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Added 2022-06-12 05:00:03 +0000 UTCDoes this chapter make you feel any better about the last one? Worse? Do they read better as a pair? There is a slightly expanded section in here about the reasoning for the away mission being set up the way it was. Would moving that into the previous chapter help, do you think, or do people really want to see a full half-chapter of posturing about stuff that can easily be inferred? In favor of just getting on with it, myself.
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Been following the series since the first chapters posted on RR and typically don't comment since I am just along for the ride, but after seeing the reaction that people had to the last chapter and then this one, I realized that there has been something frustrating me from time to time. Namely that Rain seems to regularly regress character wise. I wonder if this has to do with your own perspective of him? Has he changed as much in your perception of him, as he has in the story? In the story he has become a powerful silverplate, physically imposing, leader and founder of a community, survivor of many near death experiences, winner of many battles, and a character heard of by distant strangers. To counter this you have given him an inner gentleness and a set of insecurities. I have no problem with gentleness. True masculinity requires it, otherwise you end up with something hard and unfeeling that will try to crush everything. However it feels like in order to allow for him to remain kind and gentle, you feel that he must have insecurities. Don't get me wrong. It was good writing to include that he possessed such imperfections. Such things also do not go away quickly, they take time and effort to heal. But while he has grown externally, he has not grown internally. None of his insecurities have grown better or worse (except maybe for his paranoia about safety, but that has been a meme since he first got his armor). He has not tempered his kindness with maturity and wisdom, thereby making it often seem like nothing but "niceguy" syndrome. The fact that he has grown so much externally, just amplifies how little he seems to have grown internally at times. The best swords across all of history and cultures possess two characteristics. First they have two key elements, a "soft" core and a hard exterior. When the two elements are combined, they create a strength and cohesiveness not found in either individually. The second characteristic is that they do not possess imperfections. The imperfections are beaten out first with fire and hammer, followed by prolonged and focused grinding. The elements for Rain's inner growth (and external) are all there. The stage is consistently set, but who he is at his core, forever remains the same insecure child that arrived in a world even harsher than our own. Somehow he has survived and seen so much, but whenever his inner dialogue is heard or he makes himself vulnerable to others, we find that the insecurities are not gone and real maturity in his thinking has not set in. The Rain of chapter 202 comes across as no wiser or more confident than the Rain of chapter 2. If anything the Rain of chapter 2 was braver simply because he possessed less information. Rain's inner man should change, and not necessarily entirely for the better. PTSD is a real thing (although I don't feel like this story warrants such a change in Rain yet, simply using it as an example), but so also is the act of someone growing wiser and more mature. Disclaimer: I really do love this story and this is probably my only real complaint. The world building is excellent, the fights are intoxicating, the characters of others outside of Rain are well developed (although there is the danger that they might never change...), there is mystery, an uncertain future and outcome, the plot continues to move and develop, and so much more. I look forward to continuing to read your work and hope to see you continue to grow as a writer.
Horatio Hornet
2022-06-23 02:18:12 +0000 UTCThe Warden is unable to overcome Velikas mental defense. Lavarro used a Mind Caster, which while in use lowered here defense. Besides, there is literally no chance that Velika is controlled right now.
Tycho Green
2022-06-19 07:57:04 +0000 UTCVelika might have been too afraid to sleep the past few weeks, and is acting significantly more irrational than she otherwise would. Like...she has litterally zero allies at this point now that the Watch, DKE, Guild, and Empire all hate her guts. She doesen't even have decent equipment to fall back on. The whole 'fighting naked' thing in the Three Cliffs battle was pretty funny at the time, but armor, trinkets, rings and amulets are kinda a big deal when it comes to awakened survivability. We saw with Gavin that the Knives can be effective combatants if given enough prep time. They might have some way of taking out a goldplate whos defences have been compromised.
Starless
2022-06-17 07:15:13 +0000 UTCNot chat up a citizen sure... but why isn't Halgrave reporting back to the guild? He just got their dimension mage killed in a battle with the empire and must surely have some sort of duty to give the guild a heads up about 3 cliffs. I doubt anyone would have asked for his guild score if he showed up.
Stormlock
2022-06-17 03:31:39 +0000 UTCHis few sewer quests, the Skiffun extermination, the heating plate recharging and the Mucus Monarch extermination might be enough to let him do regular quests, but he wants to talk to Branch Leader Everiss. Making a ruckus was his best bet, short of Halgrave giving him a message for them.
