Yakshi vs. Steph - Part 1
Added 2022-02-17 20:06:05 +0000 UTCThe comic is in a PDF file - https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1S7PoVOgrVinCZrW9X8V8ACa6i40THKqW?usp=sharing
Sorry for not posting anything earlier, this short comic didnt take me a long time to draw, I was learning a new program, and it took a big ol chunk.
Please tell me your thoughts on the new style. Any kind of critiques are welcome.
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Comments
I really like how smoothly this format transitions between characters/dialogues. It looks like it's saving a lot on background designs and focusing on characters in portions with lots of dialogue. I think it's a good first go! My only criticism is that there are some stretches of "empty" space between panels. I think the speech bubbles could be placed closer to each other to help reduce that space.
Dizzie
2022-02-18 17:42:23 +0000 UTCWoooo here we go! 😃 👣 We're going to have some fun now!
Hairless Chris
2022-02-18 04:50:07 +0000 UTClooks awesome, way to leave me hangin
2022-02-18 04:03:56 +0000 UTClmao. now this is shaping up.
hellenberg
2022-02-18 00:41:39 +0000 UTCLooks awesome so far. Perfect intro and nice cliffhanger! Nice shot of the feet up close.
skeetbobble
2022-02-17 22:46:05 +0000 UTCLooks good man, keep it up!
RichardITA
2022-02-17 21:14:03 +0000 UTCDid you have any problems opening and reading the file?
Briel7
2022-02-17 20:36:25 +0000 UTCAye aye capitan!
Briel7
2022-02-17 20:33:00 +0000 UTCI'll immediately admit I'm biased against 3d and 2d getting mixed. However I will admit you did a great job with it. As for the webcomic style, I'll withhold judging to harshly until the rest of this set is out. But I will give my concerns, there's a ton of just blank unused space on the page, the lack of scenery is very apparent. After you soak in the initial character expression that's pretty much all there is to see. All the intricate details make the comics worth examining over again with our eyes is just non existent. Looking forward to part two.
DustyShelves
2022-02-17 20:24:43 +0000 UTCYou need to draw stockings more~
p-o-t-k
2022-02-17 20:12:42 +0000 UTCIt beginsss~~~
Qurrionette
2022-02-17 20:07:10 +0000 UTC
