Meetup/Q&A
You guys voted that we should meet this weekend! Should we meet:
2023-10-09 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
You guys voted that we should meet this weekend! Should we meet:
2023-10-09 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View PostThis time, she didn’t resist when he entered the ballroom. She wasn’t sure if it was the surplus of gold, nerves, or the fact that she was treading on what felt like holy ground, but her insides began to buzz as if she had taken a shot of alcohol.
Roth headed ... 2023-10-08 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
“Jasmine.”
She tore her eyes from the festivities and focused on Roth. There was a woman standing at his side with her hair pulled back into a severe bun, wearing a kind smile.
“Your coat, ma’am.”
When she ... 2023-10-07 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey guys! We're planning a meetup next week. Should we have it on:
2023-10-06 20:32:51 +0000 UTC View Post
Happy Friday! This is the inspiration for the setting of the chapter I’m working on today.
There’s a new chat feature here on the Patreon app as well if you want to try it out! And I’ll be putting out polls for a meetup this coming week 💙
2023-10-06 20:25:04 +0000 UTC View PostI. Am. Screaming. 😱😱😱
Just wrote this line:
“If you don’t tell me what happened--”
“What?” she cut in. “You’ll fire me? Good. That’ll put both of us out of our misery.”
**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confe...
2023-10-06 04:18:43 +0000 UTC View PostShe didn’t recognize the elegant woman in the mirror, but that wasn’t surprising considering the hours that had been dedicated to making her look like the best version of herself. Sarai hadn’t missed a thing. She spent most of her day at the spa in their building where she got a fa... 2023-10-05 16:00:04 +0000 UTC View Post
I finally got around to posting my monthly update on the blog on my website! I summarize a lot of what I've been saying on here about the word count. I'm now estimating the final word count will be between 230-250k words. I also talk about Roth and Jasmine's relationship and some changes I've mad...
2023-10-03 22:08:46 +0000 UTC View Post“We have an engagement tonight.”
“We do?”
“Yes. The Trentham Ball.”
If her cup was full, she would have drenched herself in coffee when she jerked to the edge of her seat. “You got an invitation?... 2023-10-03 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
“Roth?” He was feet away from the hallway when she snapped, “Jamie!”
He stopped.
“Is there anything I can do?” Her voice was hoarse with strain.
She willed him to turn around and face her. To come to her ... 2023-10-01 16:00:12 +0000 UTC View Post
Lyle ignored her question and asked, “What mischief have you been up to, Minnie?”
She crossed her legs and bobbed her foot. “This and that.”
“Taking charge of your fortune, investing, and networking?”
This fucking ball/high society shindig they're at is going to be the death of me. I can write thousands of words with just the two of them in the scene, so when you add dozens of people I get totally overwhelmed. Bah. But I'm more than halfway through so we're through the worst of the storm. ...
2023-09-28 23:04:02 +0000 UTC View Post“What do you know?” Ariana asked.
Her hands fisted in the pocket of her coat. “How it started, your attempts to get help, and it’s escalation.”
“How?” Ariana rasped.
“Roth.”... 2023-09-28 16:00:04 +0000 UTC View Post
Daiyu: I need to talk to you!
Daiyu: Are you avoiding me?
She rolled her eyes. After countless unanswered calls, Daiyu was finally catching the hint. Daiyu was being annoyingly persistent about this fashion show thing and ... 2023-09-26 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm still working on that high society chapter where they make their first official public debut as a married couple. It's turning out to be a three chapter saga. A lot of stuff isn't working on screen, so I'm constantly reaching for my iPad to write out dialogue and scene structure longhan...
2023-09-25 23:25:59 +0000 UTC View Post
She slipped out from under his arm and faced him with her hand on her hip. “What am I supposed to do the next time your business associate comes up to me? Walk away? Glare at him like you did? How are you going to stay in business if you treat everyone that way?” When his expression ... 2023-09-24 16:00:04 +0000 UTC View Post
Continuation of previous post "early mornings," Jasmine decides not to go to sleep and surprise him at the gym.
As they made their way along the quiet, empty halls she said, “I know why he’s up at this hour. Not dealing with people makes it easier to think and get done wh... 2023-09-23 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Usually don’t listen to music when I write because I find it distracting. I usually have white noise playing in the background, but I’ve been jotting down songs I like on social media and this one, I’ve been listening to on repeat 💙
Lyrics:
Tell me that you want me, but it's...
2023-09-23 00:25:03 +0000 UTC View PostRoth’s body jerked, jolting her out of a sound sleep. He was flat on his back while she lay against his side with an arm draped over his waist and leg tossed over his massive thighs.
“Roth?” she rasped.
“Go back to slee... 2023-09-21 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
Small mention again, but any names for an eccentric, female designer? The best I can come up with is Sherry. LOL. I want it to be more bold and a little out there. Any ideas?
She creates an office for Jasmine at the penthouse.
Sunlight touched on walls that were deepest... 2023-09-21 00:19:10 +0000 UTC View Post
Inspirational images for the chapter (or two) I'm working on right now. Their first public outing in high society. How do you think it's going to go? 👀
2023-09-20 23:09:20 +0000 UTC View PostIt's just a small mention, but I had to name the hedge fund Lyle works for, so I came up with Arc Capital Management and I don't like it.
These are some of the top ones in New York:
Shown in Discord during our meet, wanted to make sure I showed here.
Context: She's gaining a better understanding of Roth and why he is the way he is. This is the resulting inner monologue.
She loved on him, safe in the knowledge that he was asleep and wouldn’t protest her... 2023-09-19 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View Post
I was wrapping up my day this morning at 3am--making note of my word count, writing a summary of the day's work, and notes for the next day, when Roth started talking.
The chapter I've been working on was originally a scene that showed their daily routine at this point in their marria...
2023-09-18 01:18:23 +0000 UTC View PostShown on Discord during our Sunday meet.
Context: She's gaining a better understanding of Roth and why he is the way he is. This is the resulting inner monologue.
She ignored the lump in her throat as she brushed her lips over the top of his spine. She fell for a man wh... 2023-09-17 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Working on an intimate scene in the bathtub at 432 Park Ave today and hoping to wrap up a chapter I've been working on for several days. 🤞
Focus in this chapter: Roth & Ariana
Bitter Heat Audiobook:
I've been talking to this narrator all week, discussing inflections ...
2023-09-16 22:53:19 +0000 UTC View PostContext: Much, much later, she has him try the cookies she brought him. He doesn't show a reaction. She wants to find a sweet he likes, a guilty pleasure.
This was shown on Discord during our meet this past Sunday. Shout out to those who came out to hang out and chat!
“We... 2023-09-16 16:00:04 +0000 UTC View Post
“Is this what you came for?”
His voice was low and rough.
“I…” She tried to focus as his tongue roamed. “I came for…”
“What did you come for, princess?”
“To g... 2023-09-15 16:00:08 +0000 UTC View Post
He clasped her face as he devoured her. Her heart soared as he latched onto her mouth as if her taste was addictive, as if he gained sustenance from what he extracted from her. She closed her eyes and got lost in him. She had no choice. His hunger fed hers. The alluring madness that had ... 2023-09-14 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View Post
When Sarai tilted her head to the side, scrutinizing her, she tensed.
“What?”
“You don’t have to answer, but I’ve always wanted to know…”Sarai mouthed more than said, “Did he really cheat?”
He... 2023-09-13 16:00:07 +0000 UTC View Post