I'm not happy with this chapter at all. Had to fight through a bad case of writer's block and I think it shows. I'll be reworking portions of the chapter, but I would appreciate some feedback on what works and what doesn't. Sorry that its not up to the usual standard.
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Jericho
Level: 28
Title: Under Leveled
Health: 2860
Magika: 125
Progress to next level: 0/150,000
Strength: 123 (+151= 274)
Endurance 2020-04-25 15:00:48 +0000 UTC View Post
I found myself in a familiar white void, only this time things were a bit different. Instead of wearing a party outfit and carrying arms full of food that I had looted from a house party to feed me for the foreseeable future, I was covered in burnt, bloodstained clothing, reeking of smoke and pea...
2020-04-25 15:00:44 +0000 UTC View PostPamela Isley looked around at the generic lobby for a moment, taking it all in. It was hard to believe that this place served as the home for the self-proclaimed owner of Earth. From what she heard about him, she half expected to see stuffed corpses of animals, or for it to be a hut in the middle...
2020-04-20 14:50:59 +0000 UTC View Post“Your half is bigger,” Elery pointed out, pointing at my third of a creature that smelled like it was going to taste delicious. I looked over at her third to see that it was the exact same size as mine. Just as both of ours were the same exact size as Kakarot, who was already chowing down on ...
2020-04-20 14:50:51 +0000 UTC View Post“Do you think we can win?” I asked, turning to Vegeta. King Vegeta-...Dad only had so much time that he could spare us. Perhaps unsurprisingly, over three million saiyan children were proving to be handfuls. Which left me and Vegeta along to digest all that we had learned. It was nearing dusk...
2020-04-20 14:50:46 +0000 UTC View PostJericho
Level: 28
Title: Under Leveled
Health: 2860
Magicka: 125
Progress to next level: 0/150,000
Strength: 123 (+151= 274)
Endurance 2020-04-18 14:46:57 +0000 UTC View Post
I found myself in a familiar white void, only this time things were a bit different. Instead of wearing a party outfit and carrying arms full of food that I looted from a house party to feed me for the foreseeable future, I was covered in burnt bloodstained clothing, reeking of smoke and peaches....
2020-04-18 14:46:55 +0000 UTC View PostI dropped the mangled corpse of Zanis and took in a deep breath of air, the smell of blood so thick in the small room that I could practically taste it. Whoever said that vengeance was unfulfilling was an idiot. Satisfaction filled me as I leaned over, picking up the sword that Zanis dropped befo...
2020-04-18 14:46:51 +0000 UTC View PostSo, after a day the results are in. They are the following:
Biggest Tipper: 10% voted yes and 90% voted no.
Bigger Tipper: 6% voted yes and 94% voted no.
Big Tipper: 24% voted yes and 76% voted no.
Tipper: 26% voted yes and 74% voted no.
So, by a landslid...
2020-04-17 16:34:02 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been some controversy about Neo and her place in Be a Dragon. I personally think she's what the story needs, but if so many people are upset then there's probably a reason for it. So, this poll determines if Neo should be replaced with another girl or if it's just a vocal minority.
<... 2020-04-16 14:48:46 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been some controversy about Neo and her place in Be a Dragon. I personally think she's what the story needs, but if so many people are upset then there's probably a reason for it. So, this poll determines if Neo should be replaced with another girl or if it's just a vocal minority.
<... 2020-04-16 14:48:40 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been some controversy about Neo and her place in Be a Dragon. I personally think she's what the story needs, but if so many people are upset then there's probably a reason for it. So, this poll determines if Neo should be replaced with another girl or if it's just a vocal minority.
<... 2020-04-16 14:48:35 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been some controversy about Neo and her place in Be a Dragon. I personally think she's what the story needs, but if so many people are upset then there's probably a reason for it. So, this poll determines if Neo should be replaced with another girl or if it's just a vocal minority.
<... 2020-04-16 14:48:31 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been a few changes to chapter 9. Neo nearly drowns Adonis in lube rather than shoving anything in him, which slightly changed the interaction with the teen titans. Nothing too much, only Neo stealing the money is the reason for conflict.
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Anime ruined me. When I tho...
2020-04-15 14:56:36 +0000 UTC View PostThere has been a few changes to chapter 9. Neo nearly drowns Adonis in lube rather than shoving anything in him, which slightly changed the interaction with the teen titans. Nothing too much, only Neo stealing the money is the reason for conflict.
