Laurel's New Life
Added 2021-03-27 16:21:12 +0000 UTCGood morning Lords and Ladies, I wanted to try something different. As I'm (struggling) to be a good enough writer to work on my Grand Tale story, I wanted to write something fun, please give me your feedback =)
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Gosh ya, I should have paid more attention in English class at school!
Sozokureed
2021-03-29 14:17:03 +0000 UTCI think starting out with basic stuff for a while is best.
LitigationJackson
2021-03-28 18:45:17 +0000 UTCpunctuation can get so annoying. I think that's why some authors like Cormac McCarthy don't even bother with a ton of punctuation.
LitigationJackson
2021-03-28 18:44:35 +0000 UTCLavish praise of course! lol actually maybe just tips of better dialogue or good use of punctuation. I never really know how to write professionally. But it was fun to get out on paper, maybe I should do a few more at least a story about dark iron chastity and Laurel's wedding night with Reed ;)
Sozokureed
2021-03-28 17:27:53 +0000 UTCThank you!
Sozokureed
2021-03-28 17:25:43 +0000 UTCI really liked this story! It was fun to see a shy sub Laurel, and Evil Raspberry isn't something we see very often either. This was a lot of fun! I hope we get to see more mini stories from you, and that you keep writing and improving. What kind of feedback are you looking for?
Jazz
2021-03-28 01:44:29 +0000 UTCHeh, fun story. =)
Wyland
2021-03-27 23:36:55 +0000 UTC
