She Is Being Targeted ~Sex Edition~ Initial Draft Complete! + Thoughts
Added 2024-05-02 05:06:32 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I've just finished the initial draft translation of the latest chapter. You can now download it using the link above.
Enjoy the read, and as always, thank you for your support!
Edit:
Hey everyone, I wanted to share some thoughts on the latest chapter since I don't have anyone to discuss it with, haha.
This chapter really showcases the most horrible side of Hinako we've seen so far. She had zero care or sympathy when she saw Yuichi hurting right in front of her. And the humiliation she put him through during their sex, basically mocking him by implying that only Yuichi can experience pleasure when they have sex (reading Yuichi's self-pity is really painful). Plus, she showed him zero respect by giving only a half-assed reply when he told her he loves her so much as she walked out the door. On top of that, her total lack of concern for Yuichi's well-being after a typhoon hit them and having no communication for 6 days straight! And finally, the whole lying situation about what went down at Genki's house at the end of the chapter.
You might find yourself hating Hinako in this chapter (if you haven't done so already). I don't know if the author meant for us to feel this way, but it's understandable why people are mad. The author seems to have forgotten about the original charm of the series, which was the relationship between Hinako and Yuichi. It's rare to witness a strong bond between a smoking hot girl and a weak-ass shota. Hinako used to be in control and dominant, always aware of Yuichi's limits and boundaries. But now, she's turned into a submissive btch for someone else and giving in to pleasure. What the hell happened?
Anyway here's the two most common theories from people's comments about what might have happened in this chapter:
Hinako was telling the truth and they didn't actually have sex. She just feels guilty because she saw how reliable and strong Genki is during an emergency, and she has developed feelings for him. (unlikely)
Hinako was lying and they did have sex. But she feels guilty because they ended up having raw sex after running out of condoms during their nonstop fcking for almost 6 days. It's also possible that because she was teased so much and became so horny, Genki probably told her to leave Yuichi for him or say that she loves him more than Yuichi before he would let her taste his dick again. (more likely)
Overall, it's pretty clear that she's hiding something from Yuichi.
I apologize for venting here, but what do you think? Feel free to share your thoughts!
Comments
NTS is a specific type of hentai that focuses on the relationship aspect before anything else. If that relationship is disrespected, it just becomes NTR. It's not as popular as NTR, so I understand if people aren't familiar with it. But yeah honestly, I've already given up hope that Hinako will stay faithful to Yuichi. Even if the author tries to backtrack and say she wasn't cheating, she's already crossed so many boundaries and shown too much disrespect towards Yuichi that she can no longer be seen as the sweet, caring, mischievous girlfriend she was initially portrayed as in the beginning of the series.
kusso_megane
2024-05-27 00:15:19 +0000 UTCNo it's not? I deeply disagree. If their relationship comes before the hentai, then what was the point of making it hentai? You have a whole anime, Nagatoro, that went the way you're describing - let us have the payoff after this long and drawn-out buildup.
coffeepup
2024-05-26 23:35:07 +0000 UTCIt looks like the author finally gave in to his cumbrain and NTR sadist fans who love a nightmare endings. As you mentioned, the appeal of this story was that Yuichi and Hinako's relationship was above anything and everything. If she seriously did fuck Genki and is hiding it, yeah, this story is going down the shitter quickly. To expand on that statement, it tarnishes all previous chapters of the relationship building and trust developed between Yuichi and Hinako. What I wish happened: * After the typhoon and phones are back in service, Yuichi gets a barrage of LINE notifications on his phone. There are missed calls, deleted messages, and deleted pictures and videos (not sure if the app is capable of all this) * When he rushes to Hinako's house, there's evidence on Hinako's neck and cleavage of hickies. * Hinako doesn't dismiss Yuichi but teases him more saying things that may or may not have happened but with the same reassurance we were so used to in earlier chapters. What I think will happen: * For the rest of the year, every release we get will be 1 of 6 days during the blackout. * Content creep at it's finest but no actual development in the story until the Decemberish? Where we find out that Hinako's going to start dating Genki openly.
Timmy
2024-05-05 01:59:39 +0000 UTCYeah even some the comments on his fanbox say that he lost the original plot somewhere down the line. Granted I still plan on reading into the end but right now there's just no way Hinako and Yuichi are together at the end of it.
Konata Aoi
2024-05-02 23:21:38 +0000 UTCI agree with Kusso. If the author makes this simply 1 route, and builds out sex with the other characters, I would throw money at him. But right now, it seems like the definitive ending is HARD NTR.
