Found page 102
Added 2022-03-21 13:16:18 +0000 UTCso here is the original https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6847701 which Ive tidied up in the new version. I think this is one of the first pages where i think that whilst the art is considerably better in the redone version. theres more life in the original. It was one of my main fears of redrawing this comic that I sanitize it and I think this page shows a bit of that that whilst the art is better the life in the art isn't the same. I'll have to keep that more in mind going forward.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/darpsou3b2af6gl/102.png?dl=0
Comments
Honestly I like both renditions. I think I see what you mean with the โlifeโ in the art, I do think the expressions are better defined in the newer version. I think it might be in part to the perspective change.. the new angle didnโt lend to Gemma turning around fully like she appears to be in the original. Although her expression is more subtle in the new version, which would likely be more accurate as to not make Paul suspicious :P The play area is also much bigger, maybe a few extra kiddos would have filled some of the gap. Just some thoughts :> As always, well done <3
2022-03-24 09:24:01 +0000 UTCMee and my other half I asked her
Jay Schoenhaar
2022-03-22 03:50:57 +0000 UTC๐ค anyone interested in investing into a abdl version of chuck e cheeses?
2022-03-22 01:36:12 +0000 UTCOh I so agree with that because I want more places where we littles can be ourselves without being judged by other people as well!!
MARK ANTHONY FLOWERS
2022-03-21 23:03:42 +0000 UTC
