Tentative cuz I'm considering scrapping this whole chapter and writing it from a different PoV, because a lot of the first half doesn't really matter and the end bits would fit better in a different PoV. Dunno. I'll look at this again with fresh eyes and see if I can salvage, but if not, then we'...
2019-06-09 21:30:35 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1NGNO1s7xZnxKLDcaZgm7k0y997DcgImkXkDQeV-gGcQ/edit?usp=sharing
Legs trembling and muscles burning, I g...
2019-06-06 23:18:52 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q5bmKlD_qfiLtxUG6jZDm9xfzW8l4G0vWUM3thNF31Q/edit?usp=sharing
The strong rule, and the weak s...
2019-06-04 20:21:15 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1uevWbyGF0R4DQeRx8P-Iv4WfPaCz8B5aA2oX4PqCY24/edit?usp=sharing
Parrying the Defiled weapon aside, Mil...
2019-06-02 21:57:27 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDndVzW044nMS3Ep1JI3sziJjjgSmi5BdpUvPNu0Kh4/edit?usp=sharing
Mama Bun, Mama Bun, Oh Mama Mam...
2019-05-30 21:20:06 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1mjhDhJyJaWQrqTXgQPUQ96fKuRZN8gvdubA7pvckG8c/edit?usp=sharing
Lip curled in a contemptuous ...
2019-05-29 00:37:23 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1Cy0Kgiocx5zRsKWcMho0Am35lchZZJmjfE13S9aPRZA/edit?usp=sharing
Neatly stacking the last sheaf of d...
2019-05-26 23:53:14 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nz3yqIn4s1oh2199Omcajclsnc32LER8a1xFFHUnhjE/edit?usp=sharing
Careful not to wake the snoring bunnies, Song ...
2019-05-23 23:53:05 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/18zdIy3pDrC-LckhigaRcdKGG5-9YLksBSacSLqaamkY/edit?usp=sharing
Fingers curled around her porcelain teacup, ...
2019-05-21 23:46:14 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1aeW0cZZnm9i51gWfBY_GOqc6l7ROYkAODMl4m1dTyVc/edit?usp=sharing
They say your life flashes before your eye...
2019-05-16 22:27:10 +0000 UTC View PostBig Cliff. Like the biggest. Yuge. Never written a bigger cliff before. You have been warned.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dk9NTV...
2019-05-14 23:57:22 +0000 UTC View Post
So last chapter, I totally responded to a comment about how the duel wouldn't take all chapter and would totes be boring if it did today.
Cough cough.
Me and my big mouth. I need to learn how to estimate word count.
Anywho, I updated all the ...
2019-05-12 19:10:40 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1h2GdH23JXG5SksKZHHY-24aQrXwcCa70Zqxmn36VDVo/edit?usp=sharing
So engrossed in watching the battle be...
2019-05-09 23:44:45 +0000 UTC View PostIt's Victoria day weekend, so I'm gonna take Sunday off. The next chapter will be on tuesday the 21st.
Enjoy
https://docs.google.com/docu...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VyCU4Seq0EnR-qdaoeSfM360h3T7Rpn24Sxu233Rj-Y/edit?usp=sharing
The sun shone brightly overhead as Zian backe...
2019-05-05 23:56:08 +0000 UTC View PostTried for a commanders view of a battle rather than the zoomed in focus of one of the lower ranked officers. Lemme know your thoughts, as I don't do this often and am still unsure of the effectiveness. Especially time, that's a tough one to show while commanding battles, and i couldnt find more p...
2019-05-02 23:02:28 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1E-_ZguAgzzKBIRy-TSaGPp9KptsLYO4lv0z72pMt1Do/edit?usp=sharing
Mister Rustram, command of the camp is yours.<...
2019-04-30 23:54:15 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1F5wJzseuVnSxvLOcQkWvkpprR3EmVlyHdX6-e3uTAds/edit?usp=sharing
Though travelling by Cloud-Stepping sa...
2019-04-28 23:27:38 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1ANcrfvtQXbrOqKvwXC_LN4iWbbM-riqec1jfNXzhxqk/edit?usp=sharing
With his map laid out before him, Chen Hongji ...
2019-04-25 21:36:21 +0000 UTC View PostNot super happy with this chapter, as I don't like having a bunch of short PoVs, but I couldn't think of a better way to do all this. Time's passing, things are happening, and I have a clear point I want volume to end on, so hopefully, it's all worth in the end.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cJf8aUcp3VqrNpohcyhDLImwKHb0VKlRUGItwRl45Eo/edit?usp=sharing
Well... Thats less than ideal.
An unde...
2019-04-22 17:19:38 +0000 UTC View PostSorry about this, but I forgot I have an Easter dinner to go to and didn't leave myself enough time to finish before hand. The chapter will be out tomorrow, and since I won't have work, I should be able to get 453 out on time on tuesday.
But err.. yea. Apologies, but Happy Easter...
2019-04-21 17:34:05 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1RA87xdMZEvrhmcks34bpZC3yBv0b70xTzhavo5-FdAY/edit?usp=sharing
Situ Jia Zian, a mortal ...
2019-04-19 02:07:58 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1jrgdVc5EBBPqsIoQ49Y67McILiRqPSBQW5i6VxC4Qrc/edit?usp=sharing
While going through my daily stack of letters and reports...
2019-04-17 00:01:13 +0000 UTC View PostLittler shorter than normal, but actually a reasonable length to write. If only I could keep all chapters at this length....
Edit: Made some changes and added some details I forgot to first time around. Nothing huge, but the details needed adding.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZmhyTyyc6y2j1DvYd4kGgHGtgmNoYjU2-aQOteHV7d0/edit?usp=sharing
Humans are not rational creatures.
All ...
2019-04-11 22:32:37 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1G5_AzBA7Xw2yf640cMMu8MhAMDRPylAwNHdODl-MldE/edit?usp=sharing
Lifting Peace into my trembling hands, I hold...
2019-04-09 23:53:00 +0000 UTC View PostI forgot to mention last chapter, but after writing this one, I switched the chapter orders. This used to be chapter 445, and 445 was 446, and I switched the order around, which is why the Patreon comments don't make sense. Anywho, small thing, but yea. Here it is early, because I derped and rele...
2019-04-07 19:38:06 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1GqGN2kmspwxGlL2zOZPXeJktLXrsUmg0b7eOEOb6duc/edit?usp=sharing
There's been triaaaaaals and tribulations,
...
2019-04-05 00:01:00 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/10OkuBRWHZeXUPAOnIOVm2-ntGqNJifLl5k2uzWDBXvU/edit?usp=sharing
Stifling a yawn as she stepped out of her tent, ...
2019-04-03 00:00:59 +0000 UTC View Post