George Costanza
2024-05-02 21:56:26 +0000 UTCI agree with the translator. Hinako went from a sweetheart to someone I cannot love anymore. Also, since the entire series is build-up, I was hoping the author would just rip off the band-aid, rather than DRAG IT OUT. Its pretty clear this is going from NTRS to pure NTR and I'm not recommending this doujin to others anymore.
George Costanza
2024-05-02 21:53:50 +0000 UTCHaha, quite harsh but I get where you're coming from
kusso_megane
2024-05-02 15:41:48 +0000 UTCYeah, that makes sense. An author who has a literal "netorare" included in their pseudonym is creating NTR content π . However, I think many people were misled because this series was initially marketed towards NTS fans (Yuichi was introduced as a cuck right from the start). But to be fair, NTS has many variations and it could easily branch into NTR (there are cases like that). However, one of the main selling points of this series was Hinako always being in control and dominant. Often, NTS-to-NTR works include women who are timid and passive, with their cuck husband/boyfriend being the assertive one who proposes the cuckolding, not the woman. So, the dynamic changes when the author introduced Hinako as a dominant girl who's always in control of the situation. We are led to believe that she's doing all of this for Yuichi's sake and that there's nothing to worry about in terms of potential cheating and corruption. In any case, I truly hope many people will show their support and subscribe to the author. It's quite sad to see a significant drop in the author's subscriber count after this chapter came out. I really hope the author stays motivated and continues working on this series as they see fit. No matter what happens, I will keep supporting the author on their official platforms, and I hope that the majority, if not all, of my subscribers here on Patreon, are also doing the same. π
kusso_megane
2024-05-02 15:37:44 +0000 UTCInteresting chapter bitch being ruthless
king meliodas
2024-05-02 15:27:57 +0000 UTCDont get it why people complain about ntr being ntr. In my opinion its totally fine how it goes rn, hopefully autor doesnt change anything. Its how it should be, she slowly becomes Genkis bitch. This is where all Ntr relationships leadπ€· I dont even mind if its gonna be like nt00βs story
Tulopapiculo
2024-05-02 13:06:37 +0000 UTCI also wouldn't mind a soft reboot for the series to sort things out and make the storyline clearer. When the author was just starting out this series, they used to value feedback from readers and adjust the story accordingly, as shown by their frequent use of the caption: "If it is well received, I would like to continue it." This is why the first few chapters felt more like standalone chapters rather than a cohesive series. This led to numerous unresolved cliffhangers since it was essentially a combination of different ideas from readers. For instance, the silhouette chapter was confirmed to be inspired by an idea from a reader. But now, I don't know. The author doesn't seem bothered and keeps taking the story towards full-blown NTR. The only hope now is if the author decides to turn this into a BADEND route, creating different storylines for the various male characters introduced so far (with the current one being the Genki route).
kusso_megane
2024-05-02 11:23:10 +0000 UTCHmm... to me, I see things differently. Like I mentioned earlier, Hinako used to be in control and dominant. That's what distinguishes her from other NTR heroines and is probably one of the unique aspects of this story. It's definitely one of the strong points of this series. And I fully agree with you that the build-up towards this point was already hinted at even in the prologue chapter. I was already expecting sex scenes at some point. But I didn't expect it to involve corruption. I thought it would still be NTS, with Hinako having sex with another guy but remaining devoted and in love with Yuichi.
kusso_megane
2024-05-02 11:12:41 +0000 UTCi dont know what to say, but i like the ongoing story to ntr. thats the point of the comic, to go further and further and the fear of the stealing becomming true. it was the point from the beginning to build the story up in this direction. and i dont know why all the complaints are there, about this development. i mean even i could see where this leads to, and thats why i'm here. the corruption
KrusteDE
2024-05-02 10:56:57 +0000 UTCPraying it doesn't turn to full blown NTR. Or that this is the low point the two recovers from. I wish the author gave the MC more spine, or have moments where he earns it. Netorase like the ones made by Artienne is infinitely more interesting since both partners have an interesting and equal dynamic. Besides, isn't the NTR elements what the bad end series are supposed to be for? At a certain point, I wouldn't mind a rewrite.
Retty606
2024-05-02 08:59:00 +0000 UTCI totally agree! This chapter was really painful to read.
kusso_megane
2024-05-02 08:52:20 +0000 UTCPreciate the quick work! Chapter is interesting. Feel bad for Yuichi. With everything that happened it's no wonder he feels that way. She's most likely lying but the guilt is from her actually starting to get feelings for Goda and not liking Yuichi anymore
Konata Aoi
2024-05-02 05:33:35 +0000 UTCyou put in work π thank you again!
lang
2024-05-02 05:12:50 +0000 UTC
