I wasn't originally going to explain this yet, but after Dr. Mae mentioned it slightly on the previous page, I thought I needed to explain the theory that Charlotte is still only 20.
2020-08-07 10:08:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Made a lot of progress, but still feel a little behind.
2020-08-05 11:14:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's a really early page. I haven't drawn the panel lines yet because I'm trying to resize and move things around.
2020-08-04 10:53:00 +0000 UTC View Post
This page is sponsored by butts.
2020-08-04 10:50:56 +0000 UTC View PostLet's start with the simple question first.
2020-08-01 09:27:46 +0000 UTC View Post
About half-way done with the comic. I'll have a poll starting today about continuing this, or moving to a different comic. Maybe I'll do that every month?
2020-08-01 09:24:10 +0000 UTC View Post
Charlotte hasn't used her powers so far in the comic, so I wanted to bring in one of her old teammates and have them test them with her, and then also be in the rest of the story.
Warp here was from the prologue, and the flashback chapters about the Silver Dragon. Her hair is a little...
2020-07-30 23:28:11 +0000 UTC View Post
I think the art is all done, but I'm outta time, so I'll have to complete the dialog and letter it later today. I kept Warp's outfit the same colors as her outfit in the prologue.
2020-07-30 10:59:01 +0000 UTC View Post
I had thought about doing something silly, like giving Warp much larger breasts compared to how she looked two years ago. It would be a joke about more than one of the people Charlotte knew changed in that way.
2020-07-29 11:10:09 +0000 UTC View Post
The person at the end is Warp, one of the people Charlotte was training with before she was petrified. Warp's outfit is different because I thought she'd have changed it in the last two years, and her old outfit wasn't very superhero-y.
No dialog in the last two panels, yet, but Dr Ma...
2020-07-28 12:07:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Sometimes one panel gets left behind, it's panel 2 here.
2020-07-27 10:03:42 +0000 UTC View PostA question I have to ask- should I just keep going with "A Day Off No Matter What" until it's complete (it'll be about 12 pages long)? Or should I have a vote every month what comic I'm working on?
I notice other creators let their Patreons decide every month, but the con of that opti...
2020-07-27 02:45:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Some WIPs of the next two pages. I'm not sure my handwriting is easy to read, but I kind of like pre-lettering it that way instead of doing it digitally.
2020-07-26 10:24:46 +0000 UTC View Post
I wonder if I need some kind of noise in panel 2 or 3 that wakes them?
2020-07-25 10:07:41 +0000 UTC View Post
The comment in the second panel is the start of a discussion about Charlotte's age considering she was petrified for almost two years. When Annie and Lucy turn 21 coming up, they'll suggest that now they are older than her, because while Charlotte was born 22 years ago, she's only aged 20 y...
2020-07-23 10:43:53 +0000 UTC View Post
There's some weird things I probably haven't noticed yet. Charlotte will be covered in sensors for most of these panels.
2020-07-22 11:38:38 +0000 UTC View Post
In these panels, Charlotte is covered in sensors, that's why she's in a strange pose in panel 2.
The joke here is that it seems like Dr. Mae is wanting to give Charlotte a sex talk, but she's actually telling her that she'll have to start wearing a superhero mask. We was never seen in...
2020-07-21 11:05:19 +0000 UTC View Post
I think Annie's butt might be too small in panel 1.
2020-07-20 10:36:46 +0000 UTC View Post
Although both Annie and Lucy didn't have a huge amount of page time in the last arc, I thought I needed to give Charlotte the spotlight without them for this chapter, and also give her time with her mother. To let the two of them interact.
This chapter will also resolve the ex-sleepwa...
2020-07-17 11:01:12 +0000 UTC View Post
What's left is at least the outside of the door in panel 1, shading in panel 5, and a lot in panel 6.
I had planned for a big background for panel 6, but looking at all of the text that'll appear, maybe I should simplify instead of drawing a lot that'll be covered up anyway.
2020-07-16 11:01:54 +0000 UTC View Post
Worked on this because I wanted to work on it. I think they might not be busty enough in panel 2.
2020-07-15 08:08:19 +0000 UTC View Post
Still an empty panel, but I'm outta time and need to switch to Pulse.
In the empty panel, the robot they've seen quickly drives past them beeping. Annie says that must mean one of the three robots found something. This page leading them to go to what the robot found on the islan...
2020-07-15 07:54:09 +0000 UTC View Post
In the one panel, I wasn't sure how to frame it-- so I just make Charlotte sitting down. It is an elevator with windows, a lot of people might do that.
2020-07-14 09:19:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Chosen by a poll on Twitter, Minmin from Arms and Smash Bros.
2020-07-12 10:35:33 +0000 UTC View Post
Juno, with a Genesis top, and Master System bottom.
2020-07-11 10:48:34 +0000 UTC View Post
I thought that because Nani is short I should make Gamegear her theme.
(If you don't know who this character is, she was from an old webcomic I used to make. I can't post the comics because I made them with someone else.)
2020-07-11 08:58:59 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying a different process with these pages, so warn me if something look strange about them. I SHOULD just try to switch to Clip Studio Paint and do the entire comic in one program, but I'm instead testing out going back to something more old-school for me.
I'm still drawing the ...
2020-07-09 09:37:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Seems like it's in good shape to update on the right day. Just have to color it, write the dialog, and letter it.
I've toyed with coloring each of the three outfits differently, but I probably should color them all the same if they are meant to match her father's costume.
2020-07-08 10:14:19 +0000 UTC View Post