Finally finished. Wasn't helped that my stupid computer started a stupid update when i was almost done, but it's done now, so there's that.
That said, I'm almost 100% certain I hate almost everything about this chapter, and may actually rewrite it or even scrap it altogether. Dun...
2018-07-17 00:02:48 +0000 UTC View PostSorry.
BTW, do you guys want me to actually post I'm gonna be late, or you just happy to leave it be and let the chapter come whenever?
2018-07-15 20:19:03 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1WbHFZ6Brffs_dutf70E-t-RuYMUJDSd_8LTItp-iM2o/edit?usp=sharing
Time to wake sweet child, the day waits for no one. 2018-07-12 23:40:08 +0000 UTC View Post
Sorry for late ch, no internets :'(
Here it is tho.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jJcmrEwRuMNYqoYwo2y3-mSbtCVO-ZmIJEMBDTAX-R4/edit?usp=...
2018-07-11 00:32:46 +0000 UTC View Postending is rushed and badly written, but it gets the point across.
And to think, i was THIS close getting the patreon ch out alongside the regular one... SO close... :'(
This ch only covered half of what i wanted, so I might extend it if the rest isn't enough for another chapter. We'll see.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MB3JMv0n5hgfYO-i3gmXS1cI8lKSOJzsZsie13CGZPU/edit?usp=sharing
As the Bekhai Khishigs marched out to surroun...
2018-07-04 16:17:29 +0000 UTC View Postsorry. Ate too much meat and having trouble finding my focus. Dbl srry considering it such a big cliff and long time, but such is life.
My bad. I am not a good boy. Sadface.
2018-07-03 19:58:39 +0000 UTC View PostRushed the ending a little, will flesh it out, but POKER CALLS so fuck all yall.
Sorry. I just love gambling so much...
K enjoy.
Ch 346 will come tomorrow probably, but saturday at the latest for sure.
Maybe.
Cuz you know... I might get hit by a bus or sth. Who knows.
2018-06-28 21:21:59 +0000 UTC View PostThe ending is still up for debate. I might add more or I might leave it as is. dunno, but I'm out of time today, so here it is. Enjoy,.
Hi. I'm back. Check the chapter on RR for pictures and update :D
Also, considering it's the 24th and the month is almost over, I realize it's not fair to you all. If anyone wants a refund for the month, message me and i'll try to make that happen, either through patreon or paypal...
2018-06-24 19:55:15 +0000 UTC View Postmore polished and with an ending, but no meme and way too long. dunno wat I'll do about that, but meh.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJ9mibSv-YY8upWz...
2018-06-13 18:02:54 +0000 UTC View PostDidn't round out the conclusion, but time is up. Will finish when err... well, I feel like it, pretty much. So yea. Enjoy
Scrapped my original plan, which was for a parade through the city (Rain's idea to save money) to show LuoLuo off while they go visit his parents. Once there, he'd be told he had to throw a banquet anyways, and sadness ensues, but Sarnai smacks him upside the head. Felt it was stupid halfway ...
2018-05-31 15:40:10 +0000 UTC View PostThe costs of Rain's retinue needs adjusting, and I'm probably going to cut the whole explanation about numbers out, and just leave LuoLuo's reactions, giving me more room to work with. Gonna go walk do and look at it again, but enjoy for now.
Author's note: Tentative ending on the ch. It feels like not much happened and I'm not too happy about it, but I wanted to have Mila's thoughts on the whole matter aired out and that took most of the chapter. I hafta do some actual work now, so that's it for today, but I might add more later on.<...
2018-05-28 16:17:07 +0000 UTC View Post
Sorry, late chapter. will be up tomorrow, like, 16-24 hours from time of this post. i considered posting an unfinished one, but a vote on discord turned that idea down, so if you sad, join discord and never leave so this doesn't happen again.
2018-05-27 20:14:39 +0000 UTC View PostSo I'm not gonna lie, I didn't really do anything about all your comments. Yea rain seems mean, but like... he thinks Luo-Luo's a spy. He's not gonna be all kind and sweet. I still did some rewriting, because the original ch did not convey the tone i wanted or really get to the points i wante...
2018-05-25 15:42:03 +0000 UTC View PostNot entirely content with this. May make sweeping changes. we'll see.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17H7uLXwoTz6Oo8djBs7Lv0j6Cd3DIZR7LnfNVZFyLHk/edit?us...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15ser32KqiB2HItJOnj46ORuwGxbrDEIeL6nkliG66ms/edit?usp=sharing
In the last twenty-four hours, Ive been forc...
2018-05-22 20:24:03 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1ygj2Y6BPCKeDkvV7E1wFZMAKIKMMeT2EETgJmasRk7c/edit?usp=sharing
Hands trembling and jaw clenched, Luo-Luo smooth...
2018-05-18 18:14:21 +0000 UTC View PostSorry, my brain already in vacation mode, plus the chapter harder to write than expected and I have a dinner thing to get to. Maybe I'll finish by tonight, but tomorrow for sure.
2018-05-17 21:40:24 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1SEkoHy6iSVUPvDvyBLbC3ljg4Ghrjvecvxk2ASyoUI4/edit?usp=sharing
I finally did it.
Gazing out over the crowd, I soak i...
2018-05-15 23:04:46 +0000 UTC View Post
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z1aiJjn_tvvPQvrefZBw6-4WNeJsdQO-fz5UA_OAr1I/edit?usp=sharing
Might change the ending. Dunno.
...
2018-05-13 21:03:51 +0000 UTC View PostThe ending is a little lacklustre atm, mostly because my original plan is gonna be way too long. I'll write the rest of it and see if i can find a nicer place to end, (or nicer way), and we'll do that.
2018-05-10 21:18:48 +0000 UTC
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Sorry had to do it. Alrighty, enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A2OYkvcwWp7IqqO5aquO9RIn-ZQs6BKgu8JdgO1WTcI/edit?usp=sharing 2018-05-08 20:09:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Because I released a double chapter on RR, so check that out. Will have another chapter here on tues (which won't be on RR until thursday), then advanced chapter back on thursday.
2018-05-06 20:01:51 +0000 UTC View PostBasking in the spotlight, I ride onto the docks with head held high and chest out, playing my role of Number One Talent in the North to perfection. I thought Id be nervous with all the attention, but on the contrary, I feel invigorated and excited knowing millions of eyes are watching me as...
2018-05-04 20:00:56 +0000 UTC View PostThis one's a doozy. I literally wrote like 5k words, but cut out 800 for ch 333. I might take more from this ch and move it to 333, because holy shit 4200 words is too much.
And that's pre edit. Usually it gets longer when I add in flavour and stuff.
k. it's 9:20...
2018-05-04 01:19:54 +0000 UTC View Post