Bonus Short Story: The Level 99 Hero vs The Demon Queen
Added 2021-06-29 00:43:31 +0000 UTCHello, everyone! Before we delve into the story
Comments
Honestly feels like it could be a seperate side story all on its own
Drake
2021-07-05 22:30:05 +0000 UTCDamn, I love it. Very fun story. The weird game like setting is very appealing to isekai loving trash like me. The show of complete domination at the beginning was fun and exciting, the level drain section was hot as hell and the romantic twist at the end was a very pleasant surprise. Although it could have been good too, I'm glad now that it wasn't a tragic end after he confessed his love. Took me a while to read it all but I'm very glad I did. If there's any more in the future, I'll definitely read that too.
GreenWilder
2021-07-05 18:02:46 +0000 UTCThank you, you're very kind! I definitely had a lot of fun writing it, too, and was feeling really inspired--so I'm glad that came across in the writing. I feel like I set the bar quite high right off the bat with something like this, though now lol
Frostworks
2021-07-03 23:44:02 +0000 UTCLoved this short story! You definitely have a knack for writing playful femdom fun. This demon queen and the way she dominated the hero hit me just right!
FunShade
2021-07-02 15:37:36 +0000 UTCHaha, yeah--don't worry, I wasn't about to throw in too much cruelty for a wider audience. I know that people like the fluffier stuff, so I tried to veer it towards that as best I could--even if admittedly I feel like I stumbled a few times throughout and wanted to elaborate more on certain aspects of the story
Frostworks
2021-07-01 20:13:33 +0000 UTCAhhh thank you so much for your kind words ;~; I'm glad my short story could be so thought-provoking and be this enjoyable! I'll definitely try to deliver more in the future if I can!
Frostworks
2021-07-01 20:12:38 +0000 UTCI'm glad, haha. I definitely wanted it to not be a completely crushing end--and tried to give it something of a 'sweet' ending, so I'm happy it worked out : P
Frostworks
2021-07-01 20:11:44 +0000 UTCI'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for your kind words <3
Frostworks
2021-07-01 20:11:17 +0000 UTCTo be honest I was a bit scared that this short story would be as mean-spirit as the ghost one you did quite a long time ago but I was very pleasantly surprised, so yeah loved it through and through
UNOriginal
2021-07-01 04:01:59 +0000 UTCI love ! There is everything in this story! The context is worthy of Monster Quest, the codes of Japanese anime are taken up with humor, the queen of demons, and a delicious succubus full of eroticism, the hero is a good criticism of fanaticism who ends up making the right decision anyway at the right time, and above all there is love at the end! Love that transforms fantasy into a fairy tale and that sublimates sex and eroticism. The turnaround is phylosophical and sublime! Well done ! Well done ! I want more !
Vincent Claut
2021-06-30 22:38:13 +0000 UTCThat was a fun read, I especially appreciated the end.
Richard Hardslab
2021-06-30 13:22:20 +0000 UTCThe was quite a treat, great job
Daniel Sellers
2021-06-29 23:08:51 +0000 UTCHahhh--that'd sure be something
Frostworks
2021-06-29 14:46:59 +0000 UTCI shall, if the inspiration hits, haha
Frostworks
2021-06-29 14:46:46 +0000 UTCDemon queen version of Cynthia sounds good :D
Red Squirrel General
2021-06-29 10:23:30 +0000 UTCPlease, continue.
Pseudo Handle
2021-06-29 05:34:56 +0000 UTCHaha, I suppose it is an achievement of sorts, isn't it? Thank YOU for reading it--and I hope it was enjoyable!
Frostworks
2021-06-29 04:05:04 +0000 UTCYay, I'm glad~ It was a lot of fun to write--and I'd love to do more of this stuff in the future if people would want it!
Frostworks
2021-06-29 04:04:38 +0000 UTCI...lo...lov...Loved it!
Stormchaser007
2021-06-29 02:52:00 +0000 UTCWell this was quite a pleasant surprise! Thanks for the short story, and congrats on making too large for Patreon's pop-in text editor to load I suppose?
Mr Blah
2021-06-29 01:46:55 +0000 UTCWell spotted, haha. Admittedly I was in a daze after writing this, so tried my best to nail everything. Unfortunately Patreon seems to just...not load when I attempt to edit it due to the large word count, so it might be stuck as it is, which frustrates me. Dx I'll definitely add it to the offline copy though!
Frostworks
2021-06-29 01:20:58 +0000 UTCStarted reading and noticed a typo, lightning not lighting...sorry, but when it comes to weather thats where I excel.
Stormchaser007
2021-06-29 01:18:02 +0000 UTCoops a tiny paragraph at the start got eaten up, and i can't seem to get into the editor to correct it, as I think the story is too long for it to load up properly. Apologies for that. Hopefully it won't detract from the rest of the story ;~;
Frostworks
2021-06-29 00:52:42 +0000 UTCwith the ever-growing cast in QF, the possibilities are endless, haha
Frostworks
2021-06-29 00:47:22 +0000 UTCWonder if matt will encounter himself a demon queen to "win" against?
Gadetron Games
2021-06-29 00:46:25 +0000 UTC
