Closed!! Altering Curse Spinoff 2 - Suggestion Thread #2: The car-ride is halfway over, what happens next? You can also skip the car-ride and suggest changes after his mom dropped him off!
Added 2021-01-04 23:43:33 +0000 UTCI hope you all saw the 4 WIP pages with added dialogue, if you haven't please read through them :)
With that out of the way, welcome to the second comic suggestion thread for this comic!
You got the following options to suggest further changes and plot-points, use the appropriate tags so it's easier to categorize later on :)
TAGS:
AC (Anti Cosmo): Tags suggestions that deal with corruption/changes Anti Cosmo does without the doing of the necklace. These changes don't have to do with the necklace which only activates when someone says something. Means you got all the lewd creative freedom you want!
N (Necklace): Tags suggestions that deal with changes that happen when the necklace gets activated (making whatever gets said, true). Please add what is said to the suggestion, else I can't work with it properly!
PP (Plotpoint): Tags suggestions that progress the story further without any changes.
If you want to suggest something complex you can mix the tags of course :) I don't want to limit your imagination in any way!
I'll close this suggestion thread as soon as I'm done with half of the currently sketched pages, the poll that features the suggestions I like will get posted afterwards and runs till all the pages are done :)
Comments
Sure, I think that fits a lot more in context of what she was doing.
Akira
2021-01-05 15:46:53 +0000 UTCI would say all female characters we would love to see sporting bigger chests sooo... the problem is, that there aren't that many female characters we know off. Maybe Trixie and Veronica if we don't think about changing some genders at least lol
Schinkn
2021-01-05 15:26:16 +0000 UTC"Please forgive me mom! I will fix this I promise!" he thought eyeing her chest. "Poor mom, I can't even imagine how a chest like that must feel like.." or something, maybe some context helps to make it sound more natural. I am not certain with my version lol I am highly against giving him his mom's chest from the get-go. Two options, we could go for a slow change with them getting bigger over the whole day or we make the change instant (of course with several transformation panels) but with a smaller more manageable cup-size lol
Schinkn
2021-01-05 15:12:27 +0000 UTCHmm, I never thought about merging suggestions but this one sounds alright. I would change it "Show that boner to me sweety, I'm like...so close *moan*" or something. And we can totally do the other change Captain_Hastag suggested afterwards.
Schinkn
2021-01-05 15:06:30 +0000 UTCDefinitely like that approach! I definitely would turn him into her daughter, but I think I would dial back the proportional changes, don't want her to sport titanic tits just yet :P (in case this wins at least) But she definitely would end up lookin' hot that's for sure ^^
Schinkn
2021-01-05 14:46:19 +0000 UTCAc/n: anticosmo influences Timmy with getting him to say what would make school better and Timmy goes, “if only there were more girls like my mom there” go crazy with the rest and what characters would be affected
OozeRocket
2021-01-05 04:56:23 +0000 UTCN: Timmy wonders aloud, “I can’t even imagine how a chest like that feels”
Z
2021-01-05 04:28:40 +0000 UTCPp/n during the second half of the car ride (this could be an anti Cosmo suggestion or mrs turner asking her son ) his mother ask to show that boner and rub it out just as mother asks. When they drop timmy off we hear comments similar to captain hasta comparing timmi to her mom
Akira
2021-01-05 00:36:33 +0000 UTCN: An ogling classmate mentions how hot Mrs. Turner is and how they wish she had a daughter as hot as her. Do with this as you will.
RubyDead_Queen
2021-01-05 00:29:16 +0000 UTC
