Materia Enhanced V, page 9 WIP 5
I think this just needs dialog and lettering.
2023-05-17 10:19:10 +0000 UTC View Post
I think this just needs dialog and lettering.
2023-05-17 10:19:10 +0000 UTC View Post
This is late, so this last WIP goes out to everyone. I think it just needs color (and to fix what must have been a layer issue with the SCU armbands in panel 5).
So this'll end up being posted for everyone else as a Sunday morning page, after I've had a chance to color it. If it...
2023-05-13 10:00:36 +0000 UTC View Post
Moving along with this. It'll probably be late, maybe a Friday or Saturday page.
2023-05-11 12:06:02 +0000 UTC View Post
So, what happens is that the SCU are going to do two things- send a team to visit Annie's room to see if she is there, and also send a team to the location she was seen. Annie says she doesn't have enough time or power left to get back, and Lucy says that she has a bad plan.
2023-05-10 10:10:11 +0000 UTC View Post
So, Annie and Charlotte are talking with Lucy, suggesting the SCU will be arriving at Annie's known room to confirm if she's there as part of their investigation. There's no way for Annie to get back there in time. If they can trick them into thinking she's not outside, they might dec...
2023-05-07 10:35:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Moving along with this. In order to move on to the next page being about Rikku completely avoiding the scheme and goofing off, she'll looked more and more pressured here, so she'll probably look really stressed in the last panel.
So top panel set, Rikku says that she has to use the ma...
2023-05-07 10:29:47 +0000 UTC View Post
I kept trying to come up with what the initials for the superhero police might be. I originally wanted it to end up being the "ICU", but couldn't come up with a great choice for the "I".
The "Superiority Control Unit" sounded really tough, so I went with that. It'll be the "SCU"...
2023-05-04 10:03:54 +0000 UTC View Post
The page is late, so this goes up for everyone.
Panel 1: The villain recounts what's going to happen, that the group who polices rogue heroes will be coming after her. I think it's the "ICU".
Panel 2: completely redrew Annie here, thinking you'd...
2023-04-29 10:20:55 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, started inking. I erased Annie from panel two because I thought she was on the wrong level compared to the desk. It should be more from her waist to head in the panel.
I also erased her leg in the last panel because I thought their poses seemed too similar.
I'm not s...
2023-04-27 10:15:46 +0000 UTC View Post
Pulse and Charlotte escape after Pulse has been identified as a rogue hero.
2023-04-25 10:42:13 +0000 UTC View Post
I think what I'm going to do is show Yuffie's using the materia without any concern. In her first set of powers, she might say "ninja" this and "ninja" that. Maybe ending with "ninja complete", scaring Rikku.
In her second set of panels, she's just covering her eyes and using th...
2023-04-25 10:34:11 +0000 UTC View Post
End of the chapter.
Okay, I wanted this storyline to tie into the hotsprings story where Annie was worried about Tabitha stopping a criminal before they were allowed to be active heroes. This is only something that could happen now, because they'll be official superheroes soon (after ...
2023-04-22 10:27:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie is tricked, and the villain burns off her costume to search her identity in the hero database (correctly assuming she was in a disguise because she's not allowed yet to fight crime).
2023-04-20 11:09:08 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I wanted this to be a montage, and it had to connect to page 10. That means Rikku had to be stressed out about lying, and we had to go through several breaks around town to use the materia.
Trip out #1: Rikku fails again, but lies again to Yuffie.
Trip out #2: I just...
2023-04-20 11:03:42 +0000 UTC View Post
I had this picture from 2021 almost inked, so I thought I'd finish it up.
I kinda wonder if I'm going to give Annie long hair at some point in the comic. Her appearance has mostly stayed the same through the comic.
2023-04-17 11:38:35 +0000 UTC View Post
Page 508-
Annie tries to reveal the villain, but there's a device there that burns off her disguise. It then takes a picture of her and identifes her in the hero database-- mentioning she isn't authorized to be a superhero.
Page 509-
The v...
2023-04-17 11:33:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, one more page to this chapter.
I wasn't sure what kind of outfit to give Charlotte. I considered something sexy, if there were any past events that suggested a certain outfit, or giving her the other outfit I considered for Annie (the blue slightly birdish one). BUT I thou...
2023-04-13 10:36:08 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie turns around the chair to find a device that burns the costume off her, then takes a picture and searches through the hero archive to find her.
I think this is the last page of the chapter, but it continues on.
2023-04-11 10:10:21 +0000 UTC View Post
Most of what's incomplete is in panel 5, although I notice I've forgotten to draw the tracker.
What happens is that Charlotte finally shows up, but in a strange outfit. Annie leaves to take on the boss, who comments that she used electrical powers as a last resort, meaning it wasn't s...
2023-04-11 10:07:04 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, in panel one, I now realize the continuity error of having Rikku in that "club president" shirt, if I had her switch back out of it on page 8.
I wanted to include food in each shot, because I've tried to include that in most of Rikku's outings as a joke.
I wasn't sure what to do...
2023-04-11 10:02:51 +0000 UTC View Post
A proper hug for Charlotte requires several people.
2023-04-06 11:52:45 +0000 UTC View Post
A lot of inking done, a lot of inking and drawing left.
2023-04-05 11:01:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Just something normal. I tried to keep them in common color schemes, which meant grays for Tifa and green for Yuffie.
2023-04-03 11:29:43 +0000 UTC View Post
Some sketches or incomplete items (hopefully no repeats)-
Annie gives in an uses her final resort of showing off her electrical powers, then Charlotte arrives-- in a really strange costume. Annie hobbles off to break through the last door to confront the villain.
2023-03-31 10:16:58 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm not going to drag out revealing this guy forever, but the point of this is for Annie to be humbled a little, not for her to have an early victory.
2023-03-30 12:18:48 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I think I'm happy with the dialog.
2023-03-29 08:31:48 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm behind on this. I'm not sure if the art is done or not. I wonder if I should do more for Annie's thrusters and smoke from it in the middle panels.
What happens here is that Annie discovers lots of broken robot animals and debates the villain. Lucy uses the drones to fi...
2023-03-27 11:43:46 +0000 UTC View Post