Cirvante
2022-06-15 15:46:16 +0000 UTCdeff better as a pair
ricky jackson
2022-06-15 07:36:38 +0000 UTCCarten lol
Gabriel510
2022-06-14 01:14:53 +0000 UTCI liked both chapters, i saw no glaring issues. Even if mistakes were made, i wouldnt expect Rain or any of his group to know how to handle the current situation. They are merchants, laborers, solo adventurers, and the only high ranking AND travelled people are the likes of halgrave and velika, who kinda dont want to chat up a citizen.
RedPine
2022-06-13 19:18:11 +0000 UTCBoth the Empire and the Watch using that brainjacking bullshit is really annoying. I'm surprised Ascention hasen't implimented some anti-mentalist protocols since it seems to be such a common theme. There was even some mentalist shenanagans going on at the the Battle of Three Cliffs. Valtreese is probably alright since apperantly Velika didn't get herself brainjacked for taking over a city and killing 80+ watch members, but the Empire seems like it would abuse the hell out of all the save-or-suck mental spells. Though if Velika is currently a mind puppet, that would explaine what she was doing defending Three Cliffs, a key location the Empire needed for their war efforts.
Starless
2022-06-13 18:25:17 +0000 UTCGod, Rain was an idiot just now. He should have allowed his contribution to be checked just to see if it would help before going nuclear option.
Froyo Baggins
2022-06-13 17:43:00 +0000 UTCAnd the idea of Carten or Jamus being able to help Rain against anything he couldn't vaporize or ignore all day long is laughable. Rain is a better tank than Carten and does orders of magnitude more damage than Jamus. They are absolutely dead weight. Rain has convinced the council to go along with more difficult concepts than 'I don't need inept bodyguards' before and the democracy only supersedes him in organizational matters, not what he can personally do. He's not their pet.
Stormlock
2022-06-13 14:23:17 +0000 UTCThis is not my issue. I don't understand why Carten and Jamus are here in the first place. They are not needed and rain opposed them joining in.
Monus
2022-06-13 13:58:32 +0000 UTCVelika threw a tantrum. She trusts Carten and Rain not to turn her in, I guess Jamus came along to mitigate Carten's stupidity. I don't even think they've been that bad if you just ignore the last chapter.
L Pedersen
2022-06-13 13:54:41 +0000 UTCI personally still don't understand why Jamus and Carten are with rain. The council just seem kinda incompetent for requiring them to go with rain. The fact that there is no further explanation on why they insisted on that makes me very confused. Especially since Samson who is a prominent member in the council should see how they are a danger. The only person that might make sense on the expedition is Mlem, someone that can help negotiate prices etc, and a person with connections in the city.
Monus
2022-06-13 08:40:52 +0000 UTCI'd go a step farther and say that this chapter is so much better than 202 while doing the same thing, that it renders 202 redundant. 202 works better with this as a pair... but 203 is only dragged down by it. If I were doing an editorial pass I'd basically cut 202 out entirely, maybe move a few lines from it into this chapter. The base problem still remains however- 201 set us up to expect conversations with a bunch of goldplates we've been looking forwards to for months now. And all we've gotten in that regard is an implied conversation with Velika that even Rain seems to think didn't make any sense. Why isn't Halgrave here? I can't imagine him staying under Velika's thumb, and he could just drag his daughter off the boat with him. Why would Velika trust Jamus but not any of the merchants? What happened with the deal regarding Velika dishing out the goldplate secret tech? What about Velika and Tallheart's arrangement for a sword? These are all things I desperately want to know about, which makes it hard to appreciate the worldbuilding of Barstone that I'd enjoy a lot more if it had come after some of those conversations.
Stormlock
2022-06-13 06:15:47 +0000 UTCThey are expressly forbidden from teaching anyone else. Plus Bartum mentioned he literally did not remember how he learned. Some Watch mind wipe crap
Justin
2022-06-13 03:15:02 +0000 UTCTransition chapter (202) certainly pales when in comparison to the badass Adamant vs Ascension chapters but I guess author felt the need for a transition into something else? Thus it served as a buffer for what the expected pacing would be? Not really complaining as not all chapters can be winners and the “weakness” of Delve as a story is that it is so good that it builds people’s expectations while having a limited amount each week (excluding skip on the fourth). So the expectation and rarity works against it for such a chapter. That being said, I believe people would look at the chapter differently when Delve is finished (as they can easily move on to new chapters without being left for a week in a transition) and wouldn’t have as much dissatisfaction. At least I think it is likely.
