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๐Ÿฅฆ

This is my first time drawing manga. Please tell me if this is strange English.๐Ÿ˜Š ๆผซ็”ปๆใใฎใฏๅˆใ‚ใฆใงใ™ใ€‚ๅค‰ใช่‹ฑ่ชžใ ใฃใŸใ‚‰ๆ•™ใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„๐Ÿ˜Š

๐Ÿฅฆ ๐Ÿฅฆ

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ไปŠๅ›žใฏ็”Ÿใง้ฃŸในใพใ—ใŸ๐Ÿ˜…

Diva

DIVAๅ…ˆ็”Ÿใฎโ€ฆใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คโ€ฆ๏ผ๏ผŸ ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใซใฏใƒ–ใƒญใƒƒใ‚ณใƒชใƒผใซใฏใ‚ดใƒžใƒ€ใƒฌใ‹ใ‚ฑใƒใƒฃใƒƒใƒ—ใงใ™ใญโ€ฆ

thank you!! will will will

Diva

thank you!! Drawing manga is a great way to learn English.๐Ÿ˜‚

Diva

Just a little strange on the "I make it " changing it to" I'll(I will) make it" sounds better

Nephthys

Nice manga! "It's so hard to me" sounds kind of strange, "Looks too hard for me" or "This is too hard for me" would sound better I think. It also makes the joke at the end seem more natural ๐Ÿ˜Š

Marcel


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