Hey guys, I need your opinion: (spoiler here alert)
I read some thoughts on Webnovel, and I do agree that Jake is too young, but I don't want to rewrite some of the future chapters.
I'm thinking of changing Jake's initial age (a time skip would be messier):
10 â...
2025-04-12 00:28:02 +0000 UTC
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The crowd grew as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting golden light across the waves. Tiki torches flickered to life, and the beachside restaurant buzzed with chatter and anticipation. A local MC stepped up to the mic and welcomed everyone with a bright smile.
âLadies and gentlemen, ...
2025-04-11 19:21:43 +0000 UTC
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There was a long pause after Joeyâs words. Even Uncle Charlie, who usually had something witty to say, stayed quiet for a moment.
Rachel reached out and patted Joey on the arm. âIâm sorry, Joey. That sucks.â
Joey let out a slow sigh. âThe worst part? Sheâs with Ross now.â...
2025-04-10 22:27:03 +0000 UTC
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We all stood frozen by the door, watching the rain slam against the windows like an angry tide. Rachel let out an exasperated sigh and threw her hands up.
âI swear, this island has a personal vendetta against fun,â she muttered.
Charlie stepped back from the door, shaking his head...
2025-04-09 21:04:03 +0000 UTC
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Just then, Rachel and Charlie strolled into the pool area, each with a drink in hand. Rachel immediately stopped when she saw the group in various states of laughterâChandler wiping tears, Phoebe still giggling uncontrollably, Monica leaning into Chandler to stay upright.
Rachel blinked, ...
2025-04-08 19:10:46 +0000 UTC
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The rain finally slowed down the next morningânot stopped, just downgraded from apocalyptic to mildly miserable. I took it as a win.
Breakfast was served in the resortâs ocean-view dining hall, though the âocean viewâ looked more like a gray smudge today. Alan, Grandma Evelyn, and m...
2025-04-07 14:43:11 +0000 UTC
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My eyes were twisting. It was already the third dayâand it hadnât stopped raining.
Not once.
Tropical storm? Bad luck? Friends? Or maybe the universe was just mocking me for ever thinking this would be a smooth, relaxing vacation.
Through the foggy balcony doors, I could bar...
2025-04-06 05:57:27 +0000 UTC
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The boarding announcement echoed over the speakers, and our group began to move forward. We were among the first to board, thanks to Evelynâs insistence on flying first class. No complaints from me. The seats were wide, the legroom endless, and the cabin looked like something out of a luxury ca...
2025-04-04 10:30:19 +0000 UTC
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After the chaos on the plane and whatever emotional tornado Rory was currently riding back to Stars Hollow, things felt a bit calmer on our end. We were back to enjoying our final days in New York City.
The next morning, we all headed out to explore more of Manhattan. Evelyn had taken the l...
2025-04-04 10:28:03 +0000 UTC
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After the applause finally died down, Charlie paid the bill and turned to us with a grin. âLorelai and I are going to take a little walk,â he said casually. âThis place stays open late, and the nightâs still young.â
I gave him a knowing nod. âHave fun.â
Rory and I found ...
2025-04-04 02:46:08 +0000 UTC
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Later that evening, the four of us sat around a candlelit table at a cozy bistro not far from the hotel (Uncle Charlie wants us to eat somewhere elseâapparently, he knows a better place). Conversation flowed easily. Lorelai and Charlie were practically trading punchlines, their energy bouncing ...
2025-04-03 01:25:56 +0000 UTC
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The day of the trip finally arrived. The house buzzed with a kind of chaotic energy as everyone scrambled to get ready. Suitcases were being zipped shut, passports double-checked.
I was the first one fully packed and dressed, sitting on the couch with my backpack already slung over my shoul...
2025-04-02 01:12:09 +0000 UTC
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As the applause settled, a small group of girls from my class came rushing over.
âThat was so cool, Jake!â one of them said, eyes wide with admiration.
âYeah, you sang like a real pop star,â added another, practically glowing.
I gave a small nod and a polite smile, but u...
2025-04-02 01:11:19 +0000 UTC
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Charlie stepped into the room with the energy of a man pretending he was anywhere else. The moment he saw the crowd of kids packed into the music room, his grin faltered into a tight, nervous smile.
âWow,â he muttered. âSo many small humans in one place. This is... fine.â
He c...
2025-04-02 01:09:55 +0000 UTC
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The next day, Charlie sat at the piano, singing with all the enthusiasm he could musterâwhich, frankly, wasnât much.
âȘ Manpower, horsepower, coal and steam Moving forward the American dream Electric, atomic, solar too All this energy for me and you. âȘ
I frowned. What the hell ...
2025-04-02 01:07:44 +0000 UTC
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After the impromptu demolition of the old TV, the smoke still lingering in the air, we stood in awkward silence for a beat. George looked way too pleased with himself. Erica was pretending like she hadnât just been caught kissing him, and Missy? She looked like she was trying to decide whether ...
2025-04-02 01:06:58 +0000 UTC
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Sheldon froze at my words, blinking rapidly.
âExcuse me,â he said, genuinely offended. âThere is a fundamental contradiction in the phrase âmost intelligent dumbass.â Itâs a paradox. You cannot logically be both simultaneously.â
I turned toward Paige and shrugged. âSee...
2025-04-01 23:48:40 +0000 UTC
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After everything with Dr. Linda, I knew it was time. So, I made it official: I was skipping to ninth grade, the start of high school. No more fourth grade, no more noisy brats.
To celebrate, we had dinner outâsomeplace fancy enough that Alan needed to put on an actual blazer. He kept fidg...
2025-04-01 23:44:26 +0000 UTC
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I leaned back slightly. âWhat I really love is economicsâespecially finance and investment. Not the theoretical stuff. I love studying markets. I love investing. And, ironically... Iâm already the best in the world.â
Dr. Freeman raised an eyebrow, clearly intrigued.
I gave a s...
2025-04-01 23:40:35 +0000 UTC
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I shifted slightly in my seat, letting her words settle in the silence. Then I said, âI'm not so sure I can agree with you. I donât think Iâm an empathetic person.â
Dr. Freeman tilted her head, letting me continue without interruption.
âMost of the time, I despise weakness. ...
2025-04-01 23:37:46 +0000 UTC
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We were finally back in Malibu.
As great as London had beenâbridal escapes, awkward dinners, Friends episodes, and luxury hotel suitesânothing beat the comfort of being home. The ocean breeze was familiar again, and so was the sight of Charlie passed out on the patio chair with sunglass...
2025-04-01 20:13:28 +0000 UTC
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