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Unintended Cultivator V2: Chapter 32 – Punishment

Sen didn’t have a lot of qi to work with, so he decided that he wasn’t going to bother with complicated qi techniques. He wasn’t going let Changpu use them either. Sen could feel the sect cultivator start to cycle qi as he bore down on the other man, so he let a little of killing intent loose. It was just a moment, a flash really, but it shattered the man’s focus. Then, Sen was there. His fist connected with Changpu’s chest. The noise of that impact echoed through the empty town. The big cultivator flew away from the blow with his arms and legs flailing, right up until the moment the stone wall of one of the nearby buildings stopped his backward momentum. Sen was a bare second behind the impact with a kick that drove the big cultivator through the wall. Sen heard bones break as Changpu’s body proved inadequate to weather the blow and the resistance of the wall.

Stepping through the hole into the building, Sen found the other cultivator struggling to stand. Changpu was making another attempt to cycle his qi enough to perform a technique. Sen could respect the effort, but he wasn’t going to let that happen. He let his killing intent lash the other man’s mind again, while plunging his jian into the man’s leg. Sen wasn’t sure if it was the stab wound or the mental assault that made the big man cry out in pain. In the end, he supposed it didn’t really matter all that much. Sen took a look at the man and realized that the fight was already over in all but name. With an annoyed sigh, Sen gave the man a halfhearted backhand that drove Changpu to the floor. Sen took a moment then to clean his jian on the sect cultivator’s robes. After a moment of consideration about how to get the most value from what had always been a pointless and one-sided fight, Sen grabbed a fistful of Changpu’s robe and bodily hurled the man back through the hole in the wall. Sen noted that his aim may have been slightly off, as the sect cultivator widened that hole on his way out.

Stepping through the hole, Sen could see the shock and fear on the faces of the other sect cultivators. Wu Meng yao had a jian in her hand but seemed to have forgotten it entirely as she stared down Changpu’s limp form. Wang Chao held a guandao in front of him and had his wide eyes fixed on Sen. A rope dart hung from Song Ling’s hands, but she didn’t look any more ready to use it than Wu Meng yao looked to use her jian. As Sen approached Changpu, Wu Meng yao shook off her shock and held out a hand.

“You don’t need to do this,” she said.

“Like you would have stopped him if I were the one on the ground,” said Sen, not breaking his stride.

Wu Meng yao looked like Sen had slapped her, but she didn’t deny the accusation. “No, I wouldn’t have. Not if you had challenged him the way he challenged you. Still, I’m asking you not to kill him.”

Sen did stop then. He stared at Wu Meng yao while he took a breath and considered. “Why?”

“Politics. If he comes back injured, I can explain it away as the stupidity it was. If he dies, it gets complicated.”

“You mean your sect will declare war on me.”

Wu Meng yao sighed but nodded. “Yes.”

“Those are the people you want me to trust with my life?”

Changpu saved Wu Meng yao from answering that question. The big man had slowly started to regain consciousness and was pushing himself up from the ground. Sen walked over and slammed the big cultivator back down to the street with a foot on his back. Changpu let out a pitiful noise of pain and spat up a mouthful of blood. Sen was torn. He might already have one sect hunting him. He really didn’t need or want another one hounding his every step. On the other hand, Changpu’s choice to so blatantly challenge Sen called for something dramatic. Sen looked at Wu Meng yao.

“Tell me. Your sect must have problems with thieves every so often. How do you deal with them?”

The sect cultivators exchanged uncomfortable looks and and Wang Chao face went a little green. It didn’t take much interpretation on Sen’s part to realize that it must be something absolutely none of them wanted to do or seen done to someone else. Wu Meng yao took a breath before she answered.

“We cut off one of their arms.”

Then, Sen understood. Damage a limb, and you could heal. Even if you never recovered full use of the limb, you could potentially keep cultivating if the qi channels remained intact. Remove a limb, and you could stop someone’s cultivation journey forever. There were qi channels in the limbs. Removing a channel was a blow that most people couldn’t recover from. It wasn’t an absolute law. As Auntie Caihong had explained it, a few people had learned to work around it. Yet, it was very rare that someone did it. Sen understood how his own cultivation worked well enough, and had experimented often enough, that he thought he would have even odds of doing it. Well, he thought he would have even odds of doing it given enough time and ideal circumstances. Still, it wasn’t something he was eager to try. If that’s how sect dealt with thieves, though, they’d have a hard time objecting to Sen carrying out their punishment.

