(AxN) World Map
Added 2025-08-19 00:01:30 +0000 UTCJust like the map, this story will focus solely on the Naruto continent. I won’t be using any material from the Boruto storyline for a couple of reasons:
I haven’t watched the anime.
And most of Boruto’s story wasn’t written by Kishimoto—it was more like he supervised it. So I don’t treat it as canon.
Also, I’ve re-edited all the chapters again. The first three chapters should now be fully polished.
Lastly, sorry for the slow updates, but I needed to have a clear direction for the story. I’ve drafted some OP chapters, the ending, potential crossovers with other anime, and some side chapters focusing on Amon and Nahil to develop their characters further, so I assure you things are bright in the long run.
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The map will play an important role later, so here it is again:
Comments
Finally, a review! so bro, could I know what exactly you didn’t like? To be clear: the plot I’m planning is that Amon and Nahil are the admins. There will be crossovers, and later comes the fusion part—not of entire worlds, but of either people or pieces of land. Amon and Nahil each have their own personalities, and I’ll write side chapters for them, explaining the past—especially for Nahil, and why he really chose Amon. After some crossovers, there will also be a ruling system for the people in the void, with rewards, alliances, and so on. One of the rewards will be revival. (Since I’m planning to revive Yoriichi, tbh.) I also have a plan for character development and some animes. I’m just telling you all this so you can point out what’s bad, or share your ideas.
Coreal
2025-08-19 21:44:41 +0000 UTCAlright, so honest review: Your writing ability is good, but the plot and premise for the story itself is something I really don't like.
Lost4rt
2025-08-19 21:21:20 +0000 UTCNo need to make the chapter perfect from the start write post then after some days read them again and improve
Chainless
2025-08-19 00:47:09 +0000 UTCBuroto is anime fanfiction
§Rararembo§
2025-08-19 00:30:44 +0000 UTC
