Some tweaks
Added 2018-12-18 20:14:51 +0000 UTCHow about this, legnth and volume are near the original, just bear in mind that this is only the outer layer, more layers should take care of the gaps.
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No, it's not that unusual to me to look at untextured models. What I mean is, that when looking next to her neck, you can tell that there is a lot of empty space. Although proper shadows and ambient occlusion will improve that a lot already, I think once Ademar adds the inner layers, it will be much better.
Takuya Sawatari
2018-12-18 20:57:00 +0000 UTCShe gets sexier every day omg
Yoko.BB
2018-12-18 20:47:45 +0000 UTChmmm, maybe its the stark contrast in body color vs no color on the hair that's creepin' her towards the uncanny valley for ya
VR AnimeTed
2018-12-18 20:36:10 +0000 UTCThe change in volume really makes a difference. Great job!
VR AnimeTed
2018-12-18 20:34:28 +0000 UTCTo me it feels more familiar now. Her head still looks very "bare", or "exposed" (hard to describe). Almost like the hair is not attached to her head. I thought about suggesting to move the side bangs closer to her head, but it will probably automatically look better after you add inner hair layers.
Takuya Sawatari
2018-12-18 20:31:18 +0000 UTC
