Jack's Lament (ADJUSTED ENDING) - Mortius Cover
Added 2023-10-13 23:10:01 +0000 UTCYep - I'm doing this song too! BUT I NEED YOUR HELP. Once you have listened through and enjoyed your exclusive early access to my upcoming cover, I need you to go find the OTHER version, uploaded to Patreon at the exact same time, and scroll to about 2:35... because I recorded two different endings.
The one in the other post stays in the original key for the whole song, while this one goes up to a DIFFERENT key for a new and bombastic ending! Please, go listen to both, and let me know which one YOU think should make it to the YouTube Channel!!
(And also, of course, the mere existence of this cover is exclusive and privileged information, so shhhhh!!!)
Comments
Bravo again! Personally, I like the key change. I agree with Kris Ivy that it sounds more frustrated (and sad) rather than angry, maybe a 70/30 split. In my experience, a lot of people are angry while being, or because of being frustrated, even in sorrow, and I think it works well at this point in the song, regardless of if people hear it as anger or frustration. Both emotions, I think, would be reasonably expected from the character at this point. Yes, laments are usually sorrowful, but there are usually other emotions involved. It's hard to put my explanation into words, so I hope you understand what I am trying to say. Anyway, that's my two cents worth. You can be proud of whichever version you release. Thank you!
Keith Rodman
2023-10-16 02:34:07 +0000 UTCI liked the second one better due to the pure emotion behind it. I can “see” your performance. I saw the “strain” in your voice as pure frustration. He hasn’t found a resolution within himself, so it worked.
kris ivy
2023-10-14 03:11:05 +0000 UTC
