Jack's Lament (ORIGINAL ENDING) - Mortius Cover
Added 2023-10-13 23:10:01 +0000 UTCYep - I'm doing this song too! BUT I NEED YOUR HELP. Once you have listened through and enjoyed your exclusive early access to my upcoming cover, I need you to go find the OTHER version, uploaded to Patreon at the exact same time, and scroll to about 2:35... because I recorded two different endings.
The one you're listening to now stays in the original key for the whole song, while the other one goes up to a DIFFERENT key for a new and bombastic ending! Please, go listen to both, and let me know which one YOU think should make it to the YouTube Channel!!
(And also, of course, the mere existence of this cover is exclusive and privileged information, so shhhhh!!!)
Comments
Bravo! Excellent performance. Now to listen to the second one and decide.
Keith Rodman
2023-10-16 02:06:08 +0000 UTCOn another listen--I'm sorry I don't have the vocabulary to be as precise as I'd like here--the key change might work better if you changed "if he only could" to lead up into it, instead of jumping straight from one key to the other on "Oh, there's an empty place..."?
AmbularD
2023-10-14 04:07:07 +0000 UTCOh, well done! ❤️ They're both great (better than I could do, for sure!) but I think I like this version better. I'm a sucker for key changes normally, but the one in the other version just doesn't work well for me; it felt a bit jarring. You nailed the delivery throughout better in this version, I think!
AmbularD
2023-10-14 03:59:21 +0000 UTC
