Future Story Feedback
Added 2024-03-05 08:13:25 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Hope your week’s off to a solid start. I’ve been working on a new story for the past month and I’m excited about the prospect of sharing it with you after I finish up SSS3. As loyal patrons, I’d be really keen to get your feedback on the current direction.
The story dives into themes of transformation and corruption. It centers on a husband, who like Greg in my original comic, receives the ChangeGPT app in mysterious circumstances. He begins using the app on his wife in an attempt to spice up a boring but mostly comfortable marriage. This leads to unforeseen consequences that ultimately begin to spiral out of control. In this story we will also get an insight into the app’s “personality“ and how it contributes to the story.
You can expect a gradual unfolding of the narrative, focusing on how each incremental change affects the character’s daily life, job and her relationships with her husband, friends, and family.
TF themes will include:
- Slutification
- BE/AE
- Age Regression
- Beautification
- Amongst others
Please let me know if this is something you would be interested in reading. Also if you have any suggestions feel free to pop them in the comments as this story is still in its early stages of being written.
Comments
Sounds like we are on the same page! The intention is to have the characters as likeable and realistic as possible. The husband will be reluctant to use the app but it will wear him down as it manipulates him.
TheAltrApp
2024-03-06 18:26:20 +0000 UTCSounds promising! Always a bliss to see a new cast react to such strange new powers and strange changes to oneself or the world around one. I would love the characters to not be complete unlikable pricks (e.g. the man just acting purely for his selfish gains but rather thinking he is doing something good or at least something is deserved). Nothing against some needed (questionable) testing of said new powers (if not with the intention to revert it back later); or a common misapplication of the app; or for a well-earned tease or payback :P For the TF themes you already named plenty and I hope to see plenty fitting to the storyline. Always an advocate of some size changing, which I wouldn’t what to miss (even if just as a side thing).
Jakken Haggar
2024-03-06 13:29:09 +0000 UTCOf course. But you have basically described 9/10 stories on TGcomics. I always find more interesting stories, where sex isn't the main focus. And this sounds like the opposite.
blabla260
2024-03-06 10:11:38 +0000 UTCSorry it doesn’t float your boat. The concept for SSS isn’t particularly original either. There are always plenty of ways to make something well worn interesting.
TheAltrApp
2024-03-06 10:05:45 +0000 UTCSorry, this sounds like something we have had a hundred times. Not interested.
blabla260
2024-03-06 10:01:07 +0000 UTCAlways keen on ways to improve the dynamic! I’ll definitely take this into consideration. So far I have I have only really pulled together a skeleton for this story so there is lots of room to move.
TheAltrApp
2024-03-05 20:01:02 +0000 UTCSounds like you've got all the ingredients for an exciting plot. It would be cool to see the trigger for the story be something like a younger and fitter couple moving in as new neighbors causing the protagonist to seek to spice up his boring and comfortable marriage. I'm envisioning the new male neighbor humbly bragging about his sexy wife, and getting under the protagonists skin. Could set up future interactions with the neighbor's wife as a foil for the protagonists wife. The protagonist's wife receives 'upgrades' (BE, AE, age regression, Weight loss) and the neighbor's wife receives certain downgrades (Breast reduction, loss of height, weight gain, AE perhaps framed as a change from an hourglass to a bottom-heavy pear). Just some ideas, maybe for a future chapter since it sounds like you'd prefer to focus on the husband and wife. So, take them or leave them, either way, as is, this story idea sounds very interesting.
Polarisdreamer
2024-03-05 19:36:23 +0000 UTCHadn’t considered this as part of the story but it could be possible in the later stages for sure.
TheAltrApp
2024-03-05 18:35:49 +0000 UTCI think weight (WL) is a certainty but race change might be tricky to work into this one. I have some ideas for a race change short I want to try at some point though.
TheAltrApp
2024-03-05 18:34:34 +0000 UTCIt would be cool to see the wife getting control of the app herself and "modify" herself according to her new personality.
Popcorn523
2024-03-05 14:51:55 +0000 UTCWould a weight or race change be possible ?
freier
2024-03-05 13:46:29 +0000 UTC
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