Because I'm late, all Patreons will be able to see all of the rest of the WIPs for this page. This is the beginning of the second half of the chapter, where I start wrapping things up.
2021-11-06 08:25:50 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie as Red Monika and Thomas as Garrison.
Any thoughts about this? It's always an experiment whenever I'm coloring with anything other than cell-shading.
2021-11-05 07:19:29 +0000 UTC View Post
Still not sure about that middle transformation panel with Mira. Her chest I think gets way too big in the upper part of the panel, even if you consider she's probably 4 inches shorter at the start compared to the end.
2021-11-04 10:34:49 +0000 UTC View Post
I've been sick since Friday. There's a chance it's covid so I've been isolating, but I've only had mild symptoms. I'm waiting for the person who made have covid who I've been near to get re-tested. I haven't been tested myself, I don't think they are accurate enough to completel...
2021-11-03 10:22:37 +0000 UTC View Post
I wasn't exactly sure what to have them say here, so I went with something silly. The joke here will be that Rikku finds it more challenging to use the materia on unsuspecting people than she expected. She'll fail on every trip out until the final one.
(I know the last page of p...
2021-10-29 09:57:17 +0000 UTC View Post
A page with zero of the normal dialog font.
Remember, Mira hasn't interacted with Arim since before the sleepwalker arc. I'm not sure that Arim changed exactly, but she did stop pretending as much. She and Mira both pretended to be other people in a way.
Removing Mira from...
2021-10-28 10:49:00 +0000 UTC View Post
Sketches that are far enough alone to share, and that I don't think I've posted here-
Working on the next few pages. I know what's going to happen, but trying to make it resolve by the end of the chapter (on page 460 I think).
I'm trying to steer the story in a direction. I was trying to explain Mean Evie's plan is to just get to five horns and try to escape the ...
2021-10-26 09:29:24 +0000 UTC View Post
One of several Xom pictures I'm working on. "BABL 12" is at least the media company she worked at in the past, if not the one she's still working for currently.
2021-10-25 08:26:58 +0000 UTC View Post
I've got a few pictures to finish, here's the first one. Xom is next, and at some point I need to complete the Halloween one.
2021-10-23 08:36:36 +0000 UTC View Post
My original plan is they find a strange solution to Evilyn's problem. She'll still be a threat to a degree-- and it might even be she'll be upgraded to B-Class forcing her away from Mira and Arim's team.
BUT I do see the option of a second more unusual idea. What if there is no ...
2021-10-22 10:40:16 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie defends against Mean Evie while Mira tries to talk sense into Evilyn.
2021-10-20 10:49:41 +0000 UTC View Post
The current progress on my Halloween picture, with Annie as Red Monika and Thomas as Garrison from Battle Chasers.
Like the last few pictures I've made, I'm trying to do something more complex with the coloring than just cell shading. I feel like a really good colorist could do a lot ...
2021-10-19 10:21:21 +0000 UTC View Post
Hopefully the dialog is readable... I have page one more complete, but I'll wait until tomorrow to post it because I might have more time to work on it before then.
I figured that Yuffie's method would be to pick the smallest person in a group, mirroring Rikku and Yuffie's original mo...
2021-10-17 09:37:15 +0000 UTC View Post
I thought this story needs to show how difficult it would be to fight someone who gets stronger the more you hurt them (to a point). Evilyn could be killed obviously if they tried, but any survivable injury makes her stronger (until she has five horns).
Also bringing in Annie finally....
2021-10-15 21:58:30 +0000 UTC View Post
I guess the last page of part IV isn't complete yet, but I worked on this.
2021-10-13 11:09:44 +0000 UTC View Post
Certain parts are almost done, others pretty far away from complete.
2021-10-13 11:04:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Page 452-
Another step of detail on these, still rough in places, some parts need big changes- Yuffie likeness on page one, and Rikku's body proportions in the last panel of page 2.
2021-10-10 08:50:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Some Sketches-
I'm feeling like the story needs to start moving to the end, but there's still a lot of unfinished things yet. Annie's doing something, there's Mastermind and Mira in Eviliyn's mind, there has to be a solution to Evilyn-- and we'll probably want to see Evilyn's maximum power.
2021-10-08 23:48:52 +0000 UTC View Post
Late enough this goes to everyone. I'll have to write the dialog and letter it this afternoon.
The heroes regroup while Mira tries to talk to Evilyn.
2021-10-08 10:57:50 +0000 UTC View Post
We see that Evilyn destroyed half the robot's torso and arm. Then the two fast women pull him away while the vapor woman creates a smoke screen. Then the group plan out their next step under the cloak guy.
Then we see Mastermind trying to hold back Evilyn in her mind while Mira ...
2021-10-06 11:06:22 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, here's a rough idea of my plan for the next part of Materia Enhanced. To convince Tifa that their crazy lie was true, Yuffie and Rikku have to use their growth materia randomly around Edge to give the appearance of some kind of boob growth virus. The joke of the story is though ...
2021-10-05 09:17:10 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, this is as far as I have drawn out visually. I suspect Mimi here will introduce something to giant Jen to make her smaller-- under certain circumstances. Maybe it'll be a joke or constant threat that Jen's always on the verge of returning to this giant size.
Mimi will the ...
2021-10-02 07:54:30 +0000 UTC View PostI'm not saying this doesn't mean any other won't be worked on, but I'll try to focus more on the one that wins, at least until the next time there's a poll.
Until I have an answer, my plan is to finish one of the WIP comic pages, and work on the Xom picture.
2021-10-01 07:48:39 +0000 UTC View Post