“Then so be it,” said Sen.

With a motion so fast that none of the other cultivators even saw Sen’s jian move, he severed Changpu’s left arm at the shoulder. Kicking the limb away, Sen cycled up fire qi and reduced the arm into ash. He didn’t know if the other sect cultivators would have tried to preserve the arm, but given the looks on their faces, he wouldn’t have put it past them. Depending on whether any of the young sect cultivators had a storage ring like his and how good the healers in their sect were, they might have even managed to reattach that arm. It wouldn’t have been a very effective punishment or lesson if their sect could simply undo what Sen had done. It was better to simply remove that temptation.

It had a taken a moment or two for the pain or the horror of what had just happened to him to catch up with Changpu, but it finally did. He started screaming as the blood gushed from the open wound. Sen stepped back and looked at the pale-faced Wu Meng yao.

“I’ve honored your wishes. He still lives. You should tend to him if you want to keep it that way.”

With that, Sen walked over to the spirit beast corpses and began the process of extracting the useful and valuable pieces of them. He didn’t speak to the sect cultivators again, just kept them in the periphery of his vision while he worked. Based on the level of care he was seeing, Sen didn’t give Changpu good odds of surviving. He found himself torn again. He could help ensure the man lived. He didn’t particularly want to help, but the same considerations were still in play. Keeping the idiot alive was, ultimately, more useful to Sen. When he was done harvesting pieces from the spider and lizard spirit beasts, he went looking for the weakest healing pill he had. The one he found was still more potent and probably more valuable than he wanted to waste on Changpu, but keeping the peace required sacrifices sometimes. He walked over to the other cultivators and tossed the pill to Song Ling. She caught it, and then stared down at it with awe.

“Make sure he takes it, or he’s not going to make it back to your sect alive.”

With that, Sen walked away. As he retraced his own steps through the town the night before, he found more dead spirit beasts than he expected. He didn’t remember fighting that many. Then again, there had been a lot of fire. It only made sense that some of them might have fallen to smoke and flame, rather than his direct actions. For the most part, he simply added to his collection of cores. Even with two storage rings, he was working with a limited amount of space. While there certainly were other useful parts on most of the spirit beasts, the cores held the most value. So, he took those and left the rest. If the sect cultivators wanted to collect those other parts, they were welcome to do so.

As he worked, Sen tried to decide if he’d been put into this situation solely to bring him to terms with the realities of the Jianghu. He was willing to concede that maybe he had. While he wasn’t happy leaving Changpu alive behind him, he could already tell that he wouldn’t regret it the same way he regretted leaving those bandits alive. He’d left Changpu alive to, hopefully, prevent a much larger and less manageable problem from developing. Like it or not, he couldn’t challenge the might of most sects as he was. Even when he became a core formation cultivator, he’d need to tread with some care around sects. They had too many resources and too many people to keep making them angry everywhere he went. Maiming Changpu had been harsh, but within the bounds of Soaring Skies sect’s own rules. In a strange way, it had been a political answer to a personal problem. He just had to hope they saw it that way.

Sen’s mind was on sects when he first walked over to the spot where he’d made his made leap over the wall. It was only when he nearly tripped over part of the body of a spirit beast that he finally looked around.

“Hells,” he whispered.

Comments

Yes. It's fixed now. Sorry about that. This is what happens when I take days off. My delicately balanced systems go all out of kilter.

Eric Dontigney

Shouldn't Good Karma be on chapter 33? Currently sitting at a 2 chapter lead.

Daniel

We are about due for a secondary POV chapter, aren't we?

Eric Dontigney

Fair, discussion should stay in bounds to story only

Navdeep Sugandhi

I didn't mean to single you out, and it's entirely possible that I've missed other instances like this. I've made a general post about the comments section that applies to everyone.

Eric Dontigney

To be fair i did not start it, the guy above started talking personal shots like i have given a personal insult to him by criticizing a fictional character and it's choices

Navdeep Sugandhi

Thus far, I've been able to keep the comments section an open zone. I don't mind people disagreeing with my narrative choices and discussing that, even vigorously. I will ask that everyone refrain from taking their responses in the direction of personal shots and directing profanity at each other.