Conor McGroarty
2022-06-13 01:34:51 +0000 UTCWith access to a particularly adept Reading user, it would be nice if Rain flexed his Custodian clout to get a few free lessons in using the skill. Seems like a pretty damn useful ability to have.
Starless
2022-06-12 23:06:40 +0000 UTCFrom the comfort of your home, sure, that’s easy. When shit is going down, I have my doubts. But Jesus Christ himself got pissed and beat people with a horsewhip. When your character is more selfless than Jesus, you have a writing issue.
Adunk
2022-06-12 22:40:47 +0000 UTCWell, glad to know I am inhumanly compassionate.
Solo
2022-06-12 22:36:15 +0000 UTCI don’t feel the posturing interactions are needed. Like you said, it can be inferred. But tone consistency is important, and people are sick of Rain having the moral depth of a teenager when he is supposed to be an adult who has (at this point) seen some real shit. Going on a self-righteous spiel when his girlfriend and everyone he cares about is literally being held hostage and in imminent danger from multiple sides is.... childish at best. Fact is, you have to prioritize what you are going to worry about, and getting bent out of shape over people he doesn’t know at this point in time is not only dumb, but inhumanly compassionate. It makes Rain less real. Nobody is that selfless, to immediately come from a hostage situation with everyone they love only to go full martyr mode when they see random people being mean or afraid.
Adunk
2022-06-12 22:03:54 +0000 UTCSo I think there’s merit in at least adding a paragraph to last chapter closing down some of those issues.
Chymor
2022-06-12 19:02:52 +0000 UTCWhile the posturing regarding who will enter Barstone might not be that interesting, the relations between all the guests Ascension has right now and the company is highly interesting. Who will join, who will case problems and who will leave at first opportunity are all interesting questions, and the posturing scene would give hints in addition to closing the last arc more fully. After all, the issue with the last chapter is that they don’t close up the arc, regarding all the new people. They are just fine as a slow introduction to Barstone and DKE assuming we’ll be there a while.
Chymor
2022-06-12 19:01:41 +0000 UTCHonestly, I think this chapter is a much better follow up to chapter 201 rather than chapter 202. The tone at the start is actually in line with chapter 201, the characters act more like themselves given their situation, and that small snippet alone explains Rain's current predicament better than the entirety of chapter 202. I like worldbuilding and character exploration chapters but chapter 202 can definitely still be summed up as 'should this really be the focus right now'.
Atlas Dwarf
2022-06-12 17:40:50 +0000 UTCThe issue is, this is a web serial, as such the quality of each chapter is combined with release frequency. Look at the Chinese Wuxia novels - they word stuff and repeat the same thing several times, but people still read them. Why? Because they update 5-7 times per week. Even if one chapter was meh, you'll get a new one tomorrow. The slower the release schedule, the better the chapters need to be to hold readers' interest. Chapter 202 was a weak set up chapter (as opposed to this one, which is also a set up chapter but much more interesting). Even worse, chapter 201 was also a set up chapter. Except instead of getting the thing that chapter 201 was seemingly a set up for, we got a time skip and a new set up chapter in 202. If you are binging the story, then 202 is fine. Sure the change it tone is jarring and the lack of a solid conclusion to the 3 cliffs arc is disappointing, but the chapter itself is fine, if it can be read together with a bunch of following chapters and doesn't have to stand on its own. Personally, I wouldn't go back to editing chapter 202, your time is likely better spent elsewhere, and the story is moving on.
Jac Onue
2022-06-12 15:35:40 +0000 UTCThe expanded section about his reasoning makes things a lot better. And the chapters definitely reads better as a pair.
Kendelle Trotter
2022-06-12 14:54:18 +0000 UTCIt's a filler chapter, but at least it's more acceptable
jdouglas
2022-06-12 14:33:36 +0000 UTCWhat happened with the Barge and his line about bringing the fight a few chapters back? I think my biggest issue, as others have pointed out, is tone. And it looks like that fight, if it ever happens, is nowhere close. A little bit of foreshadowing would have made this change up more palatable, even if you threw a line in after the whales assault the Empire ships, to the effect of “Oh shit, we can’t match that, let’s get reinforcements”
M
2022-06-12 14:13:42 +0000 UTCWhich is the fourth? The first ship that attacked (now risen as Temerity), and then the two that attacked the night before.
