MORE CONCEPT! Takin' into account the sexiest, most in-depth critiques received in the comments of the last concept.. I tried to apply what y'all suggested into this! Any more constructive criticism is hella appreciated. My lovely civvies, y'all help me so much! I'd be wasting away like a chatty bum without advice so tasty to feast upon if it weren't for y'all. So, anything to say is always welcomed with open arms, slathered in warm butter. Enjoy!