease tell me it's not Salina
Dorota P.
2021-05-12 19:36:21 +0000 UTCthe the hell is happening?
sukanya saha
2021-05-12 19:29:32 +0000 UTCI’m so glad she made it back, but I can only imagine what’s going to go down now 🤦🏻♀️
Cassandra
2021-05-12 19:27:21 +0000 UTCWell shit
Kiarah Johansen
2021-05-12 19:27:18 +0000 UTCwth I'm nervous
shaniqua johnson
2021-05-12 19:26:35 +0000 UTC