Zachary T Pruckowski
2022-06-12 13:25:32 +0000 UTC> we’ve seen three of them so far Four, but one was destroyed.
Nnelg
2022-06-12 13:18:34 +0000 UTCYou said it all in your comment :)
Zarik0
2022-06-12 12:26:28 +0000 UTCAs others have pointed out, it was more the shift in tone that bothered me. Epic fight to grudging truce between the powerhouses and instead of Rain getting some answers from any of them, we got a rather unexciting soul chapter, ending with a determined Rain ready to 'poke the bear'. Then he comes into Barstone acting meek and desperately trying to be friendly with unawakened, who are rightfully scared of him, and getting in line with unawakened at the gate as a silverplate. Maybe his new status hasn't fully sunk in yet, but it felt kinda jarring. And really not much happened in the last chapter, so it felt like filler. Properly explaining the situation on Temerity as a tense stand-off and Velika being a fucking child would have helped a bit. She promised some juicy intel on the gold upgrade and I was almost afraid you had skipped it. Like you skipped Val's intel about his class and progression earlier. If the story was an RPG and you had just finished the epic Three Cliffs story quest and fled with some powerful passengers coming along, you'd then visit them at least individually to have a word and maybe get some closure to the event, giving them a chance to be further fleshed out. Halgrave expressing his appreciation for saving his arm and grudgingly acknowledging that Ascension isn't as bad as he thought. Maybe even assuring them that he'll keep Tallheart a secret, further establishing him as a jerk with a heart of gold. Velika could have shown her human side by genuinely being scared of the DKE and freaking out over going to Barstone. So far she has only ever shown vulnerability with Rain and it would do more for her character than just mentioning that she's being completely unreasonable. Bakal could be a nice contrast, getting back into the pirate spirit, appreciating the ship and the endless mana source, maybe admitting that his retirement got kinda boring and that he's eager for more excitement. Maybe that idiot silverplate swordsman could have some character growth after being the comedic relief until now. I don't even remember his name, that's how forgettable he is. Fechton would be conflicted about fleeing the Empire. Ameliah had several freakouts with Rain first getting his throat cut, then getting Meteor'd, then exploding an Incarn. Showing a heartwarming moment between them would have been way better than Rain's reflections in his soul. Maybe something cute like both of them sitting down and eating the chocolate, with Rain getting maybe half a piece overall. Just some closure, you know? Sure, you can push the story forward and keep things going, but you end up missing out on some interesting moments and the opportunity for character development. On the other hand, Rain and the stooges entering the city could have been condensed into a single paragraph. You can't show everything, but maybe try to show the good stuff and skip the boring stuff instead.
Cirvante
2022-06-12 12:17:52 +0000 UTCDeath Zone, the Night Cleaner!” Maximum cringe
Thenais
2022-06-12 11:50:00 +0000 UTCI’m all for inferred perceptions, but my brain not work good. Like: I forgot that Halgrave was injured and repaired like a iron nail hammered back into shape. I forgot that the ship Ascension is using is faster, and non-magical so it doesn’t draw depth monsters. There must be more than myself that are re-reading the previous chapter trying to keep up, but there are also big brain people that don’t and get lost between the tone shift. Even after reading 201, then 202, I was asking myself if I missed a chapter. There doesn’t have to be an entire chapter devoted to it, but a few sentences of reference to events, conversations, story elements outside of rain’s soul, would be great for those of us too slow to remember stuff.
