So we established that I would be adding sex scenes to Komand'r On Deck and that they will be skippable as I put a warning before them, despite myself not writing sex scene if they aren't relevant to the plot. After all, when I always do something... it has significance in the story.
But th...
2023-02-17 15:12:26 +0000 UTC View PostOkay, after receiving some good advices from my readers and Beta-Readers and Editors. I decided to reduce how long Raptor of life chapters are. I will stay at 9k minimum and 13k words maximum to boost the release schedule for this series. Can't do that for Komand'r with its current in...
2023-02-14 00:01:39 +0000 UTC View PostSo Guys, what do you think about Spirit Take Over and Combat Artificer so far?
2023-02-13 14:44:55 +0000 UTC View Post
Chapter 3
We must be swift as a coursing river
With all the force of a great typhoon
With all the strength of a raging fire
Mysterious as the dark side of the moon
...
2023-02-13 12:25:30 +0000 UTC View Post
Interlude 12
(Cindy Moon)
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She suddenly woke up with a killer headache, then she noticed that she couldn’t move. Cindy looked at her body, she was in a red jumpsuit with a number thirteen on her front; her wrists were held by leath...
2023-02-10 13:11:42 +0000 UTC View PostInterlude
(Sienna Khan)
March 6th, 1980
Brook Town
Just after passing Alexandre’s portal…
She watched the portal close up with the attractive older boy looking down at her. His crystal blue eyes boring into her… and ...
2023-02-08 21:11:33 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 2
Outside Brook Town
Evening.
Money spent: 800 Silver Drachmas. It included food and water. I pulled the cart that I bought for cheap; it was loaded with tools of all sorts. My camping gear was there too, there was no way that I was going t...
2023-01-27 14:17:15 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 2
The world is a book and those who do not travel read only one page.
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Wanted to keep you informed people!
Komand'r Interlude 3 part 5 is coming along well, i'm at 9k words already, but it's not even the middle of the chapter because I'm setting up for a big fight in the chapter.
I wanted to ask you if you were okay with me adding sex sc...
2023-01-20 13:52:59 +0000 UTC View Post
Chapter 1
It was dark in the church, the only light visible was passing through the stained glasses and the candlelight. The atmosphere was getting colder as my sister and I were fighting for our lives, why did we have to confront that demon in the church? We were just girl...
2023-01-03 14:50:10 +0000 UTC View Post
March 15th, 2010
Mars’ orbit, L2
Edited by LuluViB|99th Britannian Emperor
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Chapter 6
(Heda Dool)
Coruscant
Slum district G17
Trueping’s bar
18 hours after Destiny got back home…
So people like I said I would, this is the poll!
I hope you'll chose... wisely.
2023-01-03 13:48:39 +0000 UTC View PostHeya guys! Wanted to give you some news.
Interlude 3 part 4 is 18508 words, I am about to drop the chapter right now; incidentally, I realized that I need to make a part 5 and 6 to truly finish the interlude. Sorry about this, but they keep getting longer. And I already wrote the end of ho...
Merry Chrismas guys, I hope you're going to have a good time!
2022-12-24 14:42:15 +0000 UTC View PostHello guys! It's going to be Xmas soon, so I wanted to give you some news!
Komand'r interlude 3 part 4 is currently 14695 words and it keep growing, so I think it will be over 20-25k easy. Yes, I know it's a lot but that's how I work lol. The story kinda write itself.
Once I'm done wi...
2022-12-22 17:39:17 +0000 UTC View Post
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(Harly Qui
2022-12-07 13:08:43 +0000 UTC View PostSo guys, I'm going to post Komand'r Interlude 3 part 3 soon, it's also longer than the other parts somehow...
I'm going to give the editors free reign to look at it.
Stay tuned!
2022-12-06 01:39:15 +0000 UTC View Post
Koman'dr in space with her Nth metal soft-suit and sword in the scabbard.
2022-11-16 17:17:54 +0000 UTC View Post
A/N: Continuation of Komand'r training in the I
2022-11-02 18:10:53 +0000 UTC View Post
A/N: This interlude take where we left of in chapter 16. Komand'r decided to go to another universe to train for her confrontation with Hela (Because the death Goddess is too OP), thanks to her ship tech on the Murder Deck. She went to the DC Injustice universe where she will have no qualms k...
2022-10-28 15:03:16 +0000 UTC View PostHeya guys, wanted to tell you that I am getting Komand'r On Deck interlude 3 there, it's already 10k words, do you guy want the full chapter or should I divide it into part for you? Because the Interlude is going to be easily 30k words or more.
2022-10-25 17:29:26 +0000 UTC View Post
Komand'r On Deck
Chapter 16
May 16th, 2010
Hyperdimension
Bridge
The bridge raised at the top of the pyramid section of the Hyperdimension, they were hovering over the newly built Arcology. The ship was projecting even more shadow on the c...
2022-10-04 14:46:08 +0000 UTC View Post
Interlude 11
(Betsy Braddock)
Egypt base
February 24th, 1997
14:02 (Egypt time)
Betsy was surprised by what she was seeing in that new fangled hospital. People in blue scrub kept moving machines to people that they pried from their armors ...
2022-09-21 23:44:48 +0000 UTC View Post
Chapter 5
(Jedi GrandMaster Yoda)
50 BBY
Core Worlds
Coruscant subsector/Corusca sector
Coruscant system/Coruscant
Senate District
Jedi Temple/High Council Chamber
The High Council Chamber, also known as the Jedi...
2022-08-30 13:09:52 +0000 UTC View PostHeya guys, so sorry for not having posted anything recently, Summer is busy busy. But fortunately for you a Raptor chapter is coming: 21.2 which is 22904 words so far, I am almost done!
Then I will continue to work on my Gamer story! Céleste is going to complete the Tutorial Dungeon and af...
2022-08-21 15:52:00 +0000 UTC View Post
