Much shorter one this time around. Still important, though.
Up next I need to take a few days to write my next outline. We've officially covered everything from the first one, so it's time to get on that. We're currently 28.5k words into vol. 2, no idea how long it'll end up being but I gue...
2024-04-02 00:14:11 +0000 UTC
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Not a huge deal but I’m gonna skip the pseudo POV mini chapter of Zoe I was gonna do next. I got about 400 words in and realized it felt too tell vs show and that a lot of the information was going to get conveyed in the next chapter where Oliver is looking at her online presence and streams. T...
2024-03-30 21:54:56 +0000 UTC
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Error on my part- I forgot to specify Oliver completed the quest in the last chapter. His total LP should've been 30 higher and the total at the end of this one reflects the correct amount. Will fix it later.
This was a short and fun one, still slowly working our way towards actual sex. I d...
2024-03-30 02:11:10 +0000 UTC
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Edit as of 4/6/24 large portions of this chapter have been reworked to match the change in how Zoe’s blossoming sexuality is portrayed. She’s now clearly much more into it but since it’s all very new to her it’s presented more as confusion and not that she’s feeling nothing but vague cu...
2024-03-28 03:36:04 +0000 UTC
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Just checking in to say I think I'm pretty much over whatever mental block I was having. I got back up to 4k words today and the next chapter should be out sometime tomorrow. Gonna relax for a while but I might even finish it in a few hours from now if I get back to it. It should be a pretty sexy...
2024-03-27 04:53:01 +0000 UTC
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Aaaaand here it is.
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"Fuckin' finally! I'm so damn hungry, and I can't even remember the last time you made breakfast for me like this, Mia. Thanks a ton!”
"I made you breakfast yesterday morning,” Mia closed her eyes. “You ate it on stream.”
"...I did? I mean, ...
2024-03-24 07:49:00 +0000 UTC
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Chapter is done now, ended up not feeling like doing much yesterday and then had trouble sleeping so I woke up very late. I’ll edit it within a few hours cause it took me longer than I thought and I don’t feel like it currently. I’m feeling a little better, don’t think all the way yet, bu...
2024-03-24 03:12:14 +0000 UTC
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Just letting you guys know I've been feeling a little mentally bleh these last few days and my pace has been a bit slower than I'd like as a result. I'm still typically reaching at least 3k words a day minimum but my mood has had me very particular about my writing and it's led to a lot, lot, lot...
2024-03-23 00:05:45 +0000 UTC
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This one took me a little longer despite only being 3k words. It went significantly off script and I had to keep retooling how far I wanted to take it. I think things are firmly established now and we've got a good path forward, though.
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Mia was glad she decided to fuck around in t...
2024-03-20 02:37:05 +0000 UTC
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Now all the girls have beach outfits! Love how they turned out, Sloth did a good job with the things I picked out.
Art - https://www.fiverr.com/skinnysloth
2024-03-18 01:18:32 +0000 UTC
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Sloth is feeling better now so I have this and one other thing to share from them! It came out extremely good and I'm very, very happy with it. I think it fits the tone of the current chapters especially well lmao.
Art -
2024-03-18 00:54:27 +0000 UTC
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Edit as of 4/6/24. I’ve retooled a lot of the dialogue in the second half to alter Zoe’s sexuality and make it less ambiguous. It’s now presented more that she’s legitimately curious and wouldn’t be forcing herself if they messed around, and it’s established that while low she DOES ha...
2024-03-17 03:36:13 +0000 UTC
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If Blood Meridian is really the great American novel then why am I higher in the rankings, huh
2024-03-16 04:57:44 +0000 UTC
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And we're back!
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It was just after ten in the morning, and the smell of a perfect American breakfast in all its questionable glory flavored the air of Mia's apartment. Crispy bacon, smoky sausage links, fluffy eggs, fragrant pancake batter… it was everything a man could want afte...
2024-03-15 05:51:41 +0000 UTC
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Should have the first chapter of vol 2 out later today. Instead of labeling them ’vol 2 ch 1’ I’m just gonna continue the running number count so as to be consistent with my internal numbering, so it’ll just be posted as chapter 61. It’s going well even if I was feeling a little bleh la...