ZeroSkillz
2022-06-12 11:21:48 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
SenescentSoul
2022-06-12 09:43:54 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
SenescentSoul
2022-06-12 09:43:21 +0000 UTCI did like this chapter much better. Hopefully this reasoning explains why (and doesn’t beat a dead horse too much). Chapter 200 was high tension and 201 ended with rain being determined to do what was necessary and confront Halgrave, Velika, and the citizen, watch, guild in barstone (time to poke the bear is what he said). We didn’t get that in 202. It was a complete tonal shift away from the tension and determination. I don’t particularly care about the conversation with Velika and Halgrave, what you say is true: most of it can be inferred. It was more so that what we got had none of that mentality. It was sort of funny and light and Rain was so timid and afraid of poking the bear. You’re a silverplate on a mission and you want to spend time gathering info on how to enter a city without causing some noise? Your entire message will cause noise, so walk up to the gate and get in there man! I’ve personally been wanting more slice of life worldbuilding, actually can’t wait for them to do that. I would have enjoyed last chapter had it not been placed where it was. I don’t need every chapter to be breakneck pacing, my complaint was how Rains mentality and the overall feel of the chapter felt out of place considering the preceding thoughts actions. This chapter finally had rain get stuff done. He said screw it, I don’t have time for games. He knows there’s a timetable and he is doing what he thinks is best to help the people he cares about now. Accomplishing and prioritizing short term goals instead of thinking about long term goals of changing the world. It was much more in line with what I was expecting considering his thoughts in 201. You’re right the two chapter read better as a pair, which makes it hard to judge webnovel chapter coming out one at a time. I don’t know if there was a better way to handle an in-between chapter like last one or if it was even needed, I’m not a writer, just a reader. Just my overall thoughts. Hope they help.
Bzzt
2022-06-12 08:57:53 +0000 UTCOnly thing that felt a bit weird in this one, was I'd suspect him to be more nervous/trigger happy when detecting monsters. Solid chapter though. Really enjoyed!
Johny Woller Skovdal
2022-06-12 08:32:58 +0000 UTCI believe the issue is that it's a web serial. You're writing as needs to be, we're Reading in isolation. The chapters flow well when together
lockx
2022-06-12 08:28:18 +0000 UTCHa ha, I looove the ending of this one, pained with the chapter that just went up for free is called "Stealth" ;)
Johny Woller Skovdal
2022-06-12 08:20:28 +0000 UTCI don't think the reasoning for the away mission needs to be moved. I think someone else mentioned it, but the other chapter was a small time skip, iceberg and intro to anchor plus chatting with a barkeep. Do the chapters read better as a pair? Yes, or more satisfying. I think having the last chapter end on sana mentioning he looks like a veined blue marble and having rain asking her to repeat that, would have been a better cut off. That would make this chapter shorter, but the shell shock of the watch, diving into the elusive reading skill, seeing if they slip up and hint at the process, explaining how they perceive the mecha-engineering projects of Rain and Carten being Carten make this chapter quite fulfilling.
Dragonkinn
2022-06-12 08:07:19 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I think the last chapter felt hollow. I think taking the first bit of this chapter until the intro of Sana and the peek of curiosity as to what she saw and leave it there would have made the last chapter feel more fulfilling in that things happened and a new discovery was teased, them continuing here to expand and do the good would have balanced them. Just my opinion, but real good to see this chapter
Dragonkinn
2022-06-12 07:54:46 +0000 UTCAgreed. Two chapters ago felt like a cliff hanger where they are still injured and being chased by the enemy into dangerous waters. Then it immediately cuts to they are safe and in the next town. There needed to be some sort of transition. You as the author knows what happened but it doesn't feel emotionally satisfying as a reader.
Christopher Ozouf
2022-06-12 07:35:29 +0000 UTCMy issue with last chapter wasn’t the content but the huge shift in tone. The last arc did not have a satisfying conclusion so it felt incomplete. But I enjoyed this chapter a lot more than the last one.
Diego Villa
2022-06-12 06:30:05 +0000 UTCWithout any further warning, he began slamming them like one of those ~~~symbol~~~ **cymbal** monkeys, scaled up to the size of a gorilla
Daniel Powell
2022-06-12 06:06:12 +0000 UTCAbout Halgrave; Velika doesn't trust him not to snitch on her given she stole his city so she's not about to let him go ashore in DKE territory without a fight. With him still being in recovery and his extremely vulnerable daughter being so close, he's not about to take her on without good reason.
Garrett
2022-06-12 06:01:11 +0000 UTCNoice chapter, loved a lot of part on it, and the plot advanced a good time here and with interesting ways to see the different things happen and how it is :) This chapter make me feel a bit better about the last, i think they read better as a pair but dont really need it now that they are both released :) I dont have a particulary problem with the time skip you have done on things we can easely inferred mostly, the problem in my view was with the feeling of clash with difference we get suddenly with Rain character (tone/manner/i dont get the words to explain it clearly here/etc) and the Tension of the previous situation he was When he debark in this town and what he think/does/react, it feel slighty off with the past This chapter is way better and have no problem on this specific aspect for me
Zarik0
2022-06-12 05:53:46 +0000 UTCAlso in favor of just getting on with it!