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This was a date. I was almo...
2020-04-15 14:56:33 +0000 UTC View PostHinata was reasonably certain that Neo, if that was her real name, didn't actually know how to drive. They blasted down the roads much faster than when Nero was behind the wheel. She refused to touch the stick that alerted other drivers that she was changing lanes in favor of weaving around cars,...
2020-04-15 14:56:31 +0000 UTC View Post“Do you think we can win?” I asked, turning to Vegeta. King Vegeta-...Dad only had so much time that he could spare us. Perhaps unsurprisingly, over three million saiyan children were proving to be handfuls. Which left me and Vegeta along to digest all that we had learned. It was nearing dusk...
2020-04-13 14:59:14 +0000 UTC View Post"Is that home?" Elery asked, jabbing a finger in the direction of Planet Vegeta. It might have been about six years since I’ve last seen it, but I still recalled what it looked like with ease. It hadn’t changed at all during the last six years -- the same lush green colors, the oceans were a ...
2020-04-13 14:59:09 +0000 UTC View Post
I found myself in a familiar white void, only this time things were a bit different. Instead of wearing a party outfit and carrying arms full of food that I looted from a house party to feed me for the foreseeable future, I was covered in burnt bloodstained clothing, reeking of smoke...
2020-04-11 14:28:36 +0000 UTC View PostI dropped the mangled corpse of Zanis and took in a deep breath of air, the smell of blood so thick in the small room that I could practically taste it. Whoever said that vengeance was unfulfilling was an idiot. Satisfaction filled me as I leaned over, picking up the sword that Zanis dropped befo...
2020-04-11 14:28:32 +0000 UTC View Post
“It’s time,” Hestia said, slamming the
2020-04-11 14:28:29 +0000 UTC View PostThis was a date. I was almost completely certain of it. If it was some kind of emergency or urgent revelation about the origin of my powers, then she would have left more than one text, or set up the meeting someplace other than an admittedly good coffee shop. All the signs pointed to this being ...
2020-04-08 14:58:24 +0000 UTC View PostHinata was reasonably certain that Neo, if that was her real name, didn't actually know how to drive. They blasted down the roads much faster than when Nero was behind the wheel. She refused to touch the stick that alerted other drivers that she was changing lanes in favor of weaving around cars,...
2020-04-08 14:58:17 +0000 UTC View Post"Nero, we- ahh…! We should, hm, practice with you abilityyyyyyy!!" Hinata moaned, her walls clamping down on me as I thrust into her, milking me for a reward that was stolen by a thin piece of rubber. Despite her words, she shoved her hips back, trying to take me even deeper. Her body was slick...
2020-04-08 14:58:09 +0000 UTC View Post"Is that home?" Elery asked, jabbing a finger in the direction of Planet Vegeta. It might have been about six years since I’ve last seen it, but I still recalled what it looked like with ease. It hadn’t changed at all during the last six years -- the same lush green colors, the oceans were a ...
2020-04-06 14:51:00 +0000 UTC View PostMy scouter was ridiculous. I looked ridiculous. It covered the upper half of my face, including my nose, leaving only a small portion of my forehead near my hairline visible. My lock of hair that drifted downward seemed to separate the blood red visor that hid my eyes from view, both of my ears w...
2020-04-06 14:50:55 +0000 UTC View PostI dropped the mangled corpse of Zanis and took in a deep breath of air, the smell of blood so thick in the small room that I could practically taste it. Whoever said that vengeance was unfulfilling was an idiot. Satisfaction filled me as I leaned over, picking up the sword that Zanis dropped befo...
2020-04-04 14:51:54 +0000 UTC View Post“It’s time,” Hestia said, slamming the lid down on a case hard enough that the sound echoed in the room. Behind the lid stood Hephusteus, exhausted but she had an afterglow that Hestia learned to recognize. Though it was usually after she and Jericho made love but to each their own. Her fri...
2020-04-04 14:51:38 +0000 UTC View Post“Will it be enough?” I asked, looking down at the slip of paper in my hands, several windows arranged around me. All of them filled with important decisions that could influence how the battle went down. Because, after a week of hellish training, the time had come. Tomorrow morning, at noon, ...
2020-04-04 14:51:21 +0000 UTC View Post