Dress of Charisma +3
A sketch I inked and colored.
2021-07-31 09:01:21 +0000 UTC View Post
How about this? Is the dialog better? (the first dialog needs to end with a question mark.) My intention was the joke of the second panel was partly that it wasn't logical that she could have grown so much and it not be noticed before.
Any thoughts about Sara's hair?  ...
2021-07-30 09:02:32 +0000 UTC View Post
I didn't look up the dress Tifa wore in the flashback during the game, but I think it was something vaguely similar to this maybe?
2021-07-30 02:55:12 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, there's obviously three different things going on here-
Okay, here's my plans for the next few comics-
Comic 11-
Max stops her sister from showing too much affection (for Sam) by getting her Mom and Sam to hug-- allowing Max to mingle.
Comic 12-
Trying to show time is passing. I don't kno...
2021-07-28 09:08:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Starting to fill in the empty places. I keep erasing and redrawing Annie's upper half in panel 5.
2021-07-27 10:40:55 +0000 UTC View Post
It looks like Nani from Peeved won the poll. Here's my first idea for the result, I'd like to see what's thought of it. I drew this from memory, so anything I needed reference isn't complete.
Although I could have just used Sena's magic for a reason, I thought there would other ...
2021-07-27 10:03:38 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, so Annie looks down on the group controlling Mean Evie. Mastermind and Mira continue with their plan to enter Evilyn's mind. Annie is blinded by the bright light from that, and then she decides to try to find a way to help by finding an alternative power source. Then Maste...
2021-07-26 10:46:48 +0000 UTC View Post
I noticed the feedback about the last word bubble. But I thought it was kind of funny that they are either suggesting that Tifa's strength equals two of their stats, or that she was more than one strength stat.
Any thoughts on that?
One more page to this section of the comic. 2021-07-24 21:46:04 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm excluding Annie, Juno, Eve, Sena, Xom, and the non-OCs just to see the result. I'm curious who would win if I excluded the characters I think could easily win.
2021-07-23 10:51:45 +0000 UTC View Post
I didn't want Mean Evie to steamroll them yet. She only has two horns so far, so she's just the strongest C-Class, she isn't a threat yet to a B-Class. This page is to show there's a big difference between Mira and Tabitha who struggled with two-horn Mean Evie and her versus the elite...
2021-07-23 08:49:57 +0000 UTC View Post
A lot of progress today, but still not enough for me to be certain it'll be done on time.
2021-07-22 11:02:01 +0000 UTC View Post
A little ahead planning.
Page 441-
Okay, so this page is to show off that even with two horns, Evilyn isn't nearly a B-Class... and also to make them feel like there's nothing to worry about.
2021-07-21 09:38:58 +0000 UTC View PostI feel like I've always been uncertain what people want, that's why I ask a lot or have polls. You CAN choose more than one option, hopefully it doesn't become confusing doing it that way.
2021-07-20 06:48:20 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay fixed her cleavage line, and went with blue for her bikini.
2021-07-19 08:02:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Not sure if I'll get a chance to color this right away, so I thought I'd post a WIP here.
Any suggestions for the color of her bikini?
2021-07-18 10:49:24 +0000 UTC View Post
I wanted to start showing the complications of trying to handle someone who can become more powerful by hurting themselves-- and also add some mystery when Jessica is trying to communicate with Evilyn telepathically.
Even with two horns though Evilyn should be much weaker than everyone but ...
2021-07-16 07:30:02 +0000 UTC View Post
They're being surprised here, but things aren't spinning out of control yet. Two horns should still be easily managed by a B-Class.
How about this? I altered the fourth-wall text again to be yellow. It's the same color as the narration boxes in my comics.
Is this better? I considered using a different font too, but someone a few years ago convinced me that using too many different fonts made the comic ...
2021-07-10 08:39:59 +0000 UTC View Post
How about this as a test for what the fourth wall breaking bubbles should look like? I thought changing the font might be distracting on pages where she switches, and also changing the color of the outline might make it hard to have the bubbles cut out of the panels (to save space).
I...
2021-07-09 09:13:40 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying to be realistic here that even if Annie had the energy to power her suit she's only be slightly useful, but she's still unhappy there's nothing she can do so far.
I'm also trying to show that Mira isn't as cold-hearted as she sometimes seems. She's trying to help Evilyn bec...
2021-07-09 00:56:55 +0000 UTC View Post