SightandSound
2022-06-12 05:52:07 +0000 UTCYeah, valid complain but not a big deal overall, you cant do perfect chapter everytime And yeah i think this chapter if fused with the previous one make it better when it was released (but no need to do that now :)
Zarik0
2022-06-12 05:51:44 +0000 UTCLet’s hope that Rain also mentioned the fact that the Fel Sadanis citadel and barrier were brought down (even caused the earth to shake all the way to Vestvall) and that cracks in reality were verified (thus damage limit broken). I don’t know how much the Watch (or anyone) may or may not know about Fel Sadanis losing contact (at least the result shouldn’t be too hard to see) but it bears to be thorough with your report. Bureaucracy and red tape everywhere that just begs to be brute forced through. It is interesting information that Reading can be mastered to such a degree that a bronze plate can accurately Read a silver plate. Though esoteric soul manipulation (restricted knowledge limited even among Guardians/Watch gold plates) can trick it if the person being Read so wishes as Guardian Dunwich (who is probably dead or held by the Empire) proved. Also seems like Halgrave is just going to sit back and be a passenger on Temerity until they reach Bellost (assuming he doesn’t conclude that Ascension will sink and getting out of dodge with Mahria). Seems he decided to just leave things to Ascension while he observes instead of handling the reporting of the situation to the Citizen and such. Perhaps he himself is curious about how far they can go and is leaving things be as Halgrave personally reporting and handling these things wouldn’t speed things up too much to make much difference. All Ascension really needs in Barstone is to report (and spread through word of mouth to city which they started with Nicket and Jer) on all the things that have happened (most pressing being the Empire attacking Three Cliffs) and get supplies so they can pass through DKE waters without being robbed of Temerity by a Citizen or Bank.
Conor McGroarty
2022-06-12 05:50:52 +0000 UTCIt's now feeling like all of our previous worries and dislike with the previous chapter were missplaced. The only thing which breaks logic as easily as magic is politics. And your explanation was perfect.👨🍳💋 chefs kiss
Sdff
2022-06-12 05:44:40 +0000 UTCI guess the last chapter felt a bit like the story had skipped forward to a moment where not much happened (besides setting the scene for this chapter), it wasn’t bad per say just felt kinda unnecessary given what I was expecting. This chapter on the other hand was satisfying as it advanced the plot forward in events that followed what I expected based on where we left off in previous chapters
Zoe
2022-06-12 05:40:25 +0000 UTCHA! Carten, never change. TYPO: I think you meant “cymbal monkeys”, not “symbol”.
Judah Frankel
2022-06-12 05:25:30 +0000 UTCI think one of the problems with the last chapter was that a lot of the stuff that was explicitly stated WAS stuff that could have been inferred. If we look at what happened, they took a boat to a dock and then went up to some gates to the inner city. There was not much character development, and while we got a bit of look at how the city operated, it honestly was not too deep and could have been guessed. Really the highlight was the new way of communicating with the anchor. If someone accidentally skipped the last chapter, they would mostly be fine.
Richard Hansen
2022-06-12 05:23:50 +0000 UTCGood chapter though
Alexander Dupree
2022-06-12 05:22:08 +0000 UTCThe amount of petty trash this chapter is making me want to stab someone.
Alexander Dupree
2022-06-12 05:21:46 +0000 UTCRain is just about done putting up with idiots.
David Giles
2022-06-12 05:21:07 +0000 UTCDude fuck all the haters. I complained too but it's not a big deal, not every chapter can be a banger and completely satisfactory. I could infer most of it through what we got.
Aezy Ken
2022-06-12 05:20:07 +0000 UTCHmm,,, should I be worried about downloading the [dark] Truth? On the topic of the timeskip - I think leaving it to inference was plenty. Less is more, as they say.
Loipers
2022-06-12 05:10:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, I always enjoy this series!
Phantom
2022-06-12 05:04:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! 🥳
Cjack PVP
2022-06-12 05:00:35 +0000 UTC
