Instead of looking at the leading edge of the story (chapter 6), here's a glimpse at the rewrite of Chapter 1. I've torn up the old Interlude and salvaged some of its bits to integrate into the new chapter 1, along with bits of chapter 2. More on this in the update later today, but for now, here'...
2024-03-22 07:43:26 +0000 UTC
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As part of revising and editing the first book
2024-03-21 07:47:16 +0000 UTC
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The first "book" of Constant is now up and complete on TGStorytime. I'd put off for years giving the old chapters a skim through and edit, probably because I knew it'd be a lot of time and effort. In my mind, I was always going to do it as part of the final edit once I read the final chapter or ...
2024-03-20 07:56:51 +0000 UTC
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As part of posting the first half of chapter 6 of Constant in All Other Things, I finally took the step to looking back over the older chapters and editing them.
It's something I ought to have done ages ago but kept putting off. Some chapters I hadn't looked at since first publishing ...
2024-03-18 15:07:30 +0000 UTC
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I posted the first half of Chapter 6 on Thursday night. It's now been up for a full weekend; here's some thoughts:
1. I invest -way- too much of myself into this! I only mean that half-seriously, but I honestly sleep terribly that first night wondering what the feedback's going to be. Which...
2024-03-18 08:53:30 +0000 UTC
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The word count hides a lot of additional work that's gone into Constant this week. At one point the word count dipped into the negative as I cut stuff away. The earlier part of the week was really...
2024-03-15 09:41:52 +0000 UTC
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Gave it a final read through, caught a bunch mo
2024-03-14 21:25:44 +0000 UTC
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The first half of chapter 6 is pretty much ready to publish, but in the meantime, here's a glimpse of what follows after. This follows a short scene with Julia. I'm a little unsure with this transitional stuff, though it's setting up some important plot points for later in the narrati...
2024-03-13 17:24:57 +0000 UTC
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I thought I'd try somethin a bit different today, instead of the usual "sneak peek". Word count is a little lower so far as I've been putting effort into the first half of the chapter in preparation for publishing it later this week. Instead of something in progress in draft form, I t...
2024-03-12 16:31:29 +0000 UTC
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A little editing time opened up this weekend, a
2024-03-10 23:32:41 +0000 UTC
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I found the writing more difficult this week, in part due to real-world concerns but also because the scene was tricky to get right and took a few tries. It's not quite there yet but I'm fe...
2024-03-08 13:25:35 +0000 UTC
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Writing continues apace on Chapter 6. I've found this scene tricky to write--fun, but tricky. The dynamic between Jonas and Cindy took me a few tries to figure out. I'm not entirely sure I'm there yet, but I feel it's coming along nicely. I'm pushing this moment as a trans...
2024-03-06 11:23:53 +0000 UTC
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Over on the FM mesage board, I posted the question: "How do you write?" Answers have started trickling in, and it's an intiguing mix of approaches.
For any writers following along here, what's your process, your method--how and where do you write, and what works for you, if you don't ...
2024-03-04 11:40:56 +0000 UTC
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Passed 20k words for chapter 6 of Constant this week, which feels like a bit of an achievement. The first "season" of Constant almost all came in at around 20k--but from about chapter 4 onw...
2024-03-01 10:05:03 +0000 UTC
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For your enjoyment, Chapter 6 to date. At this
2024-03-01 09:58:25 +0000 UTC
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Huh, I should've waited a day before posting the sneak peek for this week. Had another pass at the clubbing scene, and tightened it up a bit. Trying to capture the booze- and drug-fuelled euphoria of it all, and the swirl of experiences: more rambling and fragmented with the drink, lo...
2024-02-27 17:03:33 +0000 UTC
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A minor setback, as I started writing the next "story" in chapter 6. The framework bit with Julia and David at the "funeral" came out pretty good, and I started into the next bit of the story without problem (other than the crippling cold i was writing through). But as I trundled alon...
2024-02-26 15:41:00 +0000 UTC
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An odd week. Between jetlag and now this bloody cold, writing's been challenging. Especially these last few days, in which struggling to my 500+ word minimum's been tough going, and w...
2024-02-23 17:16:52 +0000 UTC
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With my brain swimming with a headcold I've brought back from abroad, writing's been a bit tricky this week. Or rather, it started strongly--a solid, 2000-word day--when it was just jetlag, but man, this cold's killing me. I was halfway through a tricky scene--Cindy in a sparkly dress...
2024-02-22 15:01:25 +0000 UTC
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First draft of Julia's visit to Cindy's apartment after the return from the Clinic. Warning: explicit details!
As always with a sneak peak, this is first-draft stuff and liable to change. Originally, I hadn't planned on anything happening between them, but the scene playe...
2024-02-21 08:58:59 +0000 UTC
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Hello again, all!
Brain's still addled by jetlag, and the workday's a struggle, but the familiarity of routine also seems to be good for writing. As I feared, precious little got done over the week's holiday. I read a bit, and sketched down some ideas for a few possible short stories, but d...
2024-02-20 11:50:35 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
Well, back from holiday and back to work - to both writing and "real world" work.
More to say, but don't trust my jetlag-addled brain to say it correctly so a more detailed update to follow later in the week. Hope all is well with everyone, and looking forward to getting ...
2024-02-19 19:19:06 +0000 UTC
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It's a familiar cliche: a man flies somewhere and discovers his luggage is lost in transit. For whatever reason--an urgent business meeting, perhaps; or he picked up the wrong suitcase--he's "forced" to wear women's clothing as he doesn't have any of his own. Hijinks ensue.
Well...
2024-02-12 10:11:52 +0000 UTC
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You know, there's something genuinely amazing about modern technology. I'm typing this out on my phone at 10,000 feet (or so) using the free WiFi on the plane winging me home to family. Yes, WiFi on planes is hardly bleeding edge tech, but somehow it's the first time I've ever tapped into it. And...
2024-02-10 22:49:56 +0000 UTC
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As there may not be an update over the next wee
2024-02-09 14:55:51 +0000 UTC
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A solid week's writing, which also included a number of rewrites as I played with the point of view and tried to improve the flow of the narrative. The "funeral of David Saunders" frame for t...
2024-02-09 14:43:17 +0000 UTC
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Another peek at where the story's going. As always: rough draft and liable to change over time, but hope you enjoy as is!
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Soon after I found myself standing in front of the mirror once more, once again naked, but this time under the bright light of the noonday sun. I stared ...
2024-02-08 14:06:51 +0000 UTC
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I've been meaning to write about this for a while but held off because I'm worried it'll come off as a little whingey, like I’m having a moan. And I’m not, or at least I don’t think I am, though it’ll probably come off that way at times. But today feels like a good day to write about keep...
2024-02-07 16:53:08 +0000 UTC
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Another round of revision, tightening up the prose of "Julia's Story", or rather David's version of it. Expanded the setting a little and squeezed in even more unsubtle imagery (the olympic park is shaped like a vagina; the train disappearing into the tunnel; hammering nails into soft wood;...
2024-02-06 15:45:28 +0000 UTC
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Hello! I hope you've all had a good weekend. I managed a little bit of writing over the weekend, mostly plotting stuff. As often happens, I had an "a-ha" moment in the shower--always the best place for new ideas--and for once managed to jot it down before it drained away. ...
2024-02-05 14:57:59 +0000 UTC
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