Escapades Issue 4 - Page 14 - Sketch
Added 2019-05-22 22:02:59 +0000 UTCHey hey, Aer's almost done with her flashback! Took her long enough!
I might still tweak the composition a little, maybe move Aer's narration boxes and squish them to be horizontal rather than vertical, that way I could bring the 'fully webbed' W&A closer to the center, letting us see more of the 'half-webbed' versions behind them. It was supposed to be a kind of sequence but I dunno if it quite works right now. But that's what these sketch pages are for - to still have the freedom to tinker with this kind of thing!
Comments
Thanks, Nin! It's been a fun balancing act. Many people were happy with the damsel-in-distress style of #3 and will hopefully be pleased with #4 too, but I have also received a few messages from people who would prefer to go back to the pleasant, consensual kink shenanigans of #1&2, and I totally understand that. I don't want either kind of story to get stale, so I have a few concepts ready for #5 that lie on varying points of the playtime/peril spectrum and can react accordingly to how well #4 is received, ie whether to double down on peril, or give everyone a 'breather' issue.
Wossa
2019-05-24 15:27:47 +0000 UTCI know these are just sketches but this is looking like a awesome issue! If there is one thing I like about this one it is Wossy and Aer are in trouble in this one as opposed to the more playful side of things they are use to. Kind of adds a nice break to things.(not saying the playful one's are bad) Can't wait to see how this one works out and definitely a fun concept for these two I hope you experiment more.
ninman42
2019-05-22 22:11:47 +0000 UTC
