Night Games 4th page
Added 2016-11-15 10:46:25 +0000 UTCIf you miss the announcement - go there, it's important
Colors arrive! I feel like i spend on this page more time then on previous three combined. It is probably false, though. Or not... But anyway, now that girls are split up on pairs, time to some action )
Some changes in text from line art version, mostly in the header (aidenke didn't liked my 4th wall breaking) and 5th panel (i didn't liked aidenkes initial dialogs)
Also if you didn't vote in the last poll yet - do it , since it's a huge poll and i need as many votes as possible
Comments
Aside from Kitty posses, Laura's faces is the most fun thing to draw from this and previous panels ) The fact that she is my favorite character out of this four is shine a little )
SanePerson
2016-11-17 11:05:13 +0000 UTCwill be strange if this newbie were the one to tie Rachel ) And Rachel with her outfit don't look as sub at all ) There will be little twist with her, but again - don't expect full view of Laura session - it will require separate comics to draw
SanePerson
2016-11-17 11:00:51 +0000 UTCHey, you know where it is going ;)
SanePerson
2016-11-17 10:58:12 +0000 UTCI love that you can see Laura's brain in that last panel going "This miiiiiiight have been a mistake..."
Leonineus
2016-11-16 14:00:29 +0000 UTCI LOVE it. I'm sure this will be... therapeutic... for Laura. (She's the sub, right? Tell me she's the sub! Or perhaps both?)
2016-11-16 12:32:49 +0000 UTCI'm biased - I love how the page turned out. The girls all look awesome, and the real fun is in all of the expressiveness around the page. From Kitty "lecturing" Magik in the background of panel 1 to Laura's dubiousness about trying this stuff and having it be fun... A great page, and can't wait to see where things go from here! :)
Aidenke
2016-11-16 03:10:20 +0000 UTCEvery time i doesn't like something ) I'm perfectionist in a bad way, can spend a lot of effort on insignificant details. Though, when it commission or request i'm usually consult changes with other side
SanePerson
2016-11-15 21:06:28 +0000 UTCThis is a great piece, the colors are very vibrant. I'm curious, how often do you change things, from what was originally requested/commissioned
kou32
2016-11-15 20:39:47 +0000 UTCThere will be X-23 in bondage for 1-2 pages, yeah. And thank you for pointing out my mistake, fixed )
SanePerson
2016-11-15 11:12:58 +0000 UTCLove the colors, makes the page look even better. I do hope we get to see at least a little of X-23 in bondage. Also, the link to the poll isn't working for me.
s22132
2016-11-15 11:08:46 +0000 UTC
