After-hours 35 p15 up, what's next?
Added 2024-04-12 21:29:55 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with!
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for the part where Mary and Bons hop onto their bikes: I think you could sneak in more lewdness if the Carrot Pals start ripping off parts of their bikinis to get rid of weight (so they can get more speed on the bikes). Leave the shoes tho...
MizaruSketch
2024-04-12 21:59:48 +0000 UTCRecalling previous posts, here's what i had in mind: The page will start with Bonnie popping out a pair of binoculars off her thigh fluff, only to see monica down the road, looking back towards her (bonnie), and pulling her pants down to moon her to mock her. Monica is about to win!! That's when Mary and Bons immediately hop into their bikes (as is, no jackets or shorts, no time!!) , and comically zoom towards the finish line. If there is still room int his page, we could show the finish line. Muggs and Fel would be at the finish line. Mugger would mention she brought a high speed camera for this. It would be three frames: 1- Monica is closing in on the finish line. Smug, eyes closed, head tilted back, swimming in confidence. 2- Monica's frontal wheel is crossing said line, with the blur of bonnie and mary peeking through the right side of the frame. 3- Monica and her bike tilt forward out of the sheer wind force provoked by the other two, Bonnie and Mary only zoom by.
Kenno Arkkan
2024-04-12 21:36:32 +0000 UTC