Eric Dontigney

Wow i didn't expect anything else from edgelord who think cultivation novels are just murder guys fyi it is not it is about enlightenment,dao and your path. It's idiotic u think i am talking about western novels whereas the novels i am talking about Chinese classics like ze tian ji, world of cultivation, tales of herding god's, 40 mileniums of cultivation, record of mortal journey etc. Read more stuff bitch not just the edgelord stuff u are like to read

Navdeep Sugandhi

Lol I know but I mean from his perspective he is obligation free so when they do come for him I hope he goes scorched earth on them mfs😂

Siddharth Patel

-Can’t use that as an excuse down the line Oh my sweet summer child

Patrick camp

Another pov from the soaring sky sect for the next chapter upon returning to their sect would further the world building

Fréderic Van Audenhove

What is this soup thing.

Al

I see the point youre making but I disagree. I think its comparable to someone coming and camping in your yard. You arent using the space right now so theyre claiming it. You tell them to get out and they just shrug and say "make me." Cutting his arm off IS extreme but thats the punishment that sect uses and agrees is fair. So he judged him as changpu would judge. Its fair, tyrannical, but fair.

Valderan

He didn't kill that other guy until he started throwing techniques around willy nilly. That almost certainly killed innocent bystanders or would have if allowed to continue. The bandit thing was stupid, but this was appropriate considering the sects own rules and the idiots behavior. If you let people get away with walking over you then you get a reputation for it and every petty bully tries. By stopping this hard he may have just kept himself from having to kill some other idiot later.

Moonspike

As an American, it took me a while to get used to the idea of face in Xianxia novels.

Patrick camp

Decisive soup!

Hunter Helms

it's not about the cores. it's about respect. This guy blatantly disrespected him. and has been doing so every time they met. Jianghu doesn't allow that kind of thing. This is him not being soft anymore. Also, he didn’t let the girls go and kill the guy out of frustration. That guy chased him out of the inn making demands and insulting him. The girls did not act that arrogantly, regardless of their intentions trying to fight him. they asked for a spar. the other guy who was much older and demanded "How dare you ignore your betters!" it's about politeness and respect.

MagicWafflez

I guess it makes sense in how he's embracing the savagery and how little cultivators value life (not a huge fan of the decision, but makes sense). My issue is with why he considers it stealing at all. He didn't need or want beast cores for any reason aside from that other people also seem to want them. I don't think he'd get mad if they tried to harvest the rest of the beasts bodies, since they're useless to him, so why get mad over the beast cores, since they're also (so far) useless and he has a huge excess already

Seth Richter

Yeah, that arm removal is too much and then turning it to ashes?? lmao. Maybe because he just went into a life and death situation with the spirit beasts + and he finally snapped with interacting with other cultivators. Still, it felt too extreme

Mortamir

Its not childish. Its more the rules of the cultivation world that you don't just take some else's kills or its rewards. Also Sen was struggling with his mortal mindset of letting people live or die by his hand as he didn't consider the cultivation world and its harshness. What he did was him accepting he will have to follow those rules regardless or they will walk all over him. Makes sense to me

Siddharth Patel

Also, why was he so concerned with the guy "stealing" from him? Doesn't he have a butt-ton of beast cores in his bag already that he has no idea what to do with? Seems like the only reason he wants them is because other people also want them...which feels kinda childish...

Seth Richter

So u agree he too is shit like the rest of them.

Navdeep Sugandhi

People forget that Sen is still learning and this chapter is about him actually accepting how harsh the cultivation world is and applying that harshness.

Thragnar

Oh sen is a shit that's for sure, he let the bandits and the girls who disturbed his enlightenment go but killed the guy at the restaurant because he was irritated. Same here he screwed the guy over a petty squable when he could have just used his killing intent to disable him and send a message to. Like Ming and kho specifically trained his killing intent for situations like this.

Navdeep Sugandhi

good question

Cisby

The guy got cucked, and got crippled because he tried to get some petty, harmless revenge. Sen is a shit, he could've just as easily driven him in the dirt with killing intent.

Doggi

Nope, not a plot hole. I just haven't gotten back around to them yet. I don't want to say anything else because spoilers.

Eric Dontigney

There might be a small hole in the plot. In v2ch25 the group of captured cultivators was still being escorted. Where did they disappear? If they are not with the sect group anymore, then who is watching them?

Petr Pavelka

I don't like what sen did to the guy, like they could have killed him when they found him sleeping and injured or atleast captured/incapacitated him. This seems pointless to me

Navdeep Sugandhi

Love that fact that it was quick and brutal without much hesitation and still kept to their own rules so they can't use that an excuse down the line. I don't think Sen will come across sects which he might bother talking or trusting anytime soon

Siddharth Patel

Honestly, I like that he walks the line and adheres to the sects rules

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