2024-03-14 21:44:33 +0000 UTC
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A really cute pinup Urban got, same artist as the recent Rebecca one!
Art- https://twitter.com/slimiiart
2024-03-13 09:12:01 +0000 UTC
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I was sadly out of commission yesterday because my adderall prescription wasn't ready to get picked up yet so I just laid around all day feeling bleh but I'm back at it today and ready to go. First and foremost is that I finished my reread for typos and junk two days ago, need to get that edited ...
2024-03-13 00:42:57 +0000 UTC
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I know I keep saying 'if you're new here' but forgive me for doing so again, we just keep getting new people lmao. If you're new here, feel free to share your thoughts but please keep in mind these outlines are very loose and not fully set in stone. Anyway, I imagine this is probably 4-6 chapters...
2024-03-11 01:06:16 +0000 UTC
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Just letting you guys know I've started work on the first outline chunk! It'll cover the rest of that in story day and then I'll write those chapters before doing more outlines. That's the workflow for this story going forward as I need to adjust to the numbers as I write them and have wiggle roo...
2024-03-10 02:51:39 +0000 UTC
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A cute thing Urban got the other day of Rebecca! Title is an injoke.
Art- https://twitter.com/slimiiart
2024-03-09 12:54:01 +0000 UTC
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Preface- I'm still doing my reread but felt like getting something done today, so here's some precursor work to vol 2. I already wrote a mini biography for Zoe when I was first developing the concept for the characters pre-vol 1, but I want to establish more and make it fresher in my mind now tha...
2024-03-08 07:19:36 +0000 UTC
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Hey guys just doing another obligatory check in. I’ve still been relaxing most of the week while managing self promotion and observing the reaction to vol 1. Just keep getting more and more praise for it and it feels incredibly validating after how long it took and how mentally draining it got ...
2024-03-07 23:35:29 +0000 UTC
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I normally wouldn't ask this so directly, but I want Love Addict's RPG to spread as far as we can get it. Early responses have been amazingly positive and I'm in a very good mood because of it, but we can do better. I want to remain high in the rankings because there's always the chance that it m...
2024-03-06 01:22:47 +0000 UTC
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Getting a lot of new people here and wanted to say thank you as well as tell you what to expect! Because LARPG is a very reactionary story relying on numbers and junk, I write it in small batches so that I see where the numbers are at. I will make a loose outline like this for a chunk of the book...
2024-03-05 21:31:40 +0000 UTC
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Now that it’s out, here’s a post release thread. Please let me know your comments on the book here, how you liked it, and so on.
Currently I’m taking a break and watching the reception. I’ll likely move onto planning out the first bit of volume two this week, just don’t want to ru...
2024-03-04 22:43:29 +0000 UTC
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Finally released so go pick it up if you haven’t yet! I’m still upset about the pictures but whatever. Make sure you give it 5 stars, really need this one to take off!
2024-03-04 22:25:47 +0000 UTC
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Very upset about this but the final book will not have the UI images that I've been including. Amazon charges you for how big your book file is, and the images swelled it to 16mb. This means they would charge me $2.50 for '''delivery fee'''. Completely innascusable.
I was prepared to take l...
2024-03-01 09:10:18 +0000 UTC
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And that's a wrap. I'm very tired and stressed now but most of the ebook is already formatted. Will submit it as soon as I get the file that's missing. I'll make a post later for everyone to give me their thoughts and shit but I could really use the positivity right about now.
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2024-03-01 02:34:23 +0000 UTC
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One more till we're done! So excited and happy to be almost finished.
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Oliver hovered beside Mia on her bed, staring at his lover. Tonight was going to be so much better than Monday. Even if he couldn't take her clothes off, he still got to touch her wherever he wanted and show her...
2024-02-28 04:29:02 +0000 UTC
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So close to the end. Just need to get the sex chapter(s?) done and then the cliffhanger. Will definitely be done within the next week, hopefully.
Also unrelated but I'm going back and getting rid of Mia calling Oliver 'Sir', didn't feel it was fitting in the end and you won't see it in the ...
2024-02-25 11:48:54 +0000 UTC
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