Animation Preview 39 % (+6%) - Thats Kinda Deep Girl... *** DRAFT Feedback Requested ***

See if you can maybe have her hand come around and grab her ass 😁

Antwaan

I love it

Eric Clark

I gave this some taught ... tell you the truth , I would'nt care if it came out of her ass ... (( hah ha )) ... Weeeeeeeeee ...

John McCarthy

I like it! But as others have said maybe tone down the bulge when it gets into Maggie's chest? Looks kinda dangerous...

Fee

Agreeing with many other comments about the cock distorting anatomy, look a bit weird going that far and stretching so much. I would add that the nearly 90degree downward bend looks strange and painful. If Maggie was bent further forward to align her mouth to throat it might fix both issues a bit. Again though, suuuuuper hot. Bodies and movement look great. Love the slowly increasing depth of her thrusts. Fapfapfap

Darth Pax

Needs some gagging, spitting, cock slober lol maybe even little puck.

Red girl fan

Can't wait till its finished!

That looks absolutely fantastic! My only suggestion is that I agree with Ciaran's observation that Mary's cock shouldn't bulge the skin of Maggie's chest like that. In terms of anatomy Mary's penis would be sliding down Maggie's throat and down into her rib cage so the bulge would only be visible to the base of Maggie's neck as beyond that point it's going deeper behind Maggie's collar bones. Having said that everything else looks great, and the structure of Maggie's skull is flawless which considering how wide her mouth is open really shows your skill as an animator Red. That seems to be one of the most difficult things to do and in many animations its a weak spot as when the model opens its mouth really wide it doesn't look right as the jaw flattens out or does other things it's not supposed to, but you nailed it perfectly! Any chance we'll see Maggie shed a few tears when Mary feeds her all of it?

bigwiggy

I'm with Gld

Jonny Seed

That's pretty funny.

JD

I think it's great.. except.. when at the deepest, Mary's dick seems to be in front of Maggie's sternum. Even down between Maggie's breast. Which isn't anatomically possible. The other thing, maybe make her tilt her head back?? More like a sword swallower would. This would all Mary to stay straighter. Just a couple thoughts.

glrider

Love it!

BunnyRabbit

I have to agree all so , when it hits her tit's it looks like it grew 3 " more ... so it makes her dick look like 15 " ... But any way (( WHOW )) ...

John McCarthy

thats fucking hot but maybe mary's dick is a little long ┐(‘～` )┌

Dildo Faggins

I'm glad to hear that you're happy with your work, you should definitely be proud of it! 😄 And you are right, Mary's weenie is definitely extreme and a bit of exaggeration is perfectly fine! If you were to change it, i would suggest leaving her throat bulge the exact same as it is now, then having Maggie's chest expand to show the cock pushing out her ribs. Then when Mary is all the way in, the cock can bulge out her stomach fully just like it does with her throat. Though i realise that what I'm suggesting may be very difficult and honestly, it's really not a big deal 😹. As you can tell fron the overall tone of my original comment, I was still more than pleased by what i was seeing here 😉😻😻😻😻😻

Ciarán M

Thank you Ciran! I am glad you liked the preview :) It was a LOT of work but I am happy with the end result. I actually scrapped it and started over at one point :( Anywho, the buldging is a bit unrealstic but I took a note from one of my fav animators in making it (animopron if your wondering). I might tone it down a little though. Its definetley extreme but... it is Marys weenie after all!

Agent Red Girl

in support of this, I like that if it stops a bit shallower, it seems like she's "bottoming out" and that her cock is more just filling the available space instead of just continuing to push down. even if that isn't visually what is happening, if it stops at around her collarbone it might appear to really be using all that she physically has

bhroom

I... I... just... WOW!!! I'm going to be honest, I wasn't entirely sure how I was going to feel about seeing that monster cock going down Maggie's throat, like I worried that it might look a little too much for me 😅. But this preview has more than put that fear to rest! To put it bluntly, this preview was so god damn f*cking hot! Jesus! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Okay, composing myself now... I'm calm. The extra wait for this preview was more than worth it, Red, and the extra work that you put in to allow Mary's cock to pass through Maggie's mouth, squeeze and bulge out her throat looks fantastic. There's something I'm wondering though, when Mary's cock passes through Maggie's throat perhaps it shouldn't bulge her chest so much since I think it would be behind her ribs at that point. Now it looks her cock is sliding on top of Maggie's ribs, right underneath the skin, rather than being behind the rib-cage. I hope that makes sense. I don't know, I might be completely wrong on that as human anatomy and biology isn't exactly something I'm super knowledgeable about 😹. Besides, as we see with Mary's cock size, a bit of exaggeration and stylisation isn't necessarily a bad thing 😉. But even so, the actual look of Mary's cock passing through Maggie and bulging out her skin as it slides back and forth looks brilliant and you did an amazing job on the effect. And I really like the angle, poses and motions of the characters too. Starting with Mary, the arch in her back with her breasts pushed forward towards Maggie's head, with her big booty pushed out too look so very sexy, especially with that sensual back and forth motion as she thrusts. That moment early on when Mary slowly forces her cock in further is so incredibly sexy, made even better by how Maggie's eyes widen as she feels it push deeper inside her. And then those faster, sharper thrusts towards the end... oh, be still my beating heart! 😻😻😻😻😻 Maggie too looks terrific throughout this scene, her face throughout looks great with that transition from her "focus" expression at the start to the eyes-wide "oh dear god, she's so big and so deep!" look shortly after 😹. I also like how she reaches a hand back to hold the bed to brace herself one Mary really starts to thrust hard 😸. I don't really have anything else to suggest as you've already written that to-do list, all of which sounds marvellous. I for one am very eager to see this scene again but with Maggie stroking herself a little with Mary's huge boobs and booty sensually bouncing and jiggling while she thrusts. And adding more blinking for Maggie will definitely add even more life and expressiveness to her. Goodness... I keep watching this preview over and over as it's just so damned good! 😹 I really do think that AML4+ will be your very best work, both in terms of the visuals and with your animation quality and skill continuing to improve, that and the wonderfully erotic scenario that we have here 😉😻😻😻😻 Magnificent work on this, Red! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Words can't describe how eager I am for moar! And that teaser in the description also gets me extra excited, I now definitely want to see Maggie's nose buried deep in Mary's bush!

Ciarán M

Ya know, I checked this out again and it goes about about 2 inches too "low" so I might tone down the length a little here.

Agent Red Girl

I know it looks like that... but, that is just the actually length of Marys dick. =/

Agent Red Girl

I believe the dick is going too deep in the throat? It seems way to long (length) especially thoward the end of the preview, it's not supposed to look like she have a 4 feet dick is she?

Jean-Daniel Bouchard