PARADISE part1 (color)
Added 2025-08-26 10:48:46 +0000 UTCThis work consists of a total of five parts. In the opening, I inevitably dedicated a significant portion to depicting the relationships between characters. Iโd greatly appreciate your understanding. Iโm open to all kinds of feedback, so please feel free to leave comments anytime. Thank you for your support! The Japanese translation is currently in its final stages, and Iโll attach it to this post as soon as itโs completed. Please wait just a little longer. ์ด๋ฒ ์ํ์ ์ด 5ํํธ๋ก ๊ตฌ์ฑ๋ฉ๋๋ค. ์์๋ถ๋ถ์์ ๋ถ๊ฐํผํ๊ฒ ์ธ๋ฌผ๊ฐ์ ๊ด๊ณ๋ฅผ ๋ฌ์ฌํ๋๋ฐ ๋ง์ ๋ถ๋ถ์ ํ ์ ํ์ต๋๋ค. ๋๊ทธ๋ฝ๊ฒ ์ดํดํด์ฃผ์๋ฉด ๊ฐ์ฌํ๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค. ์ฌ๋ฌ๊ฐ์ง ์๊ฒฌ๋ ๋ฐ๊ณ ์์ผ๋ ์ธ์ ๋ ๋๊ธ ๋จ๊ฒจ์ฃผ์ธ์. ์์ํด์ฃผ์ ์ ๊ฐ์ฌํฉ๋๋ค. ์ผ๋ณธ์ด๋ ํ์ฌ ๋ง๋ฐ์ง ๋ฒ์ญ์ค์ด๋ ์๋ฃ๋๋ ์ฆ์ ์ด ๊ธ์ ์ฒจ๋ถํ๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค. ์กฐ๊ธ๋ง๋ ๊ธฐ๋ค๋ ค์ฃผ์ธ์ ใใฎไฝๅใฏๅ จ5้จใงๆงๆใใใฆใใพใใๅ้ ญใงใฏใใฉใใใฆใใญใฃใฉใฏใฟใผ้ใฎ้ขไฟๆงใฎๆๅใซๅคใใฎ้จๅใ่ฒปใใใพใใใๅฏๅคงใชใ็่งฃใใใใ ใใใฐๅนธใใงใใใใพใใพใชใๆ่ฆใๅใไปใใฆใใพใใฎใงใใใคใงใใณใกใณใใๆฎใใฆใใ ใใใๅฟๆดใใฆใใใฆใใใใจใ๏ผๆฅๆฌ่ช็ฟป่จณใฏ็พๅจๆ็ตๆฎต้ใซใใใๅฎไบๆฌก็ฌฌใใฎๆ็จฟใซๆทปไปใใพใใใใๅฐใใ ใใๅพ ใกใใ ใใใ
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ใใฎ้ใใ ใใๆ่ฟใฏใใใฃใจใใฃใใผใซใชๅฑ้ใซใคใใฆ่ใใฆใใใใ ใๅ็ดใช็ถๆณใใใจใญใๅฑ้ใซ็งปใใใใใชใใฆใไธปไบบๅ ฌใจใใญใคใณใใฉใใช็ตใๆใฃใฆใใใใใใใฃใจ็ดฐใใๆๅใใๆนๆณใใใใใใๆๅใ่ฑใใซใชใใฐใชใใปใฉใๅพๅใฎ็็บๅใๅผทใใชใใจๆใใ๏ผๅใ่จใฃใใใใซใใใฎไฝๅใซใฏ3ไบบใฎใญใฃใฉใฏใฟใผใๅบใฆใใใใใใใซใใใฌใคใฏ็ตถๅฏพใซๆใใคใใใ ใ๏ผๅฟๆดใใฆใใใฆใใใใจใใใใใใใใใใใใญ๏ผ๐
laliberte
2025-08-27 02:26:18 +0000 UTC์ใ ใ ใ ใ ใ ์ฐ๋ฆฐ 4๋ฌ๋จ์์ง๋ง ์๊ฐ๋์ ์ ๋ฐ์ด๊ตฌ๋
gws0665
2025-08-26 17:14:58 +0000 UTCๆฐไฝๅฟๅพ ใกใซใใฆใใพใใใ(*^^*) ็ง่ช่บซNTRไฝๅใฏๅ ใกใๅใฎ้็จใใใฎๅฟๆ ่กจ็พใไธๅฏงใงใใใฐใใใปใฉๅพๅใๅผใ็ซใคใจ่ใใฆใใใฎใงใใใฎpart1ใฎๅบ็คๆๅใฏๅฟ ่ฆใชใใฎใงใใฃใใจๆใใพใใใ็งใฏๆใพใใใฃใใงใใ 3ใใญใคใณใจใใใฎใฏๅ ็ใฎไฝๅ็พคใฎไธญใงใใใใใๅๆๆฆใซใชใใใจๆใใพใใไฝ็ปใฏ็ธๅฝ่ฆๅดใชใใใใงใใใใใๅ ็ใฎๆใ่คๆฐใใฌใคๆๅใ่ฆใใใจๆใใจๅคงๅคๆฅฝใใฟใงใใ 5partใจใใใใฎ้ทๆใทใชใผใบใ็กไบๅฎ่ตฐใงใใใใจใๅฟใใ้กใฃใฆใใพใใใ่บซไฝใๅคงๅใซใชใใฃใฆใใ ใใใ
ใฝใฃใใผ
2025-08-26 15:46:08 +0000 UTC๋ํํ ํ๋ฌ์ 2์ฃผ๊ฐ์ ์๋๋๊น ๊ธ๋ฐฉ์ใ ใ
laliberte
2025-08-26 12:40:42 +0000 UTCํํธ5๊น์ง ์ด๋ป๊ฒ ๊ธฐ๋ค๋ฆฌ์ง?
gws0665
2025-08-26 12:39:01 +0000